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Dana turned to Alice and gave her a hug, “Thank you for understanding everything and helping me out I couldn’t of asked for anyone better.”
Alice smiled, “Ditto.”
Chapter 7
Soon after they had got in contact with Dana’s estate agent and were on their way to the first apartment.
“This is quite far away from the country club… and the planet… and my apartment.” Alice said nonchalantly
“Well I do have a car Al so it doesn’t really matter that much, this place is in my price range so lets see what its like.”
“Yeah but wouldn’t you like to live closer to… say the planet?” She questioned
Dana still didn’t notice what Alice was getting at so she continued answering, “no I don’t mind really, it will be a longer run for me if I take the place.”
“But what if you were all the way out here and something happened? None of us could get to you very quick…” Alice reasoned
“whats so bad that could happen anyway?” Dana said getting slightly annoyed
“Well you could get… attacked… by a dog or a bird and we all know how much you hate birds!”
“I do hate birds.” Dana agreed, “How did you know that?”
“you told me the story about when you were little and the bird came down and sat on your shoulder and it scared you so much that you didn’t notice the pond and ran straight into it. Scaring you for life were the words, i believe you used!”
“It didn’t help I was scared of the water!”
“See now what if that happened again? I wouldn’t be close enough to come running over and protect you from the big scary birds!” Alice laughed
“Your not funny.”
“I just think it would be better if you got an apartment closer to mine!”
“So that’s what all this is about!” Dana smirked “You want me to live closer to you.”
Alice blushed which Dana hadn’t hardly saw since meeting the blond, “Fine fine okay I admit it, I think it would be fun if we lived quite close to each other.”
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I am sorry to hear about your car too. I hope it is fixed by now. I love this chapter being all witty and fun. Honestly, I think you have a great sense of humor and you have put it in good use. D running into the pond, big scary birds, A daydreaming about the jacuzzi, A writing her notes, D being a magnet of spilling, the dead tenant’s apartment and the closet, all of which made me lol. I totally love a very flirty A. Also glad D did not go for the mansion. Thank you very much and looking forward to our next post.
Clueless Dana is adorable. And Al cracks me up… “…we can find out maybe if she is going to die soon.” rotflmao… We all love jealous Dana, but I think jealous Alice is just as cute. Hd is right, your stories are very funny, that’s why I love them so much. Thanks a lot for the quick update :)
Hello again! Ooooh am I first? Well this was so good, a bit of romance and so funny. Great posting, yet again post soon, and thanks …
Sorry to hear you had car problems. I hope it is all resolved. On to the story… Love how Alice was trying to make up reasons for Dana to live closer. I agree with Dana about the house — I can’t believe her parents thought she would go along with them paying for it. Alice’s write and re-write of the “slut girl” incident was too funny. I guess the previous tenant must have passed away suddenly or they would have cleaned out that closet first. I am so glad that Dana was the one to push forward with getting the apartment. I hope the girls handle the close living arrangement OK. I’m not sure what other direction you would have taken here, but, I love what you did. It was a cute and funny chapter chock full of Danish goodness. Thank you so much, nbd14!! Great start to a Monday morning.