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The Island – Chapter 15
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Dana was a bit surprised when the “room” near Alice turned out to be a suite that was only slightly smaller than Alice’s. She moved into it the day after their movie date. As Alice said, all of her stuff from the barracks was already there. Dana had a fleeting thought as to how she would move back to the barracks after this and what the other guards would think, but, decided not to worry about it yet. She just needed to focus on rehab for now.
It only took a few moments for Dana to arrange her belongings. After that she wondered what to do. Since she was no longer on bed rest, she felt odd just laying around or watching TV. But she also knew that she wasn’t going to be any use in her guard duties. After staring at the walls for a bit, Dana decided to go for a walk. She knew Alice had to work, so, she didn’t even bother asking her to come along.
Dana quickly became depressed.
She normally loved exerting her body in some sort of exercise. Unfortunately, she was listening to her body and it was telling her that she could only walk at a very slow pace and not to even think about tackling one of the trails. She gave up after only about 30 minutes. She didn’t just want to meander around. She was in a despondent mood as she headed back to her suite.
Alice knocked on the connecting door to Dana’s suite at around lunchtime. She hoped Dana hadn’t eaten yet and that maybe they could share a meal. Or Dana could keep her company while she ate. Who was she kidding? She just missed seeing Dana.
Dana said she could come in and Alice entered. She found the young guard in shorts and a sports bra staring at her body in the full length mirror. Alice took a moment to appreciate the view and then took another moment to regain her composure.
“You OK, Dane?”
“Yeah. This is the first time I’ve really looked at the bruises…”
Alice stepped closer to the other woman. The bruises were actually healing well — but they were in the stage where they were quite colorful. There was no doubt it was a brutal beating.
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WHOOSH! I think i can wait for my Danish fix since this post…I’m glad we got a few things straightened out, in the open, and talked about throughly…Dane’s stuff being moved, the b*tches off the island(which they still need pay back..perhaps a news report)Is Shane going to be like the punish master?..and ZZZZOHMYGOSH..The 3 BIGGG words, i choked on my Koka-Kor(n)a?..AmazinG Goose, freaking blow me away with each chapter you post. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!
wahooo! consently hitting the refresh button finally pays off! So much goodness on so many levels… honesty and communtication on both their parts… dana’s cuteness in craving their initials on a tree… Alice taking care of dana… i heart this story…pps
ouch… akshunjack beat me to the first comment by 58 seconds… grrr.. next time i will be victorious!
Awesome update MG!!!! I totally love this story,Thanks so much for writing it!!Was shocked about Dana saying the L Word,but was bouncing that she did!! A well deserve HDD as always!!! PPS
MaGoose, I agree with you completely on all the Danish posts this long weekend. I salute all you writers for devoting your time and effort. Every post is greatly appreciated. Back to this post, just want you to know that I smile each time I see you post. Thank you for letting them clear the air and glad their stubbornness did not get the best of them. You are doing a fantastic job with this story, each and every chapter. The carving on the tree was very sweet. Somehow, I feel a little apprehensive of them declaring their love so soon. Maybe it is just me being a worryworm. I hope the peer pressure from other guards would not cause D too much grief down the road. A big “THANK YOU” to you for continuing this great story.
I love you goose. You are awesome. And about me writing more. I just seem to have my muse back as of late. So don’t worry. WAY TO GO DANISH
ive been (impatiently) waiting for an update for this story! im totally loving it and the dynamic between the two. maybe its the dysfunction in me but i enjoyed the argument between the two and hope that in the future they deal more with the whole alice being used to having her way/running the show and dana trying to assert her own self/needs more. love it, just love it!
What an awesome gift after a horrendicly long and physically painful work day…Thank you MaGoose!!!
Sorry for not commenting in a while. I’ve been a little remiss lately, but I thought it was about time to tell you that I still love this. I have to admit I’m totally surprised that they declared their love so soon and that Dana was the first to say it. I’m even more surprised that you managed to get me really angry with Dana during their argumet. This rarely (or never) happens to me, because I love her so much. I’m quite impressed, so this means you did a dam good job. Can’t wait to see where you take this. Post soon!
Ok… so yeah… I am a big loser for not showing up lately… loser JC… :P… hehe… Well you just cannot cease to amaze me with your incredible mastery… this story is just so very awesome you have created something so unique and amazing… your grasp of these two characters is such a strong testament to your passion… your drive… you can create an emotional connection so deep with your words… within this chapter I can so feel Dana’s frustration… her limitations are creating such a weakness within her mind and I love how innocent Alice is… she is so passionate and so very much in love with Dana… and within she is so easily hurt… but together they will become such a strong beautiful couple… you are brilliant and just simply amaze me with your gift… hugs, JC
I have no idea how the hell I missed the last chapter, but fear not, for I went back and read it. So sorry I missed it and didn’t get a chance to comment on it, it was very sweet. This one is too. I’m glad that Alice owned up to her white lie, and that they were able to have an argument. It was an important step. Anyway, it’s really late so i’ll shut up and quit babbling now. lol
Hahaha don’t worry. Actually my mind isn’t on any kind of leash… well maybe just Leish(a) ;) Simpler is better with anything really. As for the chapter. Great as usual! I can totally understand Dana’s frustration by being limited by her body. Been there done that (how frustrating is it when people with walking aids are speeding by you :S). Ooh and the carving on the tree was just too cute. Loved it as usual and can’t wait till your next chapter :)
AWWWW :D Tht was adorable!! Everything about this chapter was so cute, ok maybe the arguement wasnt as cute but still I LOVED IT! lol. When Dana sed I love you and showed Al the tree AWWW how cute is tht!!! LOL Ok i realised im such a sucker for romance now! Anyways another mind blowin chapter, always smile wen i see ur posts :) Love it more and more everytime i read PPS cant wait :D xxx