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Window of Opportunity ch. 48
Window of Opportunity
Chapter 48
Tina
After my parents left, I was exhausted. I think all my emotions were catching up and the result was my tiredness. Bette as usual was supportive and suggested that I nap while she invites everyone over for the barbeque tomorrow as well as track down Angie’s location. I was not going to argue with her about that and we agreed that we would later go to the store and get the items we would need.
“Babe, how do you think my parents are going to react to everyone?” I asked her as I lay down on the bed and she changed into more appropriate Saturday attire.
Pausing as she pulled a tank top over her head, she looked toward me. “I think they’ll be fine with everyone. We could tell Alice to behave but would that really do any good?” She pulled the shirt over her head.
“I don’t want to tell her to be good. I don’t want them to have to do anything that they wouldn’t normally do. My parents need to see the real people we have in our lives. Shane and Kit will of course try to impress them but Alice doesn’t give a shit what anyone thinks. Who knows what will come out of her mouth?”
“T, these are our family members and you know they’ll do or try to do anything we ask of them. When I call them, I’ll tell them not to change anything. Your parents seem receptive and they have a car. They can leave if they need to.” She sat on the bed beside me
“We didn’t ask them about Luke.”
“I know. I was thinking that. Maybe tomorrow we can talk to them about him before the others get here. I really want to know if it’s the same William Parsons I’m thinking of or some man who paints pictures of barns and sells them at the swap meet.”
I busted out laughing."What the hell do you know about swap meets?”
“Well nothing. I’ve heard of them though.” She was just too cute and I pulled her toward me so I could get a kiss. It was as usual just what I needed.
“You get some rest T. I’ll get dinner for us and we can watch a movie if you’re up to it after the groceries. It’s been a few rough days for you and tomorrow is going to be long too. I’ll take care of all the arrangements while you sleep.”
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(37 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Great update. I love your story. PPS!
little debbies, cows, slim jims, where do you come up with this you had me getting funny looks from my son, and so loving too, just the best. Thank you. and I hope your morning is not to rough. Md
Gosh NAG you really are good! You weave humour so well throughout the normal dialogue. As a reader I feel like I’m in the scene watching everyone and listening to what they’re saying. This story and the way you tell in is incredible. Can’t wait for the next update!
Another wonderful chapter and I too can’t wait until you post the next. I must say though that you must of had one great HH coz you put your author notes under the disclaimer and the disclaimer under your author notes. LOL
I just really appreciate behind the scenes of what they are feeling and thinking. Awesome again!
Raincheck most definelty in order! but Angie is more important. I love this story more with every chapter I read. PPS
Just caught up on reading this entire story and it is definitely a great story. Love your writing style you pull a reader in and leave them wanting more. can’t wait to read more, thanks for sharing the story with your fans
You are doing such a marvelous job writing this story. Toby4ever is right in that you weave humor throughtout and it seems as though we are there. So true. I’ve felt this from the very beginning, it fells as though we’ve been ivited to the party ourselves, you bring the reader inside. That is a wonderful testament as a writer. Keep up the good work. PPS
Terrific as always! Thanks for the post!
I was stoked to see this story and read as fast as I could. That way I did not fall behind again. Can’t wait for the adult alone time and of the course the BBQ. It is going to be interesting to see how the grandparents react to the family and of course to Angie.
WOW what an ending!can’t wait for the BBQ and Alice it will interesting to see how they size up alice. plus bette asking tina’s dad his opinion, bet he will build something childproof for angie. i think tina’s folk will be just fine with the “family” PPS:)
All I can say is…Beautiful! And Beautifully Written! Thank you so much…
LOVE THE STORY and the final scenario was sweet…pps
One of my sons works for Little Debbies. Poor Tina and Bette another day they will wait. Angie is more important just for right now. thanks