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Ten days.. it’s been ten days since I came here. Since we came here.
Dana was doing much better; at least, according to the doctors she was. She still hadn’t said a word since the scare. She was allowed to talk, but she preferred to look. Alice decided to just ramble about anything that came to her mind when this became too unnerving. She only asked Dana yes or no questions.
If she didn’t want to talk, I’m not going to make her. It seems best, anyway. I don’t think I want to know what’s going to happen after all of this is done, when Dana’s back home.
Alice turned away from a soundly sleeping Dana, not knowing what to feel. She was set to go back home in one week.
It’s good, it’s good, it’s good. It’s great. She’d technically been dead almost two weeks ago, but now she was almost recovered enough to go back home. Of course this is great! But…where do I fit in? Do I go over to her place? Sure, I guess I could. I’m Dana’s best friend, her best friend that’s taking care of her. She told me not to leave. I’m not being weird. This staring thing and the fact that Dana hasn’t said anything are just throwing me off. I bet it’s nothing. Anyway, I really could use sleep that wasn’t on a chair. A goddamn uncomfortable one, at that.
Nearby, Dana stirred slightly. She slowly opened her eyes. The room was dark, only slightly lit by the blinking lights on the myriad of monitors beside her and a small desk lamp. Alice was sitting on a chair drawn up as close as possible to her bed. She had pulled her knees up on the chair, resting her head and arms on them while she thought. Dana sighed quietly; glad that Alice was always right there by her side when she woke up. Alice heard the sigh and turned to face her. “Hey you. I’m sorry, did I wake you?” she asked softly.
“Negative,” Dana answered, her voice painfully scratchy and raspy. She winced, knowing that was her fault. She couldn’t exactly explain to even herself why she hadn’t talked. Alice hadn’t questioned her, though, so it didn’t really matter. "My internal clock is all wonky, though."
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*sigh* I wish we can go back in time. I kick Mama Chaicken’s a. You write the story. Wonderful. =D tsehe
You are doing a wonderful job with this story, tunafish! I am so glad that Dana is getting better physically. Alice really is an amazing friend to stay there with her. Love that Dana is talking and that were able to share their usual banter before things got serious. The heartfelt conversation was great. They still have a lot to work through, but, at least they are communicating. I hope Alice will open up more to Dana. Thanks so much for the great update!!
tunafish, watching S3 is a constant reminder why I should support Danish. I thought both ED & LH’s performance were superb. I can never get enough of watching them on screen. Onto this post, I echo MaGoose’s comment. The whole staring thing seemed so Dana. I too hope that they would continue working things out. You are doing a great job. Thank you very much!!
I think your hinting works ;) Great story though! PPS! (I’m hooked!)
u gotte love the pairing i love the banta between them its so funny even this is making me laugh just as much
Fabulous! Really loving this story, please keep it up :)
very cute. i love the subtle flirting and how unsure they are of how the other feels. great story, post soon.
Wow, wonderful story. So sweet! pps
Oh Ilene why didn’t you just do this in the show! I’m about to watch all of the L Word again from season 1, season 3 is gonna be tough so I’ll just think of this story. Great post.