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For the Love of You, Revisited, Epilogue…kind of sort of
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Previously….
Bette and Tina had the biggest row of their relationship in their second year of marriage over Bette wanting to have more children while Tina did not. Bette was adamant that Tina not go through childbirth again as she almost lost her with Angelica. She argued that she could easily carry their next child.
“No” Tina said and walked away.
Bette was stunned. Tina said no to her and then summarily dismissed her. Oh no she didn’t Bette thought then stormed after the blonde.
She found her at the waters edge. The sun was low in the sky but more than an hour before setting. Something in the blonde’s stance made her pause. What was she missing? They had spoken of having three or four children in the past. Why was Tina suddenly opposed to more children when she wasn’t before?
“Hey” Bette stopped short of touching her wife.
Tina glanced at her briefly “Hey, yourself.” She replied before she turned her gaze back to the water.
“You want to tell me what’s going on?”
“Angelica wants to know who Laurel’s ‘daddy’ is.”
On to the story…..
Bette gulped. They knew they would have to face this question one day, just not today. In the scenarios they had entertained it was always Laurel asking not Angelica.
“What did you tell her?”
“I told her that we used a donor like we used with her.”
Obviously that wasn’t the end of it if it got Tina in the state she was currently in.
“What did she say then?”
“She said that even though I was her birth Mom it looked like I was Laurel’s Dad because Laurel looks a lot like her and I. She wanted to know why you weren’t her Dad or why I wasn’t her Dad since we obviously could do that even though we said we couldn’t have a baby without a man.”
“Uh oh.” Bette felt her heart triple its beat for a second. “Then what did you say?”
I said let’s talk about this when MaBe gets home, of course.” Tina answered with a smirk. “I told her MaBe could explain everything much better than I.”
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WOW!!!!!!!
Now you can’t just leave it like that! Did Tina get her wish to have Bette’s baby? It kind of sounds like it. Please add some more to this wonder story.
Oh my, just like Rau, I am in so much trouble already because I’m about to tell you that you created this by leaving us with questions at the end of each chapter when you say you are ending it. Like, Rowan Kennard Porter, blue-green eyes, indeed. You introduce him to us greedy TiBette lovers and do you really expect us to ignore that and not ask questions. We know how he was created and we know Bette is his “daddy and with Tina’s eyes but still there is so much more left to be said about him and them. From his birth till now and he is 2 yrs. old, Laurel is at least 4, and Angie should be about 9 or 10 give or take a few months. I’m assuming (and you know what that makes us)that Bette and Tina started on the process to make him right after that statement was made in bed. Right? As someone else said, take epilogue out of the title,please. Just PLEASE write another chapter when you have the time and/or inclination because we know you love them as much as we do and can always give us more of your thoughts. You write about “our girls” and their little family so beautifully and so well and no one else can do them justice but you. This chapter was beautiful in so many ways and pgs. 3 and 6 had me crying my eyes out. On pg 3 with Angie ready to do serious harm to someone over the possibility of taking away BaSis and her mommies loving and talking about another child and then you introduce him to us well, that’s what movies are made of. It’s all about love. We know you are trying to settle into a new job and we don’t you to neglect your wife, and she is a very blessed and lucky lady to have you but, please write again when you have time, this story can never end. Thanks so much for sharing your awesome talent with us as well as your love for “our girls” and their family. We really aren’t ready to let them go. Think about it please. After this next season, you and other writers are all we will have left to keep them with us. Have a great week.
Great as always. So good to see the updates on this story.
Okay, since were all smart enough to figure out how Rowan got there, but it sure would be nice if you gave us the story.
Yesssss, more I agree we have to know about Rowan’s conception. we are not ready to let this story go.
Wow, what a treat to come home to after an especially rough, long, crappy day at work!!….Hmmm, ok, so I’m thinking the “kind of sort of,” means definitely not over yet – at least in my dictionary it does ;) We have to know the story behind Rowan’s creation…And, oh boy, blue-green eyes..I’m in love already! :-)
Gee I feel so mean now that U told everyone I said the previous ending ‘sucked’ BUT this was absolutely beautiful altho by reading the comments already I can see u have more dissatisfied customers. You just do TiBette so wondrously my friend. There are not enuff superlatives within me to describe the experience of that exquisite scene where Bette talked of the source of her glow. Perfect and if u want to come back with more plz do so. Thank U.
It was excellent! Really really excellent! Well, I agree with Jackiee1, we are NOT ready to let this story go! Don’t stop ! It’s soo goood! :D
Oh Kelika, please take “Epilogue” out of the title and put us out of our misery. And then keep writing this story forever :)
Oh the glow section was amazing. And Rowan sounds very cute. I agree there is more to this story. Please continue. Thanks for posting!
That was incredible, thank you so much, I don’t want this story to ever end.
K, what a pleasant surprise to read this story,,,it was perfect!!!!
kinda sorta? nah now we need to know about rowan!!please? :))
OH Master Kelika.. the girls are right.. we ‘kind of sort of’ need to know more about Rowan.. and maybe ‘kind of sort of’ more kids?? we kind of sort of need to know how they made him.. and kind of sort more things more!!! please.. keep posting!!
K, As always this was so Amazing and loving. I so loved this. Rowan sounds so handsome with his blue-green eye’s. Does he have dark hair like his Mama B or blond like Mama T? Thank you
Hey Kelika, Thank you for a great chapter. Just great to have BEtte and Tina together trying to explain things to Lauren. Precious to have family moments like that. Then the heat that is B and T in bed and doing their hot and sweet loving. I was right there. Mmmm, smoking. Then their conversation about completing their love with another child. Adorable. Finale was gorgeous too, as the kids were just kids, mibehaving and havging fun. Loved it so please post more soon. Many thansk from Your Loyal Fan.
OMG Kel…just when you think everything is over, you throw another party! I have loved this story from the beginning and I was so excited to see this. (Must remember to thank Rau for complaining to you). Kelika..this story has so much life left in it I hope you keep going (I feel like I’m begging you like I beg Ilene for a Tibette spin-off). This was superb!
This is awesome and wonderful!