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The Hunted 16
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Bette walked briskly into the interview room and slammed the file that she had in her hands down onto the table. Glaring at Eric who was sat with his lawyer on the other side of the table, she motioned to Alice to press play on the cassette recorder.
"Mr Martin, you are charged with the attempted murders of Tina Kennard, Agent Alice Piezecki and Agent Bette Porter. Do you understand?" she asked him coldly.
Eric nodded.
"For the benefit of the tape, the suspect has nodded. Mr Martin, do you admit the charge?"
"Yes" he said quietly "but it’s not what you think"
"Explain" Bette sat down.
"You never where friends with Tina in the past, were you?" Eric asked.
"I ask the questions here, not you. Now explain what you meant"
"I…I had so many debts. And I couldn’t tell anyone. I had to find a way of clearing them"
"And money matters so much that you were willing to kill the woman you love?" Bette asked bitterly.
"The love went out of our relationship a long time ago"
Bette picked up a pen and started playing with it, trying to distract herself from the desire to punch this man in the face "But surely you realise that you wouldn’t benefit financially from Miss Kennard’s death? She wouldn’t leave anything to you"
An angry look crept across Eric’s face "Of course I know. Even after everything I did for her, the bitch wouldn’t have left me a cent"
"Then explain to me how exactly you were going to clear these debts that you speak of"
"Look" Eric leaned in "I don’t expect you to understand. But when you’re in my situation, you get desperate. And then someone makes an offer you can’t refuse"
"What kind of offer?" Bette asked hesitantly.
"Half a million dollars" Eric smiled wryly.
"What?" the shock registered on Bette’s face.
"She offered me half a million dollars to kill Tina. Half upfront, the other half when I finished the job. Only you" he glared at Bette "seem to have interrupted that, haven’t you?"
"Who?"
Eric smiled and leant back in his chair with folded arms.
"Eric you tell me right now, who paid you to kill Tina?"
The coldness of Bette’s eyes combined with the sharpness of her voice caused Eric to fidget uncomfortably.
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Awww.. that was sooo sweet! and don’t worry about the legal stuff.. i don’t know that much about it too!! please, even now that the suspect was discovered… keep posting? please?
How will Peggy feel. this is her daughter?? That was so sweet Porter to the rescue. thanks
yeah bette to the rescue!!! oh boy what will peggy think? will bette quit her job to be with tina???
Great post. Thank you. ‘Legal stuff’ sounds fine to me,but what do I know?
These two sentences next to each other made me laugh: “…please come quick” she stammered. Helena continued to struggle under Bette…” Oh my! ;-)
i hope it’s not the end
Hey Baby, What tension and drama from this latest chapter. I was on tenderhooks as Bette moved towards Tina and Helena. Shame that Peggy was so blind to her daugther’s murderous intent. Bette was brilliant in disarming Helena and rescuing her lover. This really brought home the love between these gals. I do hope that Bette and Tina make a real go of their relationship now that Helena is out of the picture. Good to see the rest of the gang there to assist Bette. Loved it. More please. Many thanks for this creacking tale. Your Loyal Fan.
Whew, you had me stressing! I am glad that Bette got there in time to save Tina. I hope Peggy will understand what happened and let Bette and Tina’s relationship go.
That was freaking awesome and love the way Bette recue Tina and kick Helena’s ass, poor Peggy. B&T are sweet and now let see some B&T love coming. Please post more, thanks!