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For the Love of You, Revisited, Finale…kind of sort of
“Madrina” Laurel’s lit up in a huge grin. She scrambled down from her chair at The Planet and threw herself full throttle into the arms that always caught her.
“Basis, how are you today?” The dark haired woman looked down at the vibrant child in her arms.
“I’m great, Madrina. I missed you.” She wound her arms around her neck and nestled close.
“I missed you too” Shane placed a kiss in the wild brown curls that characterized both of Bette and Tina’s daughters. She could not believe how much she missed this little girl in the two weeks she had been gone.
“Alice took Jelly and me to the Aquarium but they didn’t want to see the turtles. You’ll take me soon right?”
“Maybe tomorrow if it’s ok with your Moms.”
Laurel laughed. “It will be ok, I already asked if I could spend time with you tomorrow Madrina.”
“Did you?” Shane’s heart swelled with emotion. She had no idea when she agreed five years ago to be her Godmother or Madrina as Laurel liked to call her that it would mean so much or that she would have such a close relationship with her. “How did you do on your show and tell project with the turtles?”
“Oh it was fun.” Laurel chatted away and Shane caught every other word. Just the excited tones in her voice told her things went well.
“Hello stranger” Jenny greeted her with a swift but meaningful kiss. “I don’t know if I should be jealous or not.”
Shane gave her a slow smile. Jenny often teased her about the closeness between Laurel and her.
“Don’t be jealous you are Madrina’s number two girl just like me with Mama and MaTi. Jelly is number one but if I was born first I would be number one. Its ok, I got Madrina before you. One day you will be number one too” Laurel declared solemnly.
Jenny struggled not to laugh given the serious expression that Laurel had on her face as she explained all this to her. “Thank you, Basis. I’ll remember that.” Jenny told her.
They headed back to the table where the rest of the gang was seated.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
So you simply leave it like that? I LOVE this story and your writing, but you just “jacked me up”. Like Bette, I need more of am explanation.
K can’t believe how you had all those yrs passed,,LOL. And loved how you had Madrina, being hispanic I know what that it :). Now you left us with a shocker on this ending loved it.
No way can you leave it like that. This ending just begs another chapter in their lives to start another story. As you said, Tibette will never end, there is always something to write about and for us to read. We will continue to ask for more until you grant us a sequel or another chapter to complete that ending. YOU ROCK, Kelika!!!
I can not beleave you stopped there!!!! One more chapter PLEASE!!!! Thanks K
oh no u did ent…get back here missy! i need more.
I am hoping there is a sequel out there waiting for me to start reading. This just can’t be the end! I adore this story!
LOL. It’s not the end right? :D You can’t stop like that ! :D
Nah!!!! U don’t get away with that as an ending; that is most definitely ‘a continuation’. i forgot why did Laurel get the nickname ‘Basis’. pps or i will hound you!!!!
I have to agree that that wasn’t very nice, but it got my attention. I hope you plan on posting again soon.
lol u cant leave us like that come on womam
Wow the next chapter is going to be challenging to write, I mean how can you explain such a thing to a child. I loved the up date Hun, this story is just getting better, and it can go on and on. You always have something to write, you are really great. Thank you so much. Post soon
So kind of…..means there is coming a sequel? Yes? You can’t leave it there Kelika….
Jeeeezz! You had to leave it like that, huh? Oh, come on, K! You know that a sequel is the right choice, for the praise of love, that is. As for the adequate response to Angie: Isn’t that obvious? Hahaha Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us and hope you may come back with more. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
You’re right, this story will never be over…especially after Tina’s last statement. It’s only just beginning. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
WOW what a place to leave it!!! sequel? tibette is never over!
That was awesome and love it. Please don’t leave us to long, thanks!
Now play nice.
Okay, this chapter of their lives is over with, now bring on the next chapter. You are right they will never be over. Years from now Bette and Tina or Tibette will continue to be mentioned and hopefully written about. I would still love to see Bette father Tina’s baby.
No!!! you can’t leave it there . . .
Kelika…you’re kidding right??? You’ve got to be…you would never leave it like that. No, no, no!