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The Early Bird Catches… the Hot Girl? Chapter 3
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Wednesday
“Now tell me that is not a great view,” Dana asked indicating to the sun slowly rising over the valley in front of them before turning to look at Alice beside her. “You okay,” she questioned trying to suppress a smile.
Bent with her hands on her knee, the blonde was taking deep breaths. “I was right,” she muttered not looking up.
“About what,” the brunette asked, still jogging in place steadily.
“People who get up this damn early to exercise are crazy,” Alice said standing up straight as her breathing became less ragged.
The writer tried her hardest to be on time to me Dana. Note only did she set her alarm clock by her bed she also set her alarm on her cell phone to ensure she would be up in time to be at Runyan Canyon by 6:15 as they agreed.
It probably would have worked too, if Alice would have gone to bed at a reasonable hour, but the blonde had decided to go out with Shane and didn’t ended up getting home until two in the morning. So, when the first alarm startled her awake less than for hours later, Alice didn’t simply hit the snooze button and roll over. No, the exhausted blonde threw the offensive noise maker across the room in one quick, albeit clumsy, motion.
Five minutes later, her cell phone began to beep and beep and beep. Ten minutes later, she couldn’t stand it any more, so she got out of bed and pulled her phone from the pockets of the jeans she wore the night before and turned it off.
Still half asleep, Alice slowly got dressed in some shorts a sports bra and a tank top. Stumbling into the bathroom she brushed her teeth and grimaced at the sight of her out of control hair. Too tired to do anything else, she simply put her hair up using a bandana and slowly began to make her way to her car cursing the fact that she was awake before the sun.
She ended up being twenty minutes late to meet Dana, although if she hadn’t swung by the Planet it would have only been ten. But to be honest, she saw the stop to get coffee a necessary precaution that need to be taken. After all, she didn’t want to be held accountable for any pre-caffeinated bitchiness… she was trying to get Dana to like her not want to kill her.
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Alice went out partying the night before? Bad, Alice! I have thought about throwing an alarm clock or two in my time. Soooo funny that Dana gave Alice a 30 minute grace period. She certainly has her number. “You can have the ‘Wakes-Up-At-UnGodly-Hours-And-Runs-Faster-Than-Alice’ crown” — Hee! Maybe that could be an Olympic sport? Go Miss Dana for making that first move. And Alice for the kiss. Thanks so much for the quick update, anionayo!! Another great chapter. I look forward to what happens next.
LMAO–Throwing alarm clocks…bed head…crowns. WOOT! Freaking great job anionayo, i have to echo Goose as always, pretty much summed up the chapter for me. Cant wait to see what you have planned for their dinner date thingy! THANKS!!!!
Awesome job again anionayo! It’s just getting better and better everytime you update! YAY! Can’t wait to see what happens next! PPS
I love how A tortured herself knowing that she had to get up early and still went out until late. This is just a fantastic story. So many good lines in this chapter. lol. I love a self confident D when she asked A out. Happy Danish all the way. FYI, I can so relate to the alarm clock and the cell phone. If I must get up in those ungodly hours, I will start with my tv wake-up timer too, then the alarm clock and finally the cell phone. So far it has been working. I can’t wait to read about their. anionayo, thank you very much.
Research for her article you say?… hmmm… let’s see… “The writer didn’t think she had ever seen anything as beautiful as Dana standing there…”…yeah… I bet all she had in mind during their run/walk was the article… right… lol… I don’t believe for a second that Al can become a morning person for good. In fact, now that she’s got her date and enough material for the article, I wonder if she’ll wake up early ever again. I hope your muse will continue to bug you for a long time to come, because you’re doing such an incredible job with your stories. Thanks yet again for a great update and for the BDF spoiler :)
Bad Alice. You need to go back to sleep. Don’t stay out late. Shoot. Kissing a hot girl and a date by 730. For Alice that is amazing. it’s great.
Sorry not commented before – but really loving this story – the pace is just right – and you have their banter just perfect – thank you and pps.
This story is so fun, really cute! I love how you write! I’ve just come back from a run, a kiss and a promise of a date with a hot girl would have made it a little more worth while boooo!!
awsum story!! all of them actually they all rock ;)
Great great great!!! i love it :D Seriously, i once had tried to wake up at 6 for excercise, and i realise it was really crazy!! LOL anyway, thanx for this great chapter, i hope you’ll be back soon with the new chapter :)