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Window of Opportunity ch. 74
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Window of Opportunity
Chapter 74
Bette
Alice came in and gave me my garter to put on. She pinned on my pink ribbon and thanked me again for not forgetting Dana today. She thanked me for the gifts that we had gotten her and I told her that our love for her only grows as each day passes. Her being in our lives is so right. We hugged as she told me how happy she was for us.
“How does Tina look?” I asked her.
“Beautiful. I told her if you didn’t show at the altar, I would marry her.”
“Not a chance. I will most definitely be there. Al, remember that night I met her? You were there. Did you think so many years ago we would be here?”
“You know what…yes, I did. Bette, you fell in love with her the moment you saw her. I never believed in love at first sight until then. It doesn’t matter what has happened over the years. You both did some whacked things but you’ve each forgiven one another, spent a lot of money on therapy and today is the prize. I never had any doubts.”
“I know and I never thank you enough but I really do appreciate the kicks in the ass that you gave me over the years. I love you Al.”
“Ok Bette, I know that. I know this is your wedding day but come on…no need for the emotional breakdown here. I love you too. You look beautiful. Tina looks spectacular. Today is going to be incredible.” I knew she knew. She was trying to keep me from crying and she was right. I was emotional because today was my dream come true. After visiting for a few more minutes, she left to get dressed. Vanessa came in with Angie and to say that she was the cutest little girl in the world was an understatement. She had on her dress and Shane had put little purple flowers in her hair. She looked like the angel she was. I pulled her into me and held her.
“Mommy beautiful.”
“Did you see Mommy?”
“She got purty dress and she beautiful.”
“That she is sweetie. Are you ready to walk with Aunty Helena and throw the flowers?”
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Lovely.
I cried through the whole thing! I wonder how you were able to write it all out! Thank the spirits above to have given you the the ability and we are all grateful. Keep ’em coming.
NAG that was a beautifyl ceremony I can’t wait to read what comes next for this wonderful family. PPS
I love it. It is all so honest, sweet and gentle. I like the way you put your story together. Please don’t stop writing. ps I’m also a fan of the new story.
That was beautiful.
Beautiful NAG, just supremely beautifulespecially including a passage from the prophet for it surely fits them and their life to a T. and the Apache Blessing was truly absolutely perfect for Bette and Tina.The entire ceremony was so perfect for “our girls.” This chapter almost made me get dressed up and read it again. Thank you. Post when you can.
WOW..you continue to take my breath away. The way you write these two…thanks..
WOW! That was amazing. Can I get you to write my vows?
Simply Amazing!
**teardrop** that was so beautiful NAG. I only wish things would turn out this way in season 6 of the L word. IC needs to take a page from your book. beautifully written as always
Amazing!!!! The way you write WOW!!!! THank you
This was beautiful! I just love this story and this chapter brought tears to my eyes. But honestly I need always a tissue when Dana is mentioned. The way you wrote this ceremony made me feel like I was there…
NAG, on my hands and knees I bow to your mastery! That was incredibly beautiful and moving. “We have been together before – we are together now – we will be together always. I know deep in my heart you’ve been created just for me and there’s no other in this world that can match me so perfectly.” **gulp** You are magnificent NAG, you allowed me to have a front row seat to their wedding! Now don’t be rushed with finishing this. We have the reception, the honeymoon and 6 more months before those babies are born. Can you tell I love this story????
Perfection!!!!!!! As I always say, this story is the best of the best!!! Thank you.
BEAUTIFUL, SIMPLY and MOST BEAUTIFUL. Hi my little Gummy bear :o).
****sigh****lovely…you missed your calling newy – you should be a vow-writer!
WoO, HoO, maybe you can write a sequal to this story called HoO. Going to read the story now & will come back to comment but know I will love it before I read, Thanks NAG, Md
Beautifully written! Perhaps you can pass this idea on to IC for next year ;o)
“You were born together, and together you shall be forevermore… Aye, you shall be together even in the silent memory of God.” => What a moving and joyful celebration of the union of two hearts, two souls destined to become one. What a lovely, heart-tugging, awesome chapter, NAG! BRAVA! BRAVA! AND THANK YOU!!!
wow that soooooo beautifully written, thank god for tissuse,lol… so worth the wait. alice had me with her speach :) :) PPS
Brilliant poignant and exceptional; thanks for letting us see their journey through your eyes
You have a way with words. This was beautiful and well worth the wait! Bring on the reception and the honeymoon! PPS
OMG, were you heaven sent or what, where do you find the perfect words for your stories? NAG those were some deeply felt words, you done good girl. Thank you, Md
It is ironic that you write their wedding on 6/28 because it was my parent’s 50th wedding anniversary. I am looking forward to Bette and Tina spending time together as a married couple.