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    The Early Bird Catches… the Hot Girl? Chapter 4

    Thursday

     

    Mumbling her thanks incoherently Alice took her "usual" seat at the counter before laying her head down in her folded arms, wanting nothing more to get just a few more minutes of sleep.

     

    "Four days in a row. I am impressed girl," Kit said from the other side on the counter.

     

    The writer’s response was muffled since she refused to raise her head.

     

    Chuckling, Kit asked, "What’s the matter? Were you up late with a certain brunette?"

     

    Head still in her arms, Alice smiled before looking up, "Last night was probably the best date I’ve ever been on… in like my entire life. She picked me up… and get this… she brought me flowers. Flowers! I thought people only did that in cheesy romance movies."

     

    "So she’s a romantic huh?"

     

    "Yeah," Alice replied pausing, reveling in the memory of the night before. "I mean she is so great- smart, beautiful, she so confident but sometimes she get’s shy and I don’t know if I want to hug or tease her and watch her blush. Like last night when she showed up at my door with flowers… she looked so cute!"

     

    "Did you two end up going to Santa Monica," Kit said loving how happy her friend looked.

     

    Alice nodded, "We went to this great restaurant and walked the pier and window shopped and ate ice cream.  To be honest I thought she was going to be one of those people that watch every little thing she eats… you know? Because she works out so much… but apparently ice cream is her weakness."

     

    Looking at her watch the older woman said, "Speaking of Miss. Dana, I am surprised that she is not here yet. You wear her out or something last night, girl?"

     

    "Nu uh," the blonde said extending her cup for a refill. "I wish, though. No she had an interview video thing with someone on the east coast and then a big meeting this morning with her manager and potential sponsors. You know she plays tennis like professionally?"

     

    "I knew she played in tournaments," Kit replied. "But I never thought it was her job. She must be pretty good."

     

    "Yeah, but I like know nothing about tennis… she said if I wanted she would teach me how to play…"

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    Comments

    1. Howdy A! Sorry about all the problems lately and my delayed response time, sucks i know. Dana is quite the little charmer, me likes…i have to echo the above comments, excellent update! Thank you.

    2. I’m so happy that you are back, but you already know that, lol… And what a great update!!! I’m quite impressed with Alice waking up early, even if she knew she wasn’t going to see Dana in the morning. Maybe she is really becoming a morning person… Love Dana… I want a date with her too… Looking forward to read about their second date. Great job, anionayo!!! Post soon!

    3. Ok i know u sed not to but … Sorry for not commenting on ur last post lol. Sorry to hear about ur comp problems and well ur relationship problems too reli sorry. Onto the story, in reagrds to ‘wud i not get up at 6:15 to go run with dana?’ Ok yes i wud lol althou i wud be Alice and be struggling for my life to keep up lol. I loved both of these chapters and can not wait for ur next one. U capture them so well and Dana is just a total cutie in ur story :) Love it thnk u :) xx

    4. I too am sorry to hear about your breakup. Thank goodness your computer is back in business. Maybe you can use writing to take your mind off your misery. I also echo MaGoose’s comment. The flowers and earbuds signified D’s thoughtfulness and attentiveness. Who wouldn’t be swept off their feet? Well done and thank you, anionayo! Hope you feel better soon!

    5. Welcome back! So sorry to hear about your computer problems and even more sorry to hear about your breakup. I hope you are doing OK. Through it all, you certainly haven’t lost your touch. This was a great chapter! So cute, funny and sweet. I love Kit’s gentle teasing of Alice. Love, love, love Romantic!Dana. Swoon. Sounds like she rocked the date and little, thoughtful gifts mean so much. Alice is quite smitten. Can’t wait to see the next steps in their relationship. The breakfast especially sounds like it will be a milestone. Excellent, anionayo!! Thank you!

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