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The Letter ch. 11
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The Letter
Chapter 11
I went back in quickly, told Alice I had a massive migraine and that I had to leave and tried to make my escape. She tried to insist on driving me home but I convinced her that I would be ok and that I would see her for breakfast. I only got away with it because Thomas dropped some information on her that was too juicy to pass up. She made me promise to call if I needed her and I made her promise to take a cab if she drank too much. Before she could realize that she was letting me leave with my supposed migraine, I hugged her and Thomas and made my way to the door. As a few women tried to approach me, I sidestepped them and kept going until I hit the door. Shane was coming in as I was leaving. I stopped to talk to her and told her that I was leaving but that Alice was inside. She questioned why I was leaving and I asked if we could talk it about at breakfast. She of course just smiled at me and let me go.
When I got home I poured a glass of wine and just sat there in wonderment. I had met a woman. A woman who was not only beautiful but who was someone that I felt an actual attraction to. The women in my past weren’t ones that I typically felt my body responding to. I mean, sure it did when we went to bed but not while sitting there talking in a crowded room. Trisha had been the only one that had happened with. Jodi never got that response out of me. Tina Kennard did though and I knew virtually nothing about her. I hoped I wasn’t getting excited to be let down. What if she and her friend the surgeon were more than just friends? She wouldn’t have asked me to dinner if that were the case though would she have? She did say that she had just recently moved here so maybe she was trying to meet people. Putting her hand on top of mine though was not typical behavior for trying to meet a new friend. I needed to talk to Alice in the morning as much as that would pain me. I can’t believe the one time I needed her to be intrusive, she hadn’t even noticed that I had met someone.
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At first I was wary of this story being a diehard Bette and Tina fan. Now, I am really excited about this couple and Bette’s family. Can’t wait for the dinner date and what comes after.
Yes, I knew that Tina would be the one. She love kids and was sointouch wit Em being sick. Yes I love this. Bette will be surprise when she reads the letter. I love this. thanks so much for posting again
I was waiting for you to post :) Tina is so wonderful and it seems like Bette and Tina will hit it off =D Now you should get to work on that date ^_^ I’m just sooooo excited =)You know for a moment I thought you would make Dr. Peters an important part of the story like the person Emma wants for Bette but I think it was just my crazy mind playing tricks on me =/
I really loved the part where Al refused to meet Bette at the planet. Then when Bette told her it was about a woman, Al changed her tune in a hurry!! LOL funny!
NAG, I love your Tina and we all know that she is the person for Bette to fall in love with. They will all fall in love with her of course, and she will be so good for Bette and the girls, they need Tina and just don’t know it yet. “Our girls” will fall so hard for each other and their intimacy will be unlike any they’ve ever experienced before and I know you will make it wonderful for them when that time comes. Thanks for posting again this weekend, I know how much time it takes.
Oh, another post (I’m thinking of paying for your friends to stay an extra week on vacation). This was soooo good. I love the naturalness of your stories. Tina is the one for Bette and her girls…this is what Trisha would want for them. Now I know you won’t make it totally smooth sailing for them…afterall, you are an author!
Can’t wait to read about their date! Tina is simply adorable. I loved the interaction between the family at The Planet – everyone was shocked by Bette’s admission. I hope we get to see the date sometime this weekend! :>)
Alice is funny,lol. Love that tina showed an interested in how Em was and loves kids. that just shows what type a person tina really is. I can tina having a blast with bette’s girls! :)PPS this pace is fine write and post when you time.:)PPS
I’m happy Bette’s gonna get used to being a slacker, she needs down time. Lovely chapter. PPS
wow…I so love this story! When Tina said that she loves kids and if they would join them for dinner….I got so excited!! That will be a love story and Bette really deserves it! And I think this time the kids will be ok with it. Great chapter…can’t wait for the next one!
*excited* LOL thanks
What a nice surprise – 4AM insomnia hits and here’s another chapter! Love, Love, Love this story – how do you do it? Agree with pattifl about not being too sure about the premise (what, no Tina?, no Angie?), but am a 100% convert – come to think of it, you did that with WOO too. And agree with Christy – Alice is just LOL! PPPPPPPS.
NAG, I just finished the last chapter and already this is here, YAAAAAHOOOOO. As I got to the end of pg. 3 I was thinking this is where NAG throws in the drama, apparently the page wouldn’t turn fast enough for me not to have thoughts. I glad Bette didn’t have to blow her date off to go be with Em. Still knowing that there will be some drama someplace, I’ll happily await it. Thank you, Md
So happy Bette didn’t have to run to camp & that Tina loves kids. Alice is too funny! Can’t wait for the date. PPS!!
That was really nice.I am so glad Tina loves kids loves to hike and really, really likes Bette Hope the date turns out well. PPS
now thats what i like to read… love this story… bring on dinner
excellent! i know this must be a weird/tough time for Bette. I love that the family is around to help her sort through it and I’m glad she was upfront about the kids too. first date time :)