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    You (Part the Sixty-Seventh)

    Story written on June 20, 2008 by MutedTempest.
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    Dana and Shane talk, and then Dana and Alice talk and THINGS ARE REVEALED!!1

    Shane came back before too long, and it was a good thing, since not two seconds before she got there Dana had decided to go back to the bar and get more Jack and Coke, and this time she had no intention of holding the Jack down to just one shot. Shane saw the direction she was heading in and shot an alarmed glance at Tom and Max, who both shrugged helplessly. They’d suggested that maybe she shouldn’t get anything else, but she’d insisted and neither of them felt comfortable telling her not to.

    “Hey, you wanna get out of here?” Shane asked, putting her hands on Dana’s shoulders and turning her back around.

    “Oh…were you ready to go?” Dana asked, a little startled. She hadn’t seen Shane coming toward her, focused as she was on getting back to the bar.

    “Yeah, there’s nothing more to see. You look like you’re bored anyway,” Shane replied, trying to keep her tone even. She was really worried and didn’t want Dana to see it, at least not while they were in a public place. It would only embarrass her.

    Dana shrugged and gave a slight nod. With a wave to Tom and Max she turned and started walking for the door. Shane spread her hands at her friends in a gesture of helpless apology and followed her.

    “So what was going on in there?” Shane asked gently on the drive to Dana’s apartment.

    “Huh? Nothing, I was just going to get another drink,” Dana replied somewhat defensively, but she softened a second later. “I’m sorry; I know I’m being bitchy. And I know I promised you I wasn’t going to drink anything else, I just…I don’t know. I’m really upset,” she said with a defeated sigh.

    Shane kept her eyes on the road, but she nodded. “I know you are, and you have every right to be. But drinking yourself into a coma isn’t going to make anything better. I’m not going to tell you what to do, but I don’t want to have to drag you to the ER because you drank too much. I don’t want to see you sick again.”

    “I’ll be all right,” Dana insisted.

    “I know you will, but I want you to stay that way. I don’t like it when you’re sick, and I don’t want you making yourself that way because Alice upset you,” Shane said.

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    2. hiya, long time no see. I’m reading your stories though, I did not forget about you. Just didn’t comment on them for a while, sorry about that. Great update, I feel for Alice, it’s kind of understandable for her to think this way. But then again, I was surprised about it as well. I’m glad she opened up to Dana. Hope they are going to be able to figure it out.

    3. MT. 1st of all you “don’t suck with people.” Secondly, it’s your story, you can write anything you want. Thirdly, it was only my 2 cents worth and not even a nickel. So there! Thank you for updating this story so quickly and you, again, did a marvelous job with the explanation and their conversation. Thanks for Shane’s rescue. A feeling useless and thought D wouldn’t need her anymore? How sad was that! It just makes me want to cry. Was she still on medication? Her feeling was like ten steps backward. If D were alive in S5, I wonder if this would really happen. MT, you are just full of surprises. So, would it be a brownie party over Shane’s? I hope A & D would get to relax and enjoy themselves a little bit after this horrendous night. Excellent chapter, thank you very much.

    4. totally get what alice said i do wonder what would have happened if lara didn’t leave, would they have gotten together u know. Anyway great chap! great writing!!

    5. I second HD: It is your story and you definitely do not suck with people. In any case… Excellent update, MT!! This is what I like to see from this point in their relationship — communicating. Shane was perfect. It was just what Dana needed. She watched out for her and also gave her space to get her thoughts together. Dana needs to realize that her near-death experience will haunt all her friends for a long time to come. Both Alice and Dana seemed to make their points when they discussed what happened at the party. Alice acted badly and I think Dana was able to logically explain her upsetness. I was wondering if/when Alice would feel she wasn’t needed. It’s heartbreaking and understandable. I think Dana’s actions on this point will speak more than her words. You are crafting a remarkable story here, MT. Thank you so much for telling it and sharing it with us. You rock!!

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