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    I WANT YOU BACK Pt 3 &4

    Story written on July 14, 2008 by iminlovewithtiona.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=70268
    Author Notes:

    The stunner calls…

    Bette cut in quickly “Get out MY HOUSE!!!  You pair of twisted bitches- I NEVER want to see either of you again as long as I live”!!

     

     

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    The beep sounded and Tina’s dulcet tones came through the answerphone “Bette its Tina please pick up …I’d like to explain…. I swear I never knew she was your girlfriend please give me a call my number is 01277358972 failing that I’ll be at the club tonight from ten I’d really like the chance to explain babe” with that Tina hung up.

     

    Babe…Bette thought she had the audacity to call her babe, at one time Bette would have stole the sun from the sky to hear Tina call her that. Oh Tina…Tina fucking Kennard Oh how she had loved her..How she had loved to make love to her, it was never fucking with Tina always with tender and passionate.  Images flashed in Bette’s mind of Tina…her beautiful body, and fantastic breasts, how Tina looked just as she was about to come… but then the image of Jodi and Tina came into her head, tearing at her heart.

     

    Jodi the treacherous bitch that she was, she thought that Jodi was being faithful to her, she couldn’t believe that she would cheat on her..but at the same time if she was honest, she knew it wasn’t love, well not on her part anyway, it was about not being alone..Feeling… Like someone wanted her, someone being in the house with her and sex on tap helped.  To Bette Jodie was like a fuck buddy. No one held her heart. it had been shrouded in cement since Tina fled after the Candace affair.  She had not seen head nor hair of the elusive blonde in nearly 2 years, and then this morning she woke to find her in her bed.  What brought her back to her now?  Why? Just as Bette appeared to be getting her life back together?  Did she want her back? Was she on some kind of revenge mission to get Bette back for her infidelity?  Is that why she had slept with Jodie? Was Tina Playing games she had to know, she decided she would go meet Tina tonight, and find out her game plan.

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    1. This was also a little better. But what is Tina thinking. That be will fuck her right then and there. I am trying to understand this. It just does not seem like Tina at all. Thanks

    3. I have to agree with akalittlered 100%, on all chapters. I’ll prob give it more of a chance, but I have to say none of this truly seems believable. Willing to give it more of a chance though, and I appreciate you sharing.

    4. I did not expect that at the end. what is up with Tina? she has not seen bette in two years and now she expects bette to just have sex with her even after finding out that she and jodi have been together. eew I just got a visual of jodi and tina. anywho, I’d like to see bette response.

    5. Good way to win someone. I can’t see Tina doing this,since she should know how Bette is. Bette would not look at this Tina twice. To brasses and slity. thanks

    6. I agree that we have a certain leeway with character development in fanfic and that it is just hard to “believe” in a character’s behavious when we know them so well and the author takes liberties but I like the story so far and look forward to the next post. This is just an “alternate reality” Tina/Bette story for me so I’m not going to be critcal of it at all. I hope you keep with it!

    8. I see kind of negative comments to this story in regards to Tina and how she is acting, remember Bette had an affair-people can change based on circumstances from their past, also its only a fanfic…and to say tina wouldnt act like that…Im sure season 3..we never thought she’d act like that? All I ask is that you give the story a chance, I’ll give it 2 more chapters and if the response is still mediocre I will delete the story.Thanks for your comments guys x

    9. sounds like you are taking the comments as constructive criticism. I have a read the chapters and it was a little confusing at first but it makes sense now. Tina- I really can’t see her being like that..maybe if she is drunk and doesn’t know how to have the conversation she needs to have. I will stick with your story and see what happens.

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