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Two for the Road, Final
Lillian saw the doctor walking toward her, and running to him, said, “What? What is happening to my daughter?”
“Mrs. Porter, from what we can tell so far, your daughter has some slight swelling of the temporal lobe in her brain. We’re going to try and relieve the pressure as much as we can to make her as comfortable as possible. We’ll keep her here a few days and monitor her for any changes.”
Lillian’s eyes filled with tears. “Will my daughter be alright?” The doctor put his arm around her shoulder, and said, “She might have some memory loss which isn’t uncommon in these situations, so don’t be surprised or alarmed if she doesn’t remember anything about the attack. These are all common side effects of a trauma like this, and sometimes I think they’re for the best. Right now, our only concern is to keep the swelling down, but, she’s a young girl…I expect her to make a full recovery.”
Tina was discharged from the hospital later that same night. Philip filled out all the paperwork at the window as Tina sat on the bench. When he was finished, he walked over to her and knelt down. “Do you have any idea how lucky you are, that you walked away from this with only a few stitches? What were you thinking, Tina, walking around in that neighborhood at night?”
Tina didn’t answer; she just looked down the hall at Lillian, who was now on the pay phone. “Where is Bette?” Philip helped Tina to her feet and leading her to the double doors of the emergency room, said, “Don’t worry about Bette, she’ll be fine.” Turning and grabbing her by the shoulders, he continued, “And you are never to see her again, do you understand me? I mean it, Tina. Never.”
Thomas ran out of the house and taking some of the bags from Bette’s arm, said, “Bette, your father didn’t inform me that you were coming home.” Bette handed over the bags and said, “That’s because he didn’t know. Is he in his study?”
Thomas walked quickly to catch up to Bette, now at the door. “No, I’m afraid he isn’t here at all. He’s in Michigan this week at some sort of book convention.”
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Ahhh so sweet! Thanks for another awesome chapter!
ok… now it all comes together… you have to excuse me i’m on too many MEDS… love this and i am glad you are continuing… thanks…
I’ve loved this story from the start. Perfect end to this part… and so happy you’re continuing on.
Girl, this was perfect as an ending to this part of the story. Of course now I can’t wait for you to post the start of your next one!
OK..this was a perfect ending…BUT I am begging for a sequel. Thanks!
What a beautiful ending. The ring was the secret So glad that Bette did remembered. thanks
Wow, that was beautiful! Now get on with that sequel girl.
Great story. I loved it. I also like the comedy of Alice and Dana…I miss those two together. Can’t wait for the next story. PPS
Wonderful story. I am so glad that they have found each other again. I can’t wait for the next part of the story to take place.
SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!!!!!!
Great update. Looking forward to more.
That was great. I’m glad you are going to continue. Dana & Alice are to funny. Thanks for taking the time.
indeed another fabulous post, thank you for your work, thank you for tibette, and as others have noted, a rekindling of the great comedic relationship of Danish. Really look forward to your next chappy ;)
Girl. I love this story. I’m so glad you’re going to continue!
real twist on the tibette story. thank u. take them home to LA and let them begin their life. pps
Great story!
WOW, what a great story! Alice and dana are so funny! i agree sequel!!
That was a wonderful story. Really sweet.I look forward to your next one.
Absolutely beautiful…so glad that you’re continuing with the story. Thanks.
Now that explains it. Bette had memory loss. Bette & Tina as childhood sweethearts is quite interesting and unique. I’m joining the chorus that’s screaming out for a sequel! Thanks, girlporter, and don’t stay away too long. :>
A very sweet ending to this chapter. I look forward to the sequel.
Awesome story.