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The Island – Chapter 25
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Alice and Dana were coming up for air after a seven-hour marathon (OK — four hours, a nap brought on by sheer exhaustion, and then another two hours) of the most earth-shattering sex either of them ever experienced. And for Alice, that was quite a statement. She couldn’t believe that her sweet, shy, goofy Dana could be such a tiger in bed. It ran the gamut from raw sex to passionate lovemaking. There was not an inch of either of their bodies that was left unexplored.
Dana felt a little guilty. She knew Alice was exhausted after the long hours she was putting in at work, but, the other woman just seemed to get more and more energy as the night went on. Dana figured she could schedule some nap time for Alice later today. She just needed to make sure she wasn’t in bed with her because, frankly, no napping would get done.
Alice was currently curled up into Dana’s side while Dana held her close. Dana had a satisfied, sensual smile on her lips as she gentle caressed her lover’s skin with her fingertips.
“You’re amazing, Dana. Are you sure you haven’t been with more women?” Alice asked as she finally had the strength to lean back and look at Dana.
Dana gave a little chuckle. “Yep.” Dana pushed softly but insistently on Alice until the blond was on her back again with Dana leaning over her. She started to pepper Alice’s collarbone with small kisses as Alice ran her fingers through her lover’s long, dark hair. “But that doesn’t mean I haven’t -” Dana used her tongue to circle one nipple and then gently suck on it “- had many detailed daydreams -” Dana circled the other nipple with her tongue and then sucked on it “- about everything I wanted to do to you.” Dana moved back up and was now sucking on Alice’s earlobe while her hands roamed Alice’s curves and stoking the fire that Alice now felt would never be truly extinguished between them.
There was a soft chime sound to indicate someone at the door. Dana immediately sat up. She mentally reviewed Alice’s schedule for the day. “Are you expecting someone?” She said as she looked at the clock and over to the door. It was only 7 AM. Alice usually spent 6-8 AM handling correspondence. Harrison would have just called.
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Ok I left a comment and the sucker did’nt post UGHHH SO this one better hehe! ARGGG LARA,that woman is nothing but trouble,glad Al is shipping her off the island ASAP!!!Don’t worry about me,but I sure could use a Dana spotter If you could be kind enough to send me one I would be gr8ful hehehehe. I always do the HDD whenever I see that u have posted and then do the HHDD when I read it!! Another awesome update MG and boy do U rock when u write!!! Im glad everyone is following me with the HDD coz this story is GR8!!! PPS
Haha excellent update… will Lara be making a reappearance?
I finally found the 1st post on ourchart’s “Kate, Leisha and Erin In a New Group” thread under the Fan Fiction forum. It was posted by Starbuksjunkie. Unfortunately, there is no way to confirm if she was the person created the AlShaDane dance #. Here is the link: http://www.ourchart.com/forums/kate-leisha-and-erin-new-group … maybe iluvleisha or AJ can give us more detail on the dance moves. lol. Actually I thought your explanation was quite eloquent. (more laughs). Back to this chapter, again it was filled with more fun, loving and surprises. I am so glad that D threw Lara to the curb immediately. Not liking one bit of her comment to D. That was not very nice. Now, three days could be a long time, again unless it is NY time. I am worried that the sous-chef might pull something, After all they were all at the main house. MaGoose, I love these tiny twists and turns. They really enhance the story. Could A get any cuter? “not wearing anything underneath”, entering the room in the nick of time all business like, and “not sure I’m going to be able to walk for a couple days.” LMFAO. You rock and rock again!!! I hope the breakfast Lara brought over would include waffles with all kinds of the trimmings like strawberries, whipped cream, lots of it, maple syrup and etc. Get my drift? lol. One last thing, I anticipate trouble with this NY trip with Lara there and maybe Gabby too returning from the camel land. I humbly request that you continue to give us more Danish goodies even if angst might be involved. p.s. I am still researching “The” iron. THANK YOU BIG TIME!!!
Aww yes…this reminds me of the beggining of my relationship…granted we just broke up… but I remember the beggining when it was all love and lust and you can’t get enough of each other…I love this part…give us a little more of this before the drama begins…PPS
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A tiger eh…go Dana!!!!
:D Ur on fire with ur posts! Dana’s a Stud!! A sex Machine! Or a Tiger as u sed lol. Pretty hot i have to say and then …. Lara, i must admit u scared me for a second until Dana was completely uninterested. But she gunna be in New York and so will Al and D, little worried bout tht but i know u will take good care of them u always do :). LMAO Loved how they found out who won the bet as well perfect ending i must say! lol. How out of tune with things am i to not know wat HDD meant lol. Anyway thnks for letting me know, and wat meanies not puttin there dances on youtube lol! Thnks for a completely awesome chapter cant wait for more Thnks agen :) Much Love xxx
Phew, that was one hot chapter! Such a great addition, well worth the build-up and sexual tension, and at last a release! I was not questioning your pacing at all… Can’t wait for the next chapter…
WAY TO SHOOT THE BITCH DOWN AL. Lol. I loved this chapter. Sweet and Sassy. I was hoping it was going to be Shane and Harrison at the door exchanging the bet money to whom ever won. BUT THIS WAS BETTER. LOVE GOOSE
haha great chapter!!! i got a little scared wen lara showed up lol, hmm i wonder if she’ll give up on dana so easily :)
Hi MaGoose!Both your major stories in this site are great but I really have a soft spot for “Closure”. I really loved it. This is certainly different but I like it too. I have to say that I’ve been really looking forward to the sex scene of the previous chapter and you really did great. I think it was the best way for them to finally get in bed together. Also, I always like to see a “tiger but inexperienced” Dana and an “experienced, funny and in-love” Alice in a story. In this chapter they’re really sweet! I have a request though! Can we have a LONGER sex scene in the future! :) I’m thinking maybe a whole chapter! lol Ok I know I’m a perv. But you really do great with the NC-17s! :) Great story! Keep going! Thank you!
I just want to quickly point out that someone did create a AlShaDane (choreographed) Dance number a year ago. http://musicandlyrics.warnerbros.com/80sglamband/stage.php?u=7589 — According to excedrin_personality on mediablvd’s alshadane thread (5/25/07) that it originated from ourtchart.com. I don’t have time to dig any further right now. Will let you know. Anyway, I thought this was the closest thing to a HDD. LMAO. Will comment later tonight, MaGoose.
lol… I love Harrison! So Lara makes an appearance AND is being sent to New York were Alice and Dana will be in a few weeks… hmmm… interesting very interesting