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Summer Vacation. Chapter 44
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Previously:
“Has she been painting?” Bette asked, feeling as she did so that she’d asked Helena to betray some kind of secret confidence,
They reached the stretch of sand where the beach ended, coming to a curve as theirs was the last house up that particular stretch and separate from the next by a rough rocky outcrop,
Helena sat down on a rock, glancing over at Li, Angie and Stacie who played in the shallow pools with Banjo and a frisbee, “Yes …” she watched Bette wander about, kicking at the golden sand with her foot, “but she sketches more, usually she takes her stuff down onto the beach and then we don’t see her for a couple of hours until the daylight’s all gone,”
Bette nodded, “I think she hides it from me,”
“What makes you say that?”
Bette sat down next to her, “She hides it from me cos she knows what I’ll say,”
Helena waited patiently, the best way to handle Bette’s deep philosophical moods to stop and give her time for the thoughts to flow freely,
Bette leant back against the rock, fiddling with a shell she’d picked up off the shore,
“What’s that?” Helena prompted, “what would you say?”
Bette sighed, “Same thing our mother would’ve said, that a talent like hers shouldn’t be wasted …”
Summer Vacation – Chapter Forty Four:
The afternoon wore on and after hot-dogs and burgers had suitably settled the young lot all piled in the water with the frisbee and the kids, teasing Angie and Stacie and Li as they lobbed it back and forth way over their heads,
“Hey!!” Angie squawked, protesting loudly, “no fair!” she then ducked as Wilson returned the frisbee to Lottie, narrowly skimming her left ear, “HEY!”
Up on the beach the various couples all lay around in one another’s arms, enjoying the sunshine, apart from Carmen who watched Shane in the water, holding court amongst the twenty-something’s’,
“You’d really think that now she’s a mother she’d be tired of getting her boobs out,” Carmen sighed, watching Shane as she leapt around in the water wearing a t-shirt and no bikini top,
“What do you mean?” Alice mumbled, “she has a shirt on,”
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I just love sthis tory more and more. after this party how can lottie and jo feel like they don’t belong the “family”. heck that’s what family is all about! i totally love alice’s dvd, perfect!!! :)
ok, i’ve just finished like half a page and i’m already going “aaaahhhh” because the image of carmen in her bikini…*ahem*…*glances down at self* well im glad i match up faaaairly well. *runs back to read more* great so far sweety
oh…umm…that made me melt a little…a lot i suppose…*sheepish*…that was really lovely writing, just really great. my net cut out when i was on page two, but before it did, i thought to myself for the umpteenth time, how much more helena has learned on the actual show from having the ground yanked from beneath her feet than bette seems to have learned, and there are hints of just how much she’s able to really connect with people, in a way that you wouldn’t expect…anyway, you capture that while also having a more fully evolved bette running around and taking naughty baths;) veerrrrry nice tub, though you know, my clawfoot obsession is personally being pushed aside slighty for a ‘giant wooden jacuzi style bath but without the gaudy white or marble’ you know where the hot water makes steam which makes the wood smell all nice and woodsy. mmm…oh dear, this story is just so beautiful, it really is. i’m a bit beside myself *smile* xoxox babe
oh, and you handled the wedding just perfectly. did i mention that? well you did. that was…everything a story should be…a story about that…well you know what i mean…that thing i’ve always called by its first letter and said i’d die before i did…well dammit, you have me melting over it…you have skills storyteller;)
Oh this was such a good update! A little bit of everything and everybody in it. Hahaha…Bette and Tina still going at it after all these years…beautiful. Just waiting for your next update.
Well, sofa, I have to give it to you, you really can tell a story, a complex and neatly woven one at that. You’re also good at fiction in that I think it’s been several decades (if not a century) since Malibu was deserted enough for Shane and Carmen to find a secluded spot on the rocks, which have to be much harder than either surf or sand, so I hope Carmen was the bottom in all their escapades there. She has the padding to handle it, scrawny old Shane would have broken something. And yes, Shane certainly has nipples, but I must say I’ve seen scant evidence the woman ever grew tits, so how *great* can they be? The actress is supposed to be Gwenyth Paltrow’s cousin, but I bet Olive Oyl is Shane’s virgin aunt. Oh yeah, I have to thank you for making such a big deal out of Lottie’s discarded/stolen pants, cause you and me, we’ve got pants history.
Wow, I need your help in planning my parents 50th wedding anniversary. This party went on with out a hitch, except for the missing clothes. By the way where did Shane hide them at? Loved the family time.
I love this story more every chapter! I am so glad that they threw Lottie a birthday party and now she is having the family birthday time. I hope this shows her how much she truly is a part of the family now. I can’t wait to read more!
I was a couple of chapters behind … caught up now. Patience is a virtue so I’m told. Looking forward to your next post. jinjur
I finally caught up! What a great party for Lottie.
so in-love with this story…pps
Hey, Sofa! This was really good! We love how you described the growth that all the ladies have experienced, thru Alice’s DVD. Very enjoyable chappy. Thanks for sharing this fabulous story. PPS – Lucero & Marsha – JC’s Salsa Aunties from Mexico City
brown gravy and onions like on beef steak or roast beef; i don’t eat chicken…
Welcome back. Still great just don’t be gone so long
Hey, Sofa! Have I told you lately that I *fvcking love* this framily, this story? I love the way you present the framily scenes. It’s a joy to see them have fun together and see the love that binds them all regardless of bloodlines. I love the way you give other couples some “screen time”. What a party huh, three out of the five couples managed to sneak out for some *quality alone time*. LOL! And of course, I love all the Bette & Tina stuff: the freaking hot bubble bath and the *lovely* beach wedding. *SIGH* I’d cry buckets too in utter joy if I see that scene play out in S6. I’d blink back tears too as soon as I hear the first notes of “Here, There and Everywhere”… Ahhhh, so sweet. Lastly, I LOL at the mention of Tina’s signature eyeroll and LMAO because the cute, adorable, pesky Angie happened to have inherited it too. :) Thank you, thank you for this update, for this story, Sofa! I hope this “Summer Vacation” will not end anytime soon. PPS :>
Sofa this I think this is the best chapter yet, or maybe not, or mabye but it is right up there. Now I’m going to be greedy and say I can’t wait to here Lottie’s reaction to the party, and the trip and !!!!!!!!! well anyway, more. Can’t get enough. Thank you. Md
That is a family,all the love and fun that they can have and still be one. thanks
What a great mixture of romance,sex, humor, family and the sentimental. Loved it all.
Oh my goodness, I love this story SO much. The video of Bette & Tina’s wedding actually made me get all teary…and all your characters seem so real to me. I can just see the picture of Lottie & Angie dancing in the living room…thanks for yet another incredible installment of this story, hope it keeps going forever!!
Hello Sofa… wow am I late for this party or what… wink… ok… can I join this family… cause well yeah its just perfect… you create such a beautiful picture with this family… even through the flaws there is beauty and acceptance… and I do hope that Bette does ask Lo to stay… I think Bette needs her… just as much as she needs Bette… you are just so perfect at capturing all these different personalities… love it so much… hugs, JC
THAT WAS FUNNY AND HOT!