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The Island – Chapter 6
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Alice couldn’t believe how excited she was for the evening to arrive. She had several meetings before she could call it a day and, for the first time in forever, had problems concentrating. Her mind was filled with images of Dana and those amazing blue eyes.
At the end of the day she requested a dinner for two be delivered to her suite. She showered and dressed carefully. She wanted to look attractive, but, not too fancy.
Dana did not show up at 7. Or 7:15. Or 7:30. Alice asked Harrison to check on her whereabouts. It was an innocent query of concern that set off an interesting chain of events.
There was finally a knock on her door just before 8. At the command to enter, the French doors opened and Harrison entered. Alice could read her friend like a book and realized that she was not going to like whatever was coming through the door next.
Two male guards entered the room with each of them holding one of Dana’s forearms. They had to carry her into the room since she was apparently hogtied. Alice took a close look at the guards and noticed what looked like several fresh scratches and bruises. The guards lowered Dana to the floor and then the two men stepped back.
Dana was beyond furious. Most of it was directed at herself. She was trying very hard to stay focused and not let the anger make her do something stupid. She had already exceeded her allotment of stupidity when she tried to take on these walking mountains. She kept her head lowered and prayed she would make it through the night.
Alice raised an eyebrow at Harrison and walked into her sitting room of the suite for some privacy. Harrison followed as Alice expected him to.
She crossed her arms and waited for an explanation.
“Sorry, Al… I notified the senior guards to have her report here immediately. She had left for a run shortly before 7. Guards were sent out to find her and they surprised her. There was a confrontation and…the instructions to the guards did not leave any leeway, so… Uh… Apparently she had no intention to come up and see you this evening.”
“What!?!” Alice didn’t know whether to be insulted or amused. She ended up being intrigued.
“Say the word and she will be off the island in 15 minutes.”
Alice looked back through the doorway at Dana. She was still where she had been left and seemed to be slowly getting her breathing under control. She had on a tank top and running shorts. She was covered in sweat and her veins were popping everywhere.
Alice cleared her throat and attempted to regain her composure before she asked “She took on two guards?”
“Three guards.” Alice’s eyes nearly fell out of her head. Harrison said quickly “In their defense, she was surprised and the guards knew not to hurt her. But she did send one of them to the infirmary. Another guard was finally able to get behind her and subdue her.”
“Where?”
“It happened on one of the running paths. Only the three guards were involved.”
“Were the restraints strictly necessary?” Alice asked seriously. She had to think Dana was less than pleased with her right now. This wasn’t how she wanted their relationship — wherever form it might take — to start.
“The guards already had them on when I got there.” Harrison’s lips started to twitch — betraying the humor he found in the situation. “I…uh…I decided it might be interesting to keep them on.”
“Ass.” Alice mumbled and shook her head. What a rotten time for Harrison’s weird sense of humor to make an appearance. She just wondered how long it would take after he left for him to break out laughing. Alice herself gave a shaky exhale of a laugh and rubbed her hand over her face. “Why didn’t she want to come and see me?” Alice asked, almost rhetorically.
“I asked Sam. She heard around the guardhouse that some of the girls were giving her grief over coming to see you tonight. No specifics, though. She is still digging.”
“Let me guess. Gabby.” They both knew that any difficulty in the woman’s guard usually started with her. They stood in silence for a few more seconds.
“What now, boss?”
“I guess I have dinner with a very reluctant date. Give me the keys to the cuffs and clear out.”
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Wow, what can I say to this twist of event. D taking on 3 guards, this calls for a Darth Vader speaking to Luke Skywalker, “impressive, young one!” I don’t know how you can turn this situation around, very intriguing. Nonetheless, it looked like A had already made up her mind and hopefully D could see beyond the evil Gabby plot. This story is getting better by the chapter. Thank you very much MaGoose. btw, please do not feel pressured posting daily. I would hate to see you getting burnt out. It happens and you know it. Remember last September with another writer? I am positive that we all can wait patiently for your next post. Now go back to your desk and start writing, Just kidding!
