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Eternally yours: when a lifetime is not enough # 7
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Previously
The first time they ran into each other blurred Bette’s mind once more and brought fiery feelings as usual. And also pain.
Until three and half years ago, she had only her dreams, but at that certain night, Bette could taste, touch her dreams and more, smell its fragrances. That night there was a body she could worship.
At that night, more than three years ago, the art collector discovered minimalist feelings: that woman, her lover, her love was hot like the sun and wet like the rain. That night Bette reached Tina for the first time, at least, at this lifetime and she couldn’t forget the impacts.
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It was during a blackout and this was something nobody was predicting or waiting for. The gallery owner was working, during the whole week in Toronto.
When the lights went down, Bette was at the bathroom between the 5º and the 38º floors. She was so tired; that didn’t note which floor she was. The mocha needed a bathroom to calm down her sleep state. She still had a lot to do.
And there she was: alone, in the bathroom of an empty building and the blackout made everything worse. However, Bette got really stressed when she discovered that the door was locked and no emergency lights were turned on.
“What the fuck?” She tried opening the door once more.” What?” She tried again.
“I can’t believe this …shit!” And Bette had to find the wall to help her with the sudden dizziness. Her hands helped her to adventurously try to find the sink. The dizziness got worse.
“What is…this…? I just can’t believe…” Bette wanted to scream but she could only murmur to what she thought it was the mirror. Nonetheless, she couldn’t see her reflex anymore. It was completely dark. And the dizziness got only worse every minute.
“Yes, I have to agree with you…”
If she could, Bette would jump to the voice, but her senses shouted alarmed with the presence and the feeling of warm gathered to dizziness. She was more than confuse. She turned to face the blackness.
The voice
That voice that collided with her back, just now, hit her heart, but she couldn’t´ contain her fear, “Jesus Christ! You… scared me!”
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OMFG…that was something else. I still can’t wait for them to reconnect. pps
Can I say OMG, that was so freakin sexy and hot at the sametime Braz, what a mixture of emotions both women were feeling and doing to one another. thanks for another great chapter.
OMG… I want front round seats when they reconnect!!!! :)PPS
Braz, your writing always takes my breath away. Can hardly wait for the reconnection and realization of that moment. Should be totally exciting and beyond HOT. PPS
Braz, you have outdone yourself! This is so beautifully written. I adore the silence – it adds tremendous intensity to the entire encounter. I could feel the scene unfolding as though I was privy to a tremendously private moment between two strangers connected by the power of timeless love. I can’t wait for the two of them to meet again!
always nice to see your post.
Wow, that was beautiful…two lovers from another lifetime meeting for the first time in this lifetime. Excellent update Braz!
You said in one of your cha[ter that you didnt believe in soulmates. Thanks God I do. I believe that they found their soul mate in our life time.
THUD Jeeezzz, Braz! That first encounter was very powerful. Their intimacy was like listening to a symphony of love, which goes into crescendo, until the climax of all the senses play the last note. Holy wow! We are speechless! You certainly mastered very well how two souls may find their way to each other, recognize their bond and show how demanding their need for one another may be so strong that it may numb their normal reasoning. In every sense, it means it has trascended time and circumstances. What an amazing and unique story you are telling us, dear friend. Thanks for sharing it. PPS Big hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. Lucero & Marsha (Latin JC’s Salsa Aunties)
holy cow that was hot and awesome. please more, thanks!
OMG, the ending makes me wonder if this is a dream or a memory. I am hoping it is a memory and Bette and Tina are about to reconnect.
Oh how the darkness can sometimes set us free… or primal desires and rages set free to pursue the comforts of the flesh… where we can truly expose our souls to others in ways we fear to expose to ourselves… the intimacy of a stranger and a connection that will haunt you… that will never escape your taste buds… your sensual prowess… you will always look into the shadows seeking that person who brought you to life… I hope these two will find one another and there carnal souls will be united in joy… passion and desire… you are a completely brilliant my poetic beauty… your words sting my soul like droplets of honey… simply all consuming. Mucho Love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)