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Are you the one? Part 4
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Howie laugh out loud. "Well, you can always come back to dad’s company after they dismiss you for sexual conduct."
"Well stop it young man. That’s too mean of you. Now give me the details."
"Haha, you would want to grab a pen and a pad, big sis. This is going to be interesting."
In front of the planet
Dana felt as if her legs were not hers while crossing the road walking towards the Planet. They were shivering like mad. She was glad that somehow she managed to drag them to the front door of the Planet. She stood at the side of the entrance, inhaling and exhaling a breath as if she was out of energy. She hoped that things would turn out right today. Her brother had filled her with the "101 ways to make a girl fall head over heals in love with you" on the phone. Yes, yesterday was quite a night. They discussed about it for almost 4 hours. In the process she yelled a lot at her bother for talking so fast that she couldn’t cope with him. And in return her brother yelled back saying that she was slow and stupid. And for that both of them laugh until they had stomach pain. Dana had written down the important steps so that she wouldn’t forget every single one of them and then analyzed them carefully. In the end only did she realize that she had almost 100 pages of notes spread over her bed. She laugh to herself. "Goosh Howie you better be good, cause if not, I am going to kick your ass when i come home. OK, let’s do it tomolo!"
Dana looked at her watch and found that it was time for her to go in. She inhaled and exhaled one more time before she pushed the door to get in. She scanned the place for Alice. "Bingo, she’s here, thank god" Dana muttered. And she thanked to god again after she found that the table in front of Alice’s table was unoccupied. She walked towards the table. "OK Dana, calm down, you can do this. Just be cool." As Dana arrived at the table, she was sad that Alice didn’t notice her present as she was busy looking at her laptop and jotting down some notes. Dana had no choice but to purposely pulled the chair as noisy as she could in order to get Alice’s attention.
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(27 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Good thing Dana is a surgeon and used to memorizing things. It’ll come in handy with all the data Howie provided. Hee! Love the flirting thing they had going on at The Planet. Dana’s letter struck the perfect note. The only thing I worry about is whether Alice will be upset when she finds out Dana’s true identity. Another great chapter, uhhuh! Thanks!!
MaGoose, she wrote everything down so she could refer to her note pad. lol. Seriously, uhhuh, this was a really fun chapter. It’s fantastic that D made up her mind and the flower was a very nice gesture. The letter too was heartfelt. I could picture the entire scene in my mind. Excellent work and I am looking forward to their meeting/date. Thank you.