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High School Life: Part 18
Continuing From Alice’s Point Of View:
As the tears burn my cheeks I sit there almost numb in shock, why does it hurt so much when I really barely know this girl yet I feel like my whole life is nothing without her. Yet thought of Dana running through my mind wont leave and all I can think is this cant be Dana, its so unlike Dana!
Leaning down slowly from my chair I pick my phone up flicking through my contacts list…..
Bette
Chris
Dana …. I sit and stare at her name in my phone, my finger hovering over the button that will delete her number from my phone, its what she wants to me do so why cant I simply delete her cell phone number from mine? Debating it for what seems like hours I finally continuing scrolling through my phone. …..
Derek …. At least he wants me, he loves me in his own way and I know he’ll be sorry for last night……
Jenny
Shane …. Pressing the call button I wipe the tears away that are staining my face.
“Sup Al, You ok?”
I breathe in deeply trying to stop anymore tears from escaping I wait for a second and then put my best voice on …. “Hey Shane! Are you busy?”
“Not right now no, you want me to come over?”
My voice starts to break a little remembering why I need my closest friend with me right now … “Ummm, yeah please …. If you wouldn’t mind.” I quickly wipe away the few tears that trickle down my face exhaling softly trying to regain some composure.
“Ok gimmie half an hour tops, I’ll bring by some coffee and breakfast from The Planet, I’m guessing you need some.”
I smile to myself knowing that Shane knows something is up … she always does.
“….Ok, Bye.” The last part of my sentence was barely audible as I whisper it putting the phone down to burst into tears again.
From Dana’s Point Of View
Sitting on my bed I look through some pictures we have taken while we were all just goofing around or out for a night, looking at them I find myself staring at Alice longing to hold her and hear her voice, I run my thumb over her figure on the photograph softly.
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Whoa! Ok, at least we got the text thing sorted out..i was going to have to make threats about writing myself in and saving the day! LoL Howie is such a noob, i freaking hate to love him, damn lil brothers…he did make a damn good distraction though! Sharon is a…i dont like her very much right now, i wonder if things will ever be set straight? Guess i’ll have to wait until the next post. Thanks so much!!!
Thank goodness Al called Shane! I was worried she might stop at Derek. Love Dana hitting Howie with the tennis ball. Poor Alice’s imagination was in overdrive. Shane really stepped up to help both girls. I am so relived that Dana and Alice worked through the misunderstanding. I hope Dana can find a balance with Sharon that will allow her to continue to see Alice. Thank you so much, *+*SummerBreeze*+*!! I thought the whole chapter was wonderful.
SB, you had me going too when A scrolled down the list. And I am glad that A did not delete D’s number. Under the circumstance, I don’t blame her lack of confidence though. LOLwhen D threw the ball at Howie. I thought “S.O.B.:” was well quite apropos. Love how D managed to get out for a fake run. Hahaha. Thank you for bringing Yoda over. We can always count on her. More importantly A & D sorted it out at the end. Why it is when a chapter ends peacefully, you writers think it is weak. It is fine with me, cliffhangers sometimes keep me awake. So don’t be sorry. We like it either way. Thank you again for a wonderful chapter. Just hate seeing A all broken up for nothing. Keep up the good work.
whew,great chap..happy that they know what Sharon did, pretty much just happy with the whole thing :)
amazing story loves it and i so hate sharon so mean to alice she has not right to do that
thank u 4 the peaceful endin! lollil more sharmen in the next and ur a legend!! amazing story x
I love this story summerbreeze. Such an awesome update so close to the last one is great. I was about to have a heart attack when i thought she was going to delete dana then stop at derek. Woot Shane.
That was great and glad A&D are ok, hope Alice will tell her mom or police about dereck and put him in jail forever. Please post more, thanks!
God my heart about to stop everytime Al talks about Derek cuz its my ex’s name LOL. Anyway, i reli love this.. thank you for great chapter *+*SummerBreeze*+*! :D