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Window of Opportunity ch. 54
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Window of Opportunity
Chapter 54
Bette
It was amazing that a suggestion to get Tina back to her hometown to see a place she hadn’t visited in years in addition to seeing Luke’s paintings had grown into a fully fledged family vacation. I was excited that everyone was going since I knew that Tina would probably be preoccupied during parts of the time we were there and I now would also have people to hang out with. James and I had also arranged to give a lecture while there at the college that was close to her parents. When the invitation had arrived Tina and I were still so new in our relationship, I had declined. I suggested that James make the presentation but he did not feel as if he were ready for something of that magnitude. We just let it slide until we were sitting at The Planet and the plans began to formalize. It was the perfect opportunity for James to have such an experience and now I would be there to support him. First thing Monday morning he called the college out there and luckily they had altered the timing of speakers rather than replace us. They were happy that they could add us to the agenda. James and I immediately began preparing a talk on Impressionistic artists that we would present. Him more so than I in the presentation part since this opportunity would be a great experience to get his feet wet for him to do more presentations for CU.
I told Tina about the plans once they were finalized and she was upset with me for having considered missing it at all. We talked about it. I finally was able to have her see that with her and Angie in my life, work did not hold the importance that it had held in the past. It was not my sole focus and initially turning down the opportunity was not something that I thought about. In the past I would have obsessed over my choices and still chosen to go regardless to how much it would have affected her and any plans that she may have already had. I liked being able to pass up going if I was able to spend more time with them and assured her in time, I would resume some of those activities but it wasn’t currently essential to me.
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What a chapter! Quite the twist! While I was hoping that the seductress was Tina, your writing was so brilliant that I couldn’t be positive. I felt guilty enjoying how hot and sexy it was ’til confirming it was T. Lovely way to start the weekend!
OMG!!! I almost skipped a couple pages to come over here to leave a comment that said NO NO NO, Bette can’t do that…then it dawned on me that it was Tina…geeezzzz you had me for a minute. lol. Great chapter!! A little cruel, but great none the less. :) Looking forward to the next one. PPS!
Knew it was Tina by the words and that Bette didnt put up a big fess. Glad they ran into NYU now she knows that Tina has Bette hook,line a whaat ever else Tina wants.thanks
Dann NAG, I really enjoyed comming home to read all your wonderful chapters it is the highlight of my homecomming so far but did ya have to make us think for even one split second that, that might not have been Tina on the desk, I was having a difficult time enjoying the loveing the first time around. But you see, after a few waves went through my stomac and a few uhoh’s fell from my lips I though, NOOOOOOOOOOOO, NAG wouldn’t do that. So thankful for all that you write. Md
Man you really had me going for a minute…I had to skip ahead just to make sure it was indeed Tina, then I went back and read the very hot scene. Love this story as always and can’t wait to see what happens in NC.
Dang, I thought that I was going to have to put a hit out on you. Now I am not a violent person but when you go and mess with Bette and Tina, those are fighting words that I am unable to let slide by. That was awesome having Tina and Bette face Julie together. I can’t wait for the next post. This time I was only 3 chapters down. Getting better.
I feel like killing your for the “I can’t” thing. Geee that was cruel. :)
Excellent post – as always!
At furst, I thought Bette succumbed. You little devil. ;-)
yup, i culda donged u cuz i felt so disappointed I nearly stopped reading…but wuld u do that to us, wuld B do that to T??? So all good. Any Zena/Lucy Lawless fans out there? Just saw her. anywayz pps.
wow. you’re writing is so involved. i love understanding these two, although i nearly had an MI when i thought bette was returning to her evil ways. excellent post.
You are evil! I just about had a stroke when I thought Bette had blown it. You are bad NAG, really, really bad!
Wheww… nice writing.. for a second you had us all saying “Don’t Bette”! Little devil is right!
It’s Tina right?was on page 5 had to post before i finish.please let it be Tina.
I smiled at your office rendezvous because I knew it had to be Tina. Your Bette will be forever faithful. Great chapter.
You almost killed me. You are crazy to lead us so astray. I thought now it’s all over. Please never do this again. :)
you know what? i almost clicked to go to the next story and not finish this one. I couldn’t bear reading bette giving in again and ruining her relationship with Tina. But then , i decided to be a big girl and go on reading. Am i glad i did!! Thanks….but that was really “cruel.” PPS!
Good Grief Girl, I swear I nearly vomited! What a terrible sense of shock and disappointment in Bette. I, too nearly stopped there but held out a smidgeon of hope that it was Tina…OK, now I can breathe deeply and move on with my day. Way to keep us on our toes – TGIF!
What a brilliant smoke and mirrors chapter, newagegirl! Just like the others, I got scared when I first read about Bette’s “ambush”. But I thought it’s totally out of her present character to go down that philandering route again. So I was relieved and pleasantly surprised that Tina was the butt naked vamp. I knew that Tina won’t rest until they’ve christened Dean Porter’s office. I can only imagine how Bette will be able to work and be productive ever again on that desk. Hell, my crazy thoughts will be so over the place from that day forward too. ROFL! Thank you, thank you for this update and for the other three chapters that you’ve posted since your beach break. I think the sun-sea-sand combo has kicked your creativity into another high gear. I’m loving this Bette and Tina who can’t get their hands off each other. I LMAO in their rushed, post-show tryst in the previous chapter, especially the part where the thought of getting caught by Tina’s two fathers while they’re having sex *pounded* on Bette’s consciousness. And I love your Alice and her spot-on wisecracks! TLW’s Alice has stopped being funny, imo. Can’t wait for the WeHo girls’ invasion of small town USA! Will the whole gang find out about MiMi? I’m also curious about Luke’s birthday tributes to Tina and how the town will react to these lovely ladies, especially the Kennard-Porters. Whatever happens, thank you again, newagegirl, for debunking the TLW myth that Tina was raised by wolves. Cheers! :D
I knew it had to be tina especially after they both talked about this julie chick. tina needed assure bette that everything was indeed okay and she appreciated bette’s openess and honesty about julie. tina rocks!! :)PPS
Holy Sh*t~~! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA You fooled me! Can’t say that I wasn’t terribly confused for a moment or two. Gawd, that was fun! I loved it! Fantastically written deception! :) Thanks!
Okay, now that was just so not right at all. All I kept saying to myself was please let this be Tina. It was all I could do not to read ahead to see if it was in fact Tina, but I resisted the temptation. When I did read the next part I realized I had been holding my breath and released it with a big sigh. NAG, I think you had us used to the happiness of B&T and you just wanted to shake us up a bit….well consider us shaken. LOL Thanks once again as always!
woman, you almost killed me!!i DID skip to the next 2 pages cause i couldnt believe what i was reading.. until i found it was Tina and my heart started beating again. GREAT chapter!