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Interesting Curves 3 (formerly Untitled 3)
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Alice entered the Planet and quickly found some unexpected prey. She helped herself to a seat across from Bette. “Must have been an off night for you, if you’re here this early.”
“Don’t start, Alice.” Bette didn’t look up. She continued jotting notes onto a notepad. “I just couldn’t sleep.”
“What? Wait, don’t tell me you’re still upset over your little straight girl.”
“You’re entering dangerous territory, Alice.” Bette closed up the notepad and placed it into her bag
“I’m not saying anything that I haven’t said before. C’mon, where’s your sense of humor?”
“I have a fantastic sense of humor,” Bette snipped.
It took willpower to keep Alice from giving an open scoff at that statement.
“It’s just,” Bette stopped for a moment, a smile completing the wistful look. “It’s Tina. She’s not like anyone I’ve ever met.”
“Oh.” Alice took a moment to process the information, which was complicated by the fact that Alice had once been one of those that Bette had ‘met.’ “So what makes Goldilocks so special?”
“It’s elusive, something I can’t really capture with rational discussion.”
“So you have an irrational jones for the straight girl.”
“No. I need to go, see her, apologize for last night.”
The light suddenly dawned. “You’re chasing after her.”
“I’m not chasing. I’m explaining.”
Chasing, explaining. What did it matter? Alice knew that none of these terms had before been in the sexual vocabulary of Bette Porter.
Fuck. A new reality was dawning on Alice. If Bette really had strong feelings about this woman, where did that leave her?
# # #
She took a deep breath and knocked. After some rustling within, the door opened in a narrow slit, and Tina’s voice. “Yes?”
“Hi.” Bette noticed the returned smile from Tina. “I hope you don’t mind.”
“Just a second.” Tina disappeared for a second. Bette could hear the chain being detached. The blonde then stepped outside, closing the door behind her.
“I just wanted to say I’m sorry, if last night was awkward for you.” As Bette spoke the words she brought out a colorful bouquet of spring flowers.”
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Still awake?! Of course we are!:-) Wow, it looks like things have come to a head very quickly. Can’t wait to see what happens next. You write very well, and I’m finding your T/B beginning very engaging. I’m loving seeing how both of them are dealing with this new thing between them. PPVS!
I have a feeling Tina’s answer may be no. But then again you may want to send some drama into the mix…. or maybe Tina dating Bette will provide enough drama for everyone. : )
oh i am so wide way, why are you posting more tonight…
All I can say is poor Eric. We know what the answer to this question will be. PS.
i’m awake…i’m always awake when i see your story…Eric is a damn fool and i hope Tina will say No…she will, right?
Oh man..Tina is cheating?! That’s not good, to start that way. But I’m thinking that we’re all awake now and that things really are coming to a head where she has to make some tough decisions. I am sure that she will say no, at least I hope, and that things will take off for her and Bette. Thanks and post soon.
wide awake!! glad to see your post so please don’t “shelf” this!! poor Eric is about to get a clue i hope! PPS
Well, no, she’s not cheated on Eric. She’s just lusted in her heart, like Jimmy Carter used to do. How about Metamorphosis? Wait, Kafka did that one. Transitions? Uh, no trannies here. Ch-ch-changes? Damn it! Bowie did that. Come up with your own damn name!
I look forward to a new chapter everyday. Keep rolling.
Hell no and get out of my house! “Bette can you come over I need to talk to you?” Well that’s how I think it should go anyway. PPS
Damn, talk about bad timing! It’s now or never, it’s do or die time, Tina! Fish or cut bait…wait, that was a bad analogy… anyway, new B&T is always good, especially when you are the author! Yes, continue, please!
Oh I’m plenty awake…just been at work & reading on my Blackberry so commenting has had to wait till I got home…well I hope that T has enough sense to say ‘no,’ after all she just said she’s known for awhile that it’s over – missing a sense of familiarity is not enough reason to stay in a relationship….for goodnees sake pseud please don’t keep us in suspense & PPS!!! ;)
to fucking funny, am i awake. yes, and it was fantastic as always. you never do anything wrong except be so busy. thx
Bagels or banana……..I hope its bagels. More please. Thanks.
The answer is no Tina, don’t do it, let him go now before you make a bigger mess of things. Pseud, what’s with all the neediness, you know we love your stories, and wish you would post more often. You write, and leave stroking your ego up to us.
Definitely still awake, and can’t wait to see what route you’re gonna take with this! Please post again soon!
Well crap! That wasn’t supposed to happen. I hope she breaks it to him gently. PPS!!
Great as always!
Oh no not a proposal! Tina has to be honest with herself and get rid of Eric. And is Alice still hung up on Bette? She is seeming pretty negative. Thanks for posting!
Hey Pseud, Just caught up ewith this great new adventure adn holey moley, Tina is in a right pickle. Her feelings are for Bette although she is scared of Bette’s reputation and confused about her own sexuality. The world will see her differently. Finally there is Eric in the mix. Does she break-up with him or talk things through. Then Eric has the audacity to ask for Tina’s hand in marriage. On the flip side Bette is really feeling a maelstrom of emotions as she tries to deal with Tina’s rushed exit and Alice’s questions. Can’t wait to read more of this delicious drama. Many thanks for returning and bring with you this terrific tale. Your Loyal Fan.
Where is the next chapter, This is a great story of how they get together. And yep just woke up and found this gem waiting for me.
Oh I’m awake and still here waiting for more. I hope Tina’s answer is NNOOOO! PPS
zzzzzzzzzz…. *wakes up abruptly* Wha..? Did you say something? :D failed attempt at humor aside, I’m following the story with much interest. title suggestion: Awash In a Sea of Confusion ;P
I’m awake now…after reading this one. Tina needs to get the ball rolling and let Eric go now before things really get out of hand. PPS
You don’t have to ask if we are awake…Eyes Wide Open!!! I hope T doesn’t cheat on Eric..just get out now while she is just dreaming of Bette being the one to touch her. pps
Oh,now I feel so annoyed. Wasn’t it enough for Eric to be at Tina’s apartment when Bette stopped by? No, now he has to go and ask her to marry him. Tina needs to stop skirting the issue and say she wants to see other people. Lots of good comments above so I do hope you don’t let the story end so abruptly. Hmmm…title – how about “Soon”.
I so think Tina is going to say YES to Eric. Tina is being a fool when it comes to Bette. So loving this!!! The way you write B&T it just engaging. Thanks PPVS
i’m totally hooked and lovin every bit of this. hope there’s more soon!
I just caught on to this story. I’m loving it so far. I love how Tina can disarm Bette. Please continue. You are doing nothing wrong- just post asap!Thanks!
very much awake and loving this story. please don’t quit now. this is becoming very interesting in that Tina has to make a very difficult decision for a str8 girl, not so difficult dor someone that has just realized who she really is and what she wants: Bette Porter. great chapter. pps
wow…i was so upset when i got to the last page…more..more….
Keep going, keep going, keep going! This is a great one, pseud!
Just read all 3 chapters. Great story pseud…more, more, more!
Holy shit, run Tina run, run to Bette!