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Ease and Intimacy…
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Ease and Intimacy… Part 2
“Bette?”
“Mmmm…”
“Do you think we have it?”
Bette’s eyes halted on the words on the Sunday newspaper in front of her, a sly smirk crossed her features as she heard the question in Tina’s voice from behind her. Was it worth playing dumb or going with the flow of the conversation?
She decided on the former, just because of the way Tina had asked…, did she even need to ask…, “have what baby?”
“You know…”
“No, I don’t know…”
“That thing…”
“Thing? Am I meant to know what you’re talking about?” Bette asked with a smirk, thankful that Tina was still busying herself in the kitchen and that she couldn’t see Bette’s face.
“Bette…” Tina admonished, did she really need to spell it out…
“Tee…”
“I’m just wondering…, you know…, about what they said…”
“What who said?”
“You know…, earlier…, at the planet…, the girls…”
Bette chuckled, “what…, the new coffee Kit is using? I could ask her for some…, if you want it…”
“Are you being obstructive on purpose?”
“Obstructive? I don’t know what you mean…”
“You know exactly what I’m talking about…”
Bette turned as she heard the slight edge in Tina’s voice, “honey…, we have it…”
Tina stopped as she heard the soft reply from Bette, “but what is it that we have?”
“Come here…” Bette said as she moved her chair out and gently patted her lap.
Tina wiped her hands on the towel and walked slowly to Bette, her eyes not leaving those of her partner.
“T…?” Bette said as she held her hand out, encouraging Tina to straddle her lap.
“What?” Tina asked quietly with a smirk as she draped her arms loosely around Bette’s neck.
“You know when I come home from work and you know what kind of day I’ve had without even asking…?”
“Yeah”
“That could be ‘it’”
“Okay…”
“You know when I’m at the Planet waiting for you and I instantly know when you have walked through the door…?”
“Yeah”
“That could be ‘it’”
“When I’ve just sold an expensive piece of art…, the one person I want to tell is you…, that’s ‘it’…”
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I don’t know how you do it..but you can make a non NC-17 soooo HOT! D*mn! And H*ll yes…we want an installment 3…4…5…6…50! lol.
and i second that!!!!! sooooo hot!!
I agree with cbox..so hot, an ssoooooooo sexy…PPS
That was beyond hot!!!!!Damn, I could envision the looks that they were sharing and hear the sultry tone that they were using…that was erotic. Wow!!! PPS
Are you kidding Jo…of course I’ll take another installment. They’re right, they soooo “have it”.
They so have it Yes please keep on writing. It people like you that will make this summer shorter. thanks
Hell yes you need to do a third one!!! Then a fourth and fifth etc etc etc…
They have it Jo because of people like you! Thanks!
Oh no Jo.. you can’t just left like this and think we don’t want an other!!!! come on.. I’m with the rest why just make it a 3 chap story?? It’s so not you… lets say.. 20 chaps or make it 30.. wait.. why can’t it be 50??? by the way… not even NC17 and that was totally… HOT!!! please… come back soon!!!!! we will be waiting…
That was amazing…imagination goes wild…well done and yes part 3 is needed…I just love the converation of both parts…you have a great imagination…
Very good, plz continue.
WOW…that so was sooo hot! :)PPS
They have it and you have a way of writing it. Looking forward to more.
of course continue Jobadge! It is awesome. these two are freaking hot!!!
Tantalizing. Their voices are so sultry, wicked foreplay. I can so see JB and LuH saying your words and using your looks. More, please.
That was the sexiest non NC-17 I’ve read in a while! PPS
yep, they have it, the story has it and we need installment 3
They so have it and so do you.
Of course, we want you to continue with as many chapters as you want to write because we sure as Hell will be reading them and waiting for more. This wasn’t even an NC-17 and it was so over the top HOT. You could write a grocery list and make it too HOT to handle. they “have it,” because you have it and you know how to write it. Thank you so much for posting. PPS or at least post when you can.
I’m with chatterbox! PPS
They have it, and so don’t you mate. Please continue on with many more. I just can’t wait to read just how Tina shows Bette she is going to “have it” Meeowww. Thanks mate. xo
You still have it Jo. I have missed you writings and enjoy reading the ones that you put out to us. You have a way of drawng the reader in as if I am sitting right there at the table with them. It is like watching the scene unfold right in front of me.
they have ‘hot’ especially together…
they sure have it!!!:)
They so have “it” and you have written “it” marvelously. Thanks.
BOY OH BOY DO BETTE AND TINA HAVE IT!!! And of course more installments are wanted!
wow thats hot and sexy. please more, thanks!
Haha Totally Agree with Chatterbox! It’s not even a NC-17 and it’s SO HOT! You got ‘it’ :D
I love how playful that was. And hot! Thanks for posting!
Wow, you are unbelievable, I didn’t realize how much I missed you until I read this story, and reading it really made me feel so warm and fuzzy, and what a powerful return Jo. I missed you so much my friend, I hope everything is fine and you are doing great. “Sigh” Such a great emotions from very simple words, I admire you very much and you always remind me why I do by writing such sensual stories. Post sooooooooooooooooooooooon and there is no need to ask if you should do a third part, you already know the answer to that, and I don’t think that anybody would even think for a second before answering your question.Hugs&kisses
Oh, I’m sure they’re soooo going to “have it” ! Well, Jo, this chapter was simply perfect ! I really enjoyed it immensely. In fact, I obviously wish you would update this story, but frankly not so much for the impending NC 17 scene as much as for the tone of this fic. You know, Jo, with your stories it’s usually not so much what is being said or done ( not that your “plots” and characters aren’t interesting ) — it’s more a matter of how. Well, I’m not sure I’m making myself very clear here, and I hope you won’t take this the wrong way because in my mind it was really supposed to be a compliment. What I was actually trying to say is that you could write about pretty much anything and I’m sure I would still be interested ( well, anything that involves B and T of course ! LOL ! ). This was excellent, Jo. Thank you so much. PPS !
Yes, Bette and Tina have it and you so have it with your writing. So hot!! And yes continue. As always thank you for sharing your talent. Post again soon. A faithful fan.
Of course we want more. This is so hot and all done with just words…I can’t wait until you add some “action” to the next one!!!
Only you can make a conversation like that so erotic. Awesome
You so have it. It is a wonderful mix of sensuality, humour and wit. Thanks for this fine writing.