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The Island – Chapter 8
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Dana had the afternoon off and was taking a long hike through the hills around the compound. She adored the island. It was relatively small, but, there were so many places to explore. She never saw anyone on these hikes. The other guards preferred to stay at the barracks or head to town when they had time off. Dana liked being alone. It gave her time to think.
Her thoughts today were all centered on a certain blonde that seemed to have completely infused Dana’s mind. It had been several days since her “date” with Alice. She was still trying to process all the feelings that were churned up by that evening.
Nadia and Gabby had tried everything they could think of to get from Dana what happened during her encounter with Alice. Dana wouldn’t have told them anything anyway, but, loved how her not saying anything was driving the two women nuts.
Dana slowly became aware of a smell that was getting stronger as she continued down a particular path. It was smoke. She sped up a bit, following her nose, to investigate. She burst into a clearing and saw another woman sitting on the roots of an old tree. She was around Dana’s age with carefully messed hair and dark clothes who was smoking a cigarette.
“Geez, dude, you scared the shit out of me.” The stranger said.
“I’m sorry. I smelled the smoke…” Dana felt more than a little stupid and turned to leave.
“Hey! You can stick around, if you want. I don’t get many visitors up here.” The other woman said with a welcoming smile. “I’ve got some water and food.”
“No, thanks. I have my own.” Dana struggled inwardly for a few minutes. She generally kept to herself, but, found something very comforting in this stranger. She decided to take a chance.
She sat down across from the other woman and held out her hand. “Dana Fairbanks.” Dana thought she saw a flash of recognition in the other woman’s eyes, but, it quickly left. With a slight grin, the other woman held out her hand and said “Shane. Shane McCutcheon.”
Shit! Dana thought as she immediately got to her feet and stood at attention. The pictures she had seen of Shane in training must have been old. Dana couldn’t believe she messed up with both Alice and Shane. All she had to do was kick Harrison in the balls or something and she would have a trifecta.
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Okay. I so freaking love you and this story. All about the Shana stuff going on with the friend deals and Shane being so protective of Al but loving Dana right off the bat. I mean who won’t love her. Sorry my dorkdum is running around again. I love the whole ‘i only make gabby do it’ that was classically funny. Gabby needs to die. Keep up the great work.
Oh i see how it’s going to be MaGoose! HA HA..look *who finally decided to post* LMAO! Does this mean commenting war? jk I really like the fact that Dana and Shane are talking because i think Shane is going to play a vital role as always with these two. I really would like to see Al let Dana take Gabby, PRETTY PLEASE! LoL I’m lOvInG the direction that you are taking this and i really can barely stand myself in between your postings! Love you Goose, excellent update!
Begining of alshadane,wooohoooo,im doing the dash dance!!! Sammysgril wanted me to say she is not dead and she loved the update!!!!! Thanks for the update and pps
My brain is not functioning too well this afternoon after a night of partying resulting in a hangover that is. The comments above have pretty much covered my reaction to this wonderful chapter. darkhawkdown1 said it, “brilliant”. It was “the beginning of a beautiful friendship” between D & S. And love to join ILUVLEISHA for some “Dash dance” too. I also second what s_bicon said about D being all “goofy and cute.” And “sound very grade school… trade,” lol. MaGoose another superb job of setting up this highly anticipated story. Thank you.
Most excellant chapter MaGoose…Dana stood at attention so fast I thought she would have tripped over her own feet, loved how Shane only makes Gabby stand. The interaction between them was wicked cool, the lunch trading was too cute and could totally picture them doing it…can’t wait for more!!!!
Yey, baby!!!! Magoose is here!!!!! So Dana and Shane met. That’s right, mama Shane hen watches over her chick Alice. :) I’m so glad Shane likes Dana. I mean, of course, they’re like best friends, hee hee. I’m glad that Alice is totally smitten with Dana. Dana needs to take some moves, yeah-…. lol Get rid of Gabby! Did I say I liked Gabby? I don’t like manipulative Gabby, who just takes advantage of Alice :( So sad Shane couldn’t get rid of her. (man I sound so hateful…) Anyway, great post! Now Danish needs to advance, tadah! :) PPS love your work!
Yay! It’s no secret that I love Shane, and yours is cute as all hell. So’s your Dana, but you already knew I thought this. Haha, I have absolutely nothing constructive to say aside from i.heart.this. and you rock quite a bit too.
Great Shane/Dana interaction. I think it is so cute that Alice tried to get Shane to analyze her “date” with Dana. It was just another solid chapter. keep up the good work.
You certainly don’t make me feel bad about my comments. I just get embarrassed about some of them after it’s already posted, I tend to do that some times. . just like what I’m doing now blabbing and stuff… So yeah, uh, if the last chapter was somewhat hard, it really didn’t come off like it. You wrote it like it seemed was the easiest thing to do. The flow was very nice. I love Dana and Shane, always have. hehe I always thought of Dana to be polite and well mannered as well as goofy and cute. In other words, very attractive. loved the Devaux part, would love more to see he suffer *evil laugh* yeah. Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to more. x
Heya Ma! Good stuff. I enjoy the bond that Shane and Alice share. It’s real, and intense. As for Dana being Alice’s type..OHHHH YEAHHHHH couldn’t agree more. Oh, and I loved the PB&J on white part. I could just see Dana’s initial discomfort there. More soon!
Hello MG… booyaa see that got your own to letter thing going on there… hehe… first thank you not only for the congrats but also your continued support… super duper appreciated… as for the story… I absolutely love Shane here… it is just so perfect how these two migrated towards one another… I love how you have Shane all internal monologue and stuff… it really is how she really seems… always thinking internally waiting for the right moment to speak and have an impact… completely brilliant… awesome… amazing… Keep on Rocking my friend, JC
Well, apparently, I am doing this thing where I comment every other chapter. lol. Sorry I missed the last one. It’s always fun to catch up tho! This was great and I can’t wait to see what happens next! I loved the line where Shane mentions making Gabby salute her. That was too funny. lol. Anyway, keep it up and PPS!!!
Favourite danish story at the moment – please update soon!