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goodnight story (Chapter 5 – final)
Previously…
With the complete, complex Bette standing before her, Tina was filled with a dual sense of power and protectiveness. She pressed her lips to Bette’s forehead.
“I love you.”
Tina’s hands found their way under the hem of Bette’s tanktop and lifted it over her head. She bent her head to nibble on Bette’s neck.
“I love you.” Tina repeated, her words buzzing against Bette’s jugular vein.
Bette left out a soft gasp of pleasure, and Tina moved her hands to the drawstring of Bette’s pants. The pants slipped down to join Tina’s robe at their feet.
Tina spoke again, pouring her words into Bette’s mouth now.
“I love you. I love you. I love you.”
And they tumbled into bed, falling endlessly into each other.
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Almost two hours later, they were still in bed, hair tousled, sheets tangled. Multiple orgasms had tired them, calmed the rush of passion to tenderness. But they didn’t want to stop touching each other. They lay naked and entwined, whispering onto each other’s skin.
Bette felt a burst of energy and kissed her way down Tina’s neck, licked between her breasts. Tina’s skin was salty with their mingled sweat. Bette laid her head on Tina’s abdomen, and listened to her lover’s blood pump. Then, above the muffled rhythm of Tina’s heart, a loud rumble of complaint from Tina’s stomach.
“You’re hungry.”
“Ravenous,” Tina admitted.
Bette slid back up to the head of the bed and took Tina in her arms. “That’s sexy, say it again.”
“I’m rrrrravenous Bette,” Tina played the bombshell, rolling the r and arching into Bette’s embrace. She bit Bette’s shoulder. “Feed me.”
Bette disentangled herself from Tina, laughing. “I made pizza,” she said, getting up from bed to find clothes. “Its been in the oven on warm this whole time. Hopefully it’s still edible.”
Tina moved to get up, but Bette shook her head. “No, you relax. I’ll get it, we can eat in here.”
Tina lay down again, curled around a pillow. “You never used to eat in bed. The crumbs.”
Bette loved the sight of Tina naked in her bed. Their bed.
“Fuck the crumbs.”
Tina noticed Bette’s eyes on her and stretched languorously, showing off. “You’ve turned into a wild woman. Can we have wine in the bedroom now too?”
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(56 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
AWWWW beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
The perfect end to a beautifully written story. If it weren’t for the fact that there are two more in the works, I’d be feeling quite bereft.
It’s late and i should be going to bed but i couldn’t leave without leaving a comment to your story. I loved it :o) It was sweet and hot and intense and heartfelt all at the same time, or better yet each of those things at exactly the right time :o) I really liked the way Bette told Tina about her day, being completely honest but managing to do it in a way that wouldn’t hurt Tina. Is it really the end? I wish you would do episode 12. But that’s me probably being greedy. Anyway, very well done. Thank you :D
I so loved your story!!! Thank you
A great story…sorry to see it end.
Rey this was such a wonderful story, beautifully told. I really hope you will write more, you certainly have an avid fan here!
This story was beautifully written and I enjoyed every word. Looking forward to your new words.
Rey, this was a very sweet story you have pulled together. When I saw you posted a fic with the “FINAL” chapter, it prompted me to go back and read it from Chapter 1. It was crafted with such tenderness. Loved it! Can’t wait to see more from you in the future. Thanks! C
That was a wonderful ending:)
Such a well done story. Like sabina, I loved how Bette found a way to come clean about what happened without hurting Tina, and that it seemed like something she needed to do. Also loved the mention of the stirfry! Too cute. So glad you’ll be writing more stories.
I loved this little story. It made what was on the show that much more bearable. I love my pizza hard and really cooked, like dead. People laugh at me because I like all my food really cooked, over cooked. I would have loved to have eaten Bette’s dried out pizza. Can’t wait to read more of your writings.
Enjoyed this story. Looking forward to your next one.
That was great. Looking forward to more of your stories.
AWE nice way to end it! :)
A beautiful ending to a brilliant story! I am glad you have more in the works or else I would be so very sad.
SOOOOOOOO WONDERFULLY AWESOME……you wowed me. your writing is beautiful rey..thank you
AMAZING! Loved your fic!! I was so mad they didn’t show that evening on the show!!! Thank you so much!!!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.
Loved every word of this, rey. I’m enormously pleased that you’ll be posting again. Thanks for such a wonderful story.
This was a wonderful story! I love your writing. I’m definitely looking forward to your next post.
sweet……
Perfect, I loved your story, it was heartfelt and emotional. Waiting for the next one, thank you so much.Have a great day
beautiful… loved this… please continue with more
very nice story. thanks for sharing.
SIGH SO BEAUTIFUL AND LOVING AND AWESOME AND IM SO EXCITED FOR I DONT KNOW WHY BUT I LOVE IT