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Footprints In The Sand [2]
Dana woke up the next morning just as the sun was starting to rise with a slight headache from the previous night’s alcohol but even that couldn’t shake the smile from her face. She felt happy here. She had a wash and decided to wake herself up by having a run along the beach. She ran along the shore barefoot, in a simple pair of green shorts and a black bikini top, trying to take in as much of Hawaii’s beauty as she could. After thirty minutes she reached a little outcrop of rock and clambered along it to watch the last of the sun rise as the sky changed from red, to orange, to yellow, to blue.
Dana rested and let time pass her by as she thought about last night and the two new friends she had met, she instantly had a good friendship with Eddie, she admired his passion for life and eagerness to fulfil everything he set his mind to, he was also very honest and caring but more importantly that all of that he was as big a goof as she was and that’s what she loved about him most. Alice had her confused, she was instantly attracted to her which isn’t hard to comprehend because the woman was beautiful; tanned, curves in all the right places and beach hair to be jealous of. Those physical qualities weren’t the only things that made her attractive in Dana’s eyes though, she felt a connection with her, every time she came close to her something within Dana was battling hard to reach out and grab Alice and never let go. Also, she felt completely vulnerable with her, all she had to do was look into her eyes and know that a second that Alice could read tell exactly what she was thinking. She knew Alice had a reputation though and that’s what worried her, she didn’t want to get hung up on someone who could easy break her heart. She tried her best to push these feelings aside deciding that she’d leave the topic open and if after seeing Alice a few more times if she still felt this magical bond, then she might think about doing more about it. Which was an easy thing to say with the blonde out of sight.
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Woot. I sooo need to visit this beach where Alice and Dana play! Hopefully she wont beat herself up about it to much and just put the moves on. Great progress, i’m loving the whole thing. Thanks for another well done post. The only thing i would suggest….put a break in between dialogs- to seperate it a lil bit, just a suggestion either way i love what you’re doing, content is what counts..not style :D Excellent!
Do you have any photos of Alice and/or Dana in their skimpy beachwear? No? On to my imagination, then. You are doing a great job on explaining the attraction between Alice and Dana. Especially Dana’s thought processes. Absolutely adore Alice’s reaction to Dana’s bikini. I hope Dana gets herself together and explains her behavior. And I hope Alice isn’t just trying to get back at her or make her jealous. Dang Danish complications!! Gotta have that drama, though. Hopefully Alice will show up at Dana’s place. You certainly have me hooked. Can’t wait for what happens next. Excellent!! Thanks so much, New-to-this!!
Oh, come on npw…. Dana grow some balls and go get your woman out of whoever-it-was’s hands!! Fairbanks can do much better than that! ;p lol It was precious when Dana fell down. My, my, my…. As I was reading this I thought of tlw 210, Loveboat is that? Nway, thank you for posting this! ;) awesome
Now I can’t get the image of Alice and Dana in bikinies out of my mind, lol. Poor Dana! Two days and there’s already drama! So much for relaxation! What’s up with Alice? Love the story! Thank you and PPS!!!
Shower and perfume before the surfing lesson. D must really want to impress A. And the rest, akshunjack and MaGooose said it all. Newt-to-this, you are doing a good job with this story. Thank you and looking forward to your next chapter.