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The After Party
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As I wrench the doors open and make my way through the kitchen, the glass once again rattles in its frame as the doors swing into the side of the house. A thought fleetingly passes through my mind that the doors of our house have taken more frequent beatings in the last ten minutes than the six or so years that Tina and I were together in this house, engaged in our rare, but sometimes fiery arguments when door-slamming would occur. Just as quickly as the thought entered my mind, it’s gone as my focus is solely on reaching Tee and figuring out why it is that she seems so upset.
Calling out after her, hoping to get her to stop her frantic search and gathering of her things. Forgetting that I’m naked and dripping wet, I sprint through the kitchen and shout again, “Tee!…Tina! Where are you going…what’s going on?”
At this she does pause and turns towards me. I’m completely bewildered as to why she is racing to leave. The confusion that must be evident on my face only strengthens as Tina looks at me and I see hurt, anger, panic and tears threatening to fall. Softening my tone I ask again, “Tee, what’s going on?”
She turns quickly away and starts to walk towards the door as she says, “I’m sorry about last night…having to stay here and interrupting your…your morning swim with Jodi….”
Not knowing why she thinks she interrupted anything with Jodi and I, but knowing I need to get her to stay, I run across the living room and proceed to slip and fall down hard on my knees.
“OW! Damn, that fucking hurt….Tina what are you talking about? Why are you apologizing for interrupting my swim and with Jodi? Jodi’s not even here.”
“She’s not here? Well then who the hell slammed the bedroom door and why are you swimming naked?” Tina demands to know, her southern accent breaking through as she stresses certain words.
That lilt in her voice never fails to turn me on, and this is no exception. Smiling to try and ignore my arousal and concentrate on soothing Tina’s agitation I say, “Tee, the only reason the door slammed was due to the wonderful breezes you know we get through here….And I didn’t realize swimming naked in my own pool was against any rules.”
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you guys are serious about comments huh? ok I promise to try to write more comments if it means you will continue, ok? this is a great story. I love your writing style. pps
Yes please continue. That was so beautiful:) PPS
Two thumbs up!! Keep going!!
Oh, how I wish this communication between Bette and Tina had occurred at this point in 505. It makes logical sense that they would have had a discussion when Tina awoke on Bette’s couch and yet we saw nothing on the show. I’m so glad you have corrected this awful gap. I love Bette’s openness – her willingness to take a risk for Tina. We definitely need more! PPS!
Good job! Bette spilling her feelings like that. PPS!!
omg this sory is GREAT.. I finally have caught up! Please continue…this is how it really should have gone.
What a wonderful story… I love how there’s actual communication, particularly on the part of Bette. And, hey, who can complain about a naked Bette, literally and figuratively =P
It’s so good..please don’t stop
I was extremely happy to see this post up. Thank you for the story. I really hate to see a story go off to finished land.
Two thumbs up! I’m gonna echo StormyOne and say keep going, on all your stories. thanks
Loved it! I like this take on things. Can’t wait for the next one. PPS
Beautifully written, I think you should just keep writing this story.
I know how much it means to writers to have reader’s comment and am sorry that I have been so lax. That because I read on the run on my blackberry which doesn’t allow for comments to the site. Do not stop writing!! Your insight into these characters shows in your excellent dialogue. I know how much time and energy it takes to write a story (which is why I haven’t been able to post in awhile) so let me tell you: do not stop! Lin
Not gone!… And definitely not offended by you not answering comments, don’t worry. Just very busy and having barely enough time to read fanfic. But thought I would leave this to reassure you. That was a lovely chapter, thank you. They’re finally talking, REALLY talking! Please post soon! ;)
Please keep writing.awesome update.. nice to see bette finally opening up and coming to senses about how she really feels about tina. thank god she ditched jodie!!!!! :)PPS
Cool, I am glad Bette found the words to get through to Tina.
I just caught wit dis story, absolutely beautiful:)PPS
that was great
Just keep writing, No more jodie.
WOW was that powerful!!! excellent as always…PPS
YEAH! I’m glad you updated this and please keep going.
If this had been what happened on the REAL show, we could have had 7 episodes of HAPPY b&T instead on only one. Please submit an application to be a writer on TLW staff =)
Wow, you blew me away with this. It was very poetic of you to have Bette naked while she said all of this to Tina…making her totally vulnerable. I hope you write more than one more chapter to this story.
Keep writing b/c it is so good. Where the dialogue in the show was ambiguous, your dialogue is direct and passionate….the way adults speak to one another not IC’s cutesy way of vague and confused convo. PPS.
I am still here and enjoying this story!
Oh you are so very fortunate. You were w/o cable for S3. I so wish I could have been so lucky. More that two years later and I am still hoping OurChart will soon start marketing an elixer that can erase most of that season from my brain. “Most” because I want to keep the Angelica scenes. Like Linbrooks, most of my reading is on my Blackberry which does not allow me to comment. I have enjoyed your chapters and am looking forward to the next.
Happy to see thi spost but not so happy to learn that we only have one more chapter t go. Wish you would continue to write this story, so much more to explore. Have enjoyed reading and THANK GOD JODIE IS GONE.
Hey Aqueous, Am loving this delicate and gorgeous adventure. I really would like if you would continue it for a while yet. I just sodre it. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
Beautiful! I am glad that Bette went after Tina and laid her heart on the line. Now it’s time for our ladies to talk with one another and listen to one another. :)
That was beautiful and so good. Now let them talk more and work thing out. Glad to catch up with your story and love it. please post more, thanks!