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The One – chapter 2
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Chapter 2
‘You are in love with her, aren’t you?’
‘How do you know?’
‘Yoda’
‘Ha…of course…does anybody else know?’
‘I don’t think so…how long?’
‘I don’t know…a month?’
‘A month? Why don’t you tell her?’
‘Are you crazy? What should I say? Hey Al you’re my best friend but I fell in love with you. What do you think?’
Dana stoped in front of Shanes house.
‘Why not?’
‘Why not? Well first of all she is my best friend…I don’t want to loose her. And second…what if we try and fail? I would loose my best friend and we could never meet again like we did this morning. It would be awkward. What if we are together and Gabby knock at the door? Alice is too important for me. Please don’t say anything Shane!’
‘No word from my lips but do you want to hear my opinion?’
‘Ok!?’
‘I think you should try…maybe she is the one for you and you are the one for her…’
‘Maybe you are right….’
‘Yeah maybe…so…will you talk to her?’
‘I will think about it…I don’t know yet!’
Shane opend the door but before she backed out of the car she said
‘I’ll be there for you…whether you talk to her or not.’
‘Thanks Shane. You are a very good friend. Have a nice day.’
‘You too. See ya’
Dana drove home and Shane jumped in her car to meet with a client.
Meanwhile
Bette and Tina walked down the street on their way home.
‘Hey Tina…isn’t this Carmen over there?’
‘Yeah you’re right. Do you think we should say hello?’
‘I don’t know…but why not? I mean she dated Shane for a few weeks and I like her.’
They crossed the street and walked over to Carmen. She was alone and read a book. When they approached the table Carmen looked up and smiled instantly. They hugged
‘Hey guys…what are you doing here?’
‘Walking home. And you?’
‘Just reading…it’s a nice day so I thought I sit in the sun and read a book. Want to join me?’
‘No we were at the Planet for a few hours. Now it’s time to go home.’
‘How is everyone?’
Bette and Tina smiled. They knew that Carmen was mostly interested in Shane – related information so Tina answered
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Yes, please continue. The story is going fine; everyone is ALIVE, no one being killed off. PPS
bloody cool story ya going here
Sorry I missed you last post. I like the start of this story and you are doing a fine job. Looking forward to your next post. THANK YOU, jay wild!
don’t keep asking just continue; this is developing fine.
Good job JW, like the way your putting this together. Looking forward to antoher update. Thank you, Md
Oh please please please don’t let it be Gabby.
Oh no, I hope Alice tells Gabby to just “step off bitch”. Dana will be totally heart brokenif she gets to Alice’s and finds Gabby there.Say it won’t be so!!!!
I like the idea of a group story where everyone gets equal time unless you need to lean a little more towards a certin couple from time to time. Please continue I like the direction you are going with Bette trying to be a match maker for Shane.
Really like this ,love how you are bring the gang together as a family. thanks
it better not be gabby… and i hope you continue with a few story lines… bette and tina… alice and dana… and maybe shane and carman… keep it going… PPS
Always love a hot Bette and Tina. Alice does need to move forward and away from Gabby.