MaGoose you have a wicked imagination and a wonderful sense of humour in this story – well up to your usual standard and beautifully written. More please and soon.
I totally agree with belisimo 100%!!! U really are a GREAT writer MG,and I love the way u are going with this!! Please Post soon!!!!
Ok, love the direction and the @%$ whooping Dana put on the guards, i wonder if Alice is going to use those keys? I wouldnt! Seriously, MaGoose i really liked the direction this is headed. Just as HD stated earlier, dont feel pressured *sorry* to post when you are not ready. Keep your deadlines for yourself. Loved the update and i’ll be waiting as patiently as possible, Thanks for this excellent chapter to an interesting story!
Hey of course I’m here, I just don’t know what to say but I really really am liking this. You’ve always captured my sole attention when I read a chapter. But still I’m leaving one just to let ya know I heart ya and stuff. I especially liked Dana not wanting to be on the date despite her having a few scratches and a bruise for Alice’s ego. Keep it up girl, you’s awesome.
HAHAHAHA .. :| Cant believe u left us hanging like tht!!! lol. Seriously thou i loved this chapter so funny lmao. Thnk god they knew the it was Gabby the ahole tht caused Dana to try and skip dinner. Reli now can not wait for the actual dinner to happen and see where this all goes :) Love it x x
kick ass chapter…literaly :D…(Lucy, you got some explaiiiin’ to do)Glad Al figured it out about Gabby, looking forward to see how she handles this.
haha! I have to admit, this is so AU I’m having a little trouble following, but it’s all great fun. Let’s hope Dana’s not too incredibly upset to have dinner, lol.
wow what can I say that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next but I can see that gabbey could go soon and she will not like that but I feel there is still some drama while she is still around pps great update I love it
Too short dude. Hahaha. No this was hilarious. I love it. PPS! AND LONGER CHAPS!!! NEED MORE DANISH!
lol…this was too funny!!! Dana is so sweet. What was she thinking (was she thinking at all)? She goes for a run hoping that somehow Alice gets a head injury or something and forgets about dinner, or what? And then, taking on those poor guards who were only there to find her? rotflmao!!! Lucky that Al figured out about Gabby and that she finds this whole situation funny, or else, Dana would probably be out of her job by now. Love the story so much!!! Can’t wait for dinner, it should be interesting and fun!!!
WOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFF!!! Alice has a long way to make Dane hers. Dana is seriously scared and not gonna give in to Gabby’s-version-of-immorality of the boss. a;sldkjb;oaifj;oagkjw;lk Comm’on, man, Dana the hulk can take everybody down. lol Alice better be careful with her alone.
Excellent Chapter. When I read the summary line on the list page I was totally like WTF? Who did Dana bring to dinner with her? Rock on. It is going to be interesting when Alice uncuffs Dana. Dana is obviously upset at the whole situation AND she probably does not want to get fired from a job she excells at and loves. I echo the above comments… take your time with the post they are definately worth the wait. Take care! -A
WOOT DANA IS ALREADY TIED UP AND READY TO GO…Wait sorry. I got a little ahead of my self there. Anyway. I love you goose way to write babe
first K.U. wins us a title, and then I come home to see this on my computer. Gotta say I loved it. Nice job… As for Dana being tied up….10x’s better
Hello Goose… wow… wow… wow… I’m retiring… that’s it hanging up my hat… that was freaking amazing… this story if I might be so bold is my favorite so far… and well you now how much I loved your last one… hmmmmm… this whole situation with Dana is just freaking awesome… lovin it… completely… three guards… well I guess Dana had her spinach… hehe… hmmmmm… and well I would so love to see Alice step in during one of their next training exercises and well show Gabby and Nadia just who’s boss :P… keep on rocking it out my friend, Hugs, JC (PS – here are some stars for you *****************)