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The Island – Chapter 16
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Dana woke up slowly. Her normal waking up reflexes were dulled by the pain medication earlier. She turned her head to look at the clock and smiled at the sight that greeted her.
The comfy side chair was occupied by the one-and-only Alice Pieszecki. She had pulled over one of the small coffee tables and had her feet propped up on it. Alice was staring intently at her laptop. The kicker for Dana was that Alice was wearing those cute glasses.
Instead of making some indication that she was awake, Dana lay there and watched Alice. She loved how expressive Alice’s face was. As Dana watched, she saw Alice as she apparently worked through her e-mails. Each one seemed to get a different reaction. She saw Alice smile, grimace, roll her eyes, get angry, and give her laptop the finger. It was the last one that broke Dana’s silence — she couldn’t help but laugh.
There was a momentary look of confusion on Alice’s face as she looked up. Once she saw Dana she broke into a big smile and set her laptop down. Dana thought of that as “her” smile and quickly returned it as Alice closed the short distance and sat on the side of the bed.
“Do I even want to know who you were giving the finger to, there?” Dana asked with a chuckle.
Alice blushed lightly. “Geez. That must have looked silly. Normally no one is around when I work, so, I don’t have to keep any sense of business decorum. And the guy who wrote that e-mail is an idiot.”
“I didn’t think it was silly. I thought it was cute.” Dana reached over to lay her hand on Alice’s leg. “And it’s not like you punched the monitor or anything.”
Alice laughed delightedly. “No. I try to be non-violent.” The woman sat for a few minutes in companionable silence.
“How you feeling?” Alice asked tenderly as she played with the loose ends of Dana’s hair.
“Better.” Dana mumbled as she enjoyed the feeling of Alice’s fingers.
“I’m glad to hear it. But I am having Brad come over and take a look.”
That broke Dana out of her trance. “You don’t need to bother him, Alice. I overdid it. I know it.” Dana felt stupid enough for everything that happened without dragging Brad into it.
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Great chap!!!hehe, I too flip off inanimate objects…Al needs to chill abit before she starts to smother Dana.
Nice job with that animated A responding to her e-mails. Like others commented above, I again feel a little unease about A showing signs of being controlling. I understand her role as a conglomerate CEO. There is always that tendency for those in high places to get what they want. I sincerely hope that A would be able to distinguish when to exercise her power. I sure will not like to see D feeling like a property owned by A. Somewhere in my head, I think you are setting up something here. Ultimately. I am sure that you will take good care of them, cause you love Danish. I also like your plan to give D a new career. I think it would be awkward for D to return to the barracks after the time she spent at the main house. Excellent as always, thank you!! p.s. I think it is a great idea that you remind us each time you post to support this site at the shout out box. So people, please go and click on the ads.
Hello there… well of course I’m going to stay the course of this story… it is brilliant… you are brilliant… bah… as for the notion that this is filler… if anyone of my stories was as strong as your “filler” I would be so much better off LOL… each new chapter you add is as important and relevant as the one before… just because there isn’t a lot of action doesn’t mean that the character development you craft between isn’t important and vital…you are such a strong storyteller… you create characters that are so real and so very human and that is a gift… and yeah you make laugh and that is a gift as well :)… mucho hugs, JC
Bad Dana. She needs to calm down alittle. I read this like last week. or two days ago whatever. But i forgot to comment. I LOVE LEAVING COMMENTS. LOVE YOU GOOSEY
Awww yay. I love this so freaking much. Alice flipping off the computer was adorable, and I like the fact that Brad talked to her about not babying Dana. I know how tempting that can be, but it makes the other person nuts lol. This is so great I can’t even stand it. I heart it, and I heart you, immensely.
Making Brad lie about Dana needing bed rest… didn’t Alice learn anything? Nothing wrong in being protective, but I feel like she is trying to control Dana a little bit. Can’t wait for Dana to get better. Great update!
YAY!! Was reli excited to so an update and guess what … Im smiling :D lol. I loved the interaction between them at the beginning and they way Dana just watched Alice, a sign there quite happy and content with each other, SO CUTE! LOL. I can understand Alice for wanting Dana on bedrest agen, she clearly cares about her deeply and well who wudnt want Dana in there bed 24/7 lol ..sorry! lol. Anyway another brilliant chapter loved it as always and cant wait for ur next post :) THNK U xx
Bad Dana! Not more disobeying a direct order. If she wasnt hurt i would request that she gave us all 30..just to see her all sweaty. I think i can safely say that i OWNED anionayo on this one. HAR HAR! Ok back to the story….Hmm Al giving the computer the finger seems like someone i know..:-D Amazing Job, Goose…hopefully i will be able to join the Danish posting party soon. Thanks so much for another EXCELLENT chapter-excellent, hear me..nothing less, soldier.