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Footprints In The Sand [3]
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Dana woke up after a restless night’s sleep, she tried to shake the hurt feelings from her head so in an attempt to push her disappointment to the back corners of her mind she decided that she’d have a day to herself checking out some tourist spots and doing some shopping. She went for a run to wake herself up a little, resting on the same rocks as she had done the previous day, before making her way back to her room. She knew Alice might be opening up Kukui around this time and she knew she should have gone in the opposite direction on her run but, disappointed as she was with Alice, the blonde still had a hold on her.
As Dana approached the shack she saw the familiar silhouette of the woman she longed for, as the butterflies lazily floated around the pit of her stomach Dana mentally berated herself and as Alice turned to greet her she ignored her, fixing her eyes on the sand at her feet and speeding up her run.
Alice watched as Dana ran straight past her, her stomach was knotted and she felt a huge wave of regret wash over her as the brunette vanished out of sight. Alice didn’t know what to think, she knew she was physically attracted to Dana and judging by yesterday’s kiss Dana obviously had some feelings for her too. The only problem was that Alice had never felt intense, concentrated feelings like this before and she didn’t know how to deal with them. She decided to be grown up about it and when Eddie arrived for the first shift of the day she left him and made her way to Dana’s beach lodge. Luckily she’d made lots of friends on the island since she arrived so she had no problems with finding out Dana’s room number from the receptionist. She wasn’t prepared for this meeting but the thought of continuing to see Dana and be ignored by her made her feel almost physically sick so she psyched herself up and knocked lightly on the door.
“Hang on” she heard Dana shout from behind the door as she fixed a smile on her face and waited for her to open up. After a few nervous minutes of anticipation, which in Alice-Time seemed like hours ,the door to Dana’s room finally opened and Alice was left speechless as she soaked in the vision of Dana standing in front of her in a towel, her skin shinning with water from the shower she’d just been interrupted having. Alice had never seen anything more beautiful, she realised she hadn’t said anything yet as she saw the look of confusion cover Dana’s face.
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O MY GOODNESS! As I just finished commenting on the second chapter, you posted one! What a coincidence. :) Yeah, go check my comment out on the last one. I’m going to go back and read this one; I just wanted to let ya know ;)
AWWWW so sweet…. I love how Alice wants to take things slowly. Is this weird but I see them vividly in front of my eyes. So cute :) Thanks for a wonderful chapter. And I think you need to get on you essays now lol
Way to go, Alice!! So glad she went after Dana. I don’t know that Dana would have done the same — at least not for a while. While I understand maybe why she did it, I am still disappointed that she slept with that other woman. It was the right move for Alice to ask for a date. She needs to show this is more to her than a fling. I absolutely love how you write that tremendous connection the girls have for each other and how other people can sense it. I am so pleased they decided to wait to be together. I am sure their patience will be rewarded. Thank you so much, New-to-this!! I love the frequent updates, but, try not to neglect your studies too much!
I’ve been reading along — you keep updating so quickly, I rarely have time to go back and comment. However, that being said — every chapter deserves a comment. This is light and breezy fluff, and it’s just great to read. It’s a lot of fun, and I’m sincerely enjoying it. Thanks.
Yay for Danish goodness! Thank gosh Alice went to correct things with Dana-because if she didnt i would have :D. AmaZing job again. Is Alice a bit of a Shane? Hopefully if she is she wont be for long i really want to see where you take this. Thanks so much
*thud* dayumm sweetness. Thanks.. *thud*
This only happens in fiction. First person D ran into was the A. This story is very romantic and I am loving it. Thank you New-to-this.
Love it – more please
sweet story. i like it. i love you zecki-nova nickname. very clever. post soon.
please don’t stop there…..we need more danish out there