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The Island – Chapter 24
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Shane won the $300 pot. It wasn’t a week, but, 10 days before Alice and Dana finally got together. Harrison had two days and Sam picked two weeks.
Alice was working hard on a major project. There were other people in the company that could do this work, but, Alice insisted on making the first pass. She was up and working at five and kept on through the day.
She was being a workaholic and it was intentional. She listened to what Shane said and wanted to give Dana time. Alice knew drowning in work would help keep her mind off Dana. And when (*not* if) they got together, Alice would adjust her work schedule accordingly to create more free time to spend with Dana.
Harrison had confided to Dana that this merger was really very minor. It was almost like Alice was looking for busy work. Dana had noted an increase in Alice’s workload ever since Shane left. This project took it to a new level.
It was the second day of Alice’s self-imposed death march. Dana had come in several times during the day, but, Alice rejected any attempts to distract her. Dana was able to get her to eat. A little. Dana knew that if she left food nearby that Alice would eat. Dana would bring in a plate that had something chopped up in easy, bite-sized pieces with toothpicks. There was minimal mess and Alice could eat while typing.
Alice took short bathroom breaks, but, Dana could not convince her to extend one to go take a walk or just get some fresh air. Alice said she had to get back to work. She was on deadline. It was an arbitrary one that she made, but, a deadline was a deadline.
Dana spent her time re-arranging Alice’s schedule and staying on top of the day-to-day tasks as much as possible so Alice could stay focused. She was busier than usual, but, nothing compared to Alice.
It was almost midnight when Dana went to check on Alice again. Dana found Alice still shuffling through various reports and inputting information into the computer.
“Al?” There was no response so Dana walked over to the desk “Alice?”
Alice looked up finally with a blank look. She then seemed to come out of her trance and give a weak smile. “Hey, Dane. I’m just about done. Another hour should do it.”
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OMG! You wrote this so beautifully. Superb, MaGoose! (clapping) Love the self imposed death march. Cutting up bite-sized pieces of food is one of the most considering and thoughtful thing to do for the ones you care about. Rule #77 was the last one or should #76 be the last? because obviously #77 did not work. LMAO. There was no way D could maintain a “professional demeanor” under the situation. Maybe now, A could start slowing down with work and gave D more attention. FINALLY they were together and all under 10 NY minutes. Doing a HDD now. Lucky for us that you fixed your computer problem. This story continues to blow me away with good surprises. THANK YOU very much MaGoose!!! I better start researching the iron. They would be leaving soon, right? Lastly, I like the hint of D would reciprocate in the future chapters.
OK, WOW!!!! Umm not much left to be said when you comment after HD other than the fact that this is going to make my drive to Florida…umm interesting. 77 LMMFAO, good times..soooo funny. I promise to be good Goose as long as you keep the computer gremlins away, the dinks on the loose..and POSTS LIKE THIS! WHOOO HOOOOOOness. Excellent excllent chapter my little buddy. Thank you so much. A-You’ve been had..HF-Listen to Goose Almighty :-D I love you guys!
77 rules that is crazy. Yeah I will stay out of the commenting war. But I am the favorite Dingo anyway. So i will settle for that. I love you goose. Great story. Great update. Great everything
On so many levels this was pure awesomeness. The humor… the love… the hot Danish…. MaGoose with every chapter you prove again and again why your one of THE BEST Danish writers out there. Thank you!
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon great update and I love that they have finely make love for the first time.
Oh my….MaGoose…please continue soon….I can´t hardly wait for you next chapter…..this story is like a drug to me!!!!A very good one…please….do me a favour…kill off Gabby by kicking her down a cliff by accident!!!
hehe how can ya forget I’m a huge Shane fan??? Well it is bloody hot here and now it just got hotter after reading this, excellant update
:D Magoose!! lol Well i have to say your brilliantly slow build up with there relationship was SO worth the wait LOL Tht was well … HOT! Reli well written and even had ur classic humour in the beginning lol :). Loved it as always Thnk u so much for a reli great chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next. And wats HDD?? These ppl r going on bout lol?? PPS THNKS :D xx
*+*SummerBreeze*+*, HDD, not to be confused with HD (my initial), lol.HDD = Happy Danish Dance, somewhat like the Dana dance on the show. The HDD is only performed when there is a VERY HAPPY Danish moment, such as in this post, when A & D “FINNAAALLLLYYYYY” got together. MaGoose, plz feel free to explain further should I have missed something….
Are any massages innocent, I mean really!!! Great Stuff!!! I am really enjoying this story!!! Keep Up The Good Work!
Oooh I like number 77! And I don’t want to push you too hard, I don’t want you to suffer from burn-out! Great chapter thanks …
WOOOOOHOOOOOOO I am doing the HDD alllll over the place!! AWESOME updat MG I totally loved it!! I think I do need a spotter coz I think I am spazzing from all the HDD I am doing! 77 was funny yoo,I so need a Dana (need a massage) You rock my friend!!! PPS but Dont burn urself out!!
ya know, if you ever get around to making some more Dana clones, I could totally use a massage. lol. Sorry! I’m a perv, not that this is new information. This is excellent as they all are, and I’m surprised they made it to 77! Although I think hail is right, it’d be 76 since 77 didn’t really work. lol. You rock muchly.