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    Once a Cheater pt. 6

    When Bette woke the room was silent.  She glanced at the clock on the nightstand, it read 10:13.  Sitting up, she stretched her arms above her head and then forward to touch her toes.  Taped to the armoire that tastefully hid the room’s television set was a note from Tina. 

     

                            After last night, I thought it might do you some good to sleep in a little.

                            Angie and I will be down on the beach.  I think Carol opens the gallery at

                            10 we may go by there for a bit.  She hasn’t met Angie.

                           

                                                                Love, T

     

                Bette was out of the bed like a three year old thoroughbred on the first Saturday in May.  She grabbed her cell off the nightstand and punched the speed dial for Tina. 

                “You have a phone call,” rang from the desk.  Tina had left her cell sitting near the laptop.  Bette grabbed the extra room key from the top of the armoire threw her shoes on and headed out the door.  She must have looked like a mad woman because people hurried out of her way as she bounded down the stairs and out of the lobby of the hotel.  She hit the streets running.  A golf cart nearly clipped her as she crossed the street without looking.  She prayed to whatever god was available to listen that Tina hadn’t left the beach.  This was one time she hoped Angie protested to stay longer than her mother had intended.  The painter was selling his watercolors but Bette didn’t take time to notice.  The scent of deep fried seafood wafted on the air as Bette passed Armstrong’s.  Nearly there, please, please, Tina be there.  Spun gold that’s what her hair looked like.  It shimmered so that Bette thought God could go blind from the reflection.  After all if she were in Heaven that’s how she’d spend her time, admiring Tina from above.  She was helping Angie bury her legs in the sand.  Bette couldn’t see anymore of Tina’s calves but her shapely thighs were still exposed.

                “Need some help,” she asked a little out of breath.

                “You okay?” Tina queried.

                “Yeah, just trying to get a morning run in,” she fibbed.

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    Comments

    1. Oh, that was so very sweet! Sniffle. Such a beautiful and perfect way to propose, and re-commit for real for a second time. I just love this story, LM. Great chapter, thank you.

    2. Lovely. The pictures in the gallery was truly inspired, such a wonderful and novel way to propose. Happily Tina said Yes, and she too loved the way Bette proposed. And Angie giving Shane’s favorite quote, Shane is in so much trouble with the Moms now. Loved it. Post when you can.

    3. Loved the “Grow old with me” proposal, such a beautiful, thoughtful twist on the “will you marry me”….the saying “out of the mouths of babes” takes on a whole new meaning if said babes are hanging out w/ Shane & Alice!!? Thx for the update, bring on the party please :)

    4. i like that… and so glad tine said yes… we all knew she would,,, keep writing thm in love… its what we want to see and read… PPS

    5. I love how crazy Bette was chasing Tina and Angie to keep Tina from discovering her surprise. I adored how Bette proposed and was thrilled that Tina accepted. Angie is just priceless, LMAO! So now we get some wedding planning time…oh and Bette’s Mother?

    6. Not good teaching Angie potty mouth sayings. Tina and Bette do not seem to be happy about that. They are however extremely happy about being together for the rest of their lives. This is a wonderful story.

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