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The Island – Chapter 11
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Dana didn’t think she had ever been this exhausted in her life. It seemed like she was given extra drills to do from every instructor. She had an inkling that some of the other guards knew about her spending so much time with Alice, but, didn’t think anyone knew their relationship was anything other than professional. Maybe that was why they worked her so hard? She didn’t even have the energy to shower or eat when she got back to the barracks. She just collapsed on her bunk. Her last fleeting thought was that she might need to ask for a transfer if this kept up — not that Alice would allow it. The thought of Alice caused her to finally pass out with a smile on her face.
Dana woke up a split-second too late. There was a pillow case holding her head to the mattress and her arms and legs were held by strong hands.
“You ain’t all that Fairbanks.” Dana heard this whispered in her ear as the first blow fell. She passed out after about 10 minutes. The beating stopped shortly after and the guards slipped back in the darkness to their beds.
Alice was excited to see Dana again. She felt they were making progress on building something real out of this unreal situation that put them together. They had a date scheduled for 5 this afternoon. Alice was going to take her to one of her favorite spots on the island and had a picnic basket prepared for the excursion. She had an amazing time on the picnic with Dana and hoped to recreate that experience for the other woman. They could spend more time talking and getting to know each other and watch the sun set again. And, to be honest, Alice was hoping for a little more kissing.
There was a knock on the door at precisely 5 PM. Alice gave permission to enter and was a bit confused when Harrison entered alone and closed the door behind him.
“What happened?”
Harrison wanted to ask her to sit down before he gave the news, but, knew that Alice would not.
“Dana won’t be able to make it today.” Alice sensed Harrison was holding something back — or trying to break some news slowly.
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Holy crap, I think I’m first. Unless I take too long writing this. Anyway, this is so sweet. Dana’s hurt and she’s still asking if Alice is ‘kay (which is so freaking adorable in my head, by the way). I want a Dana. I’d take care of her too. And poor Alice. I also like the touch with Harrison dating the doctor. You rule muchly, my friend.
Poor Dana! I bet she could have taken them in a fair fight… bunch of losers. I can’t wait to see what Alice does to Gabby and her gang! Another great chapter!
WOW! What Drama! I felt SOOOOOO bad for poor Dana! Thank god she has Alice in her corner.And though near the end, this line was just too sweet. “I’m gonna sleep. I’m here if you need me, OK? I’ll always be here for you, Al.” Dana trailed off at the end of the sentence as she fell back asleep. Yep…I’m such a romantic sap, cause that just got to me. Thanks MaG
THAT’s IT…I’m gonna write myself IN! LoL Alice better kick some serious ass and take some names, or i will be forced to seriously write myself in ;) At least Dana is okay and Alice is by her side, that’s all that matters right now anyway. ExcelleNt job MaGoose, loved it! It SOOO brightened my crappy day, Thanks so much.
K…the nurses uniform was all you and I have the PM to prove it! LOL Those guards? The best of the best? They need to be kicked off the island…and just dumped in the middle of the ocean with a raft and …no a raft. Then we’ll see how good they’re not! Alice and Dana devoted to one another through thick and thin…that’s Danish in a nutshell and while, it may be painful to read, you have done a hell of a job in capturing their deep emotional bond, even before the characters are aware of it themselves. Well done, mighty Goose! PPS
MaGoose, you weren’t kidding about “fasten your seatbelt.” You did surprised me with this late night beating. At the beginning, I thought, if needed, A should bring in CSI NV, Miami and NY to get forensic evident to find the attackers. I can’t help but wonder why the other instructors were working D so hard. Were they jealous too? Now that we know it was Gabby and Nadia. I second SammysGirl that they needed to be kicked off the island for good. I am glad to see A quickly swung into action to bring D back to the main house. 10 full minutes of beating, resulting in all those injuries, that was tough to swallow. However, I am positive that D was in good hands under the special care of A. Hope she could recover soon. Well done and like Chicki said, sweet ending. I love these two. Thank you!
That Bitch is going to the wood chipper. Then she is going to get ground up even more and feed to the dogs that are going to pee on her freaking skull. That is evil. POOR DANISH. Goose. I love you but this made me alittle sad. But it’s excellent writing as usual
I read a couple in the beginning,Now need to go back and read all If Gabby was in this, jealousie. She has always treated Alice like —-. She didnt reslly want her yet didn’t want Alice to have her. I’ll catch up.sorry thanks
Poor Dana!! Gabby is such a prick. Cant fight fair either, Dana so would have kicked her scrawny ugly ass if it was a fair fight! Soo sweet how Alice got so protective nd has done everything she can for Dana and then Dana asking Al is if she was ok wen she’s the one tht hurt …. AWWWW lol. Love this story and all its drama and cant wait for next post wen we see Gabby tied to a post and left for the seagulls! lol. PPS X X
Hello MG, that was completely heartbreaking and yet so very true to this kind of environment… jealousy runs rampant through people of authority and it can always lead some kind of altercations… in this case it is the Jealousy of Love or maybe lust. You handled this so well and for Harrison he better tell her the truth soon or he will have hell to pay… you are absolutely brilliant… you create a love so powerful even when it is painful… hugs, JC
Forget what I said… Gabby should be tortured to death, or at least sent off the island. Really, I was expecting lies, deceit and manipulation, definitely not physical harm… I need to recover from this…
Ok gonna re-expose the wiring in the freezer in preperation…..amazing chap, am glad that those bitches were caught right away…Dana’s 1st thoughts are of Alice is so sweet and can’t wait to see Al go all medieval on their asses.
OMG, I didn’t expect Gabby and Nadia to take revenge so soon. Poor Dana, poor Alice. It was so sweet that Alice was so protective of Dana. I’m glad Dana woke up for a sec and shared a very sweet moment with Alice. Gabby and Nadia, it’s on! ;)
Wow MG,u did a hell of a job writing this update! Gabbys gonna get it,Gabbys gonna get it LOL My poor Dana and the way Alice handle the sisuation was touching! U so rock MG!Doing the half “sprinkler” and PPS
Fucking Gabby. This was awesome. They’re so sweet together but man am I mad about fucking Gabby. hahaha. You have to post SOON so we can all sleep better about Dana’s health :-P Keep up the good work!
Yup, Gabby’s ass should totally watch out now. Anyway, I loved protective Alice and how she “morphed” ;). And Dana is just too cute with that comment about always being there for Alice. PPS.
that was great but poor dana and look out for alice on the war path and I can’t wait to read it pps great update I love it
hey great story!!!!!!!!!!