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Eternally yours: when a lifetime is not enough #14
Previously
The blonde couldn’t watch the sadness parading inside her lover’s eyes. Tina kissed Bette with more than ardor, with devotion and leaved the car.
When Bette opened her eyes, with the impact of the door, Tina was, once more, out of her life. She had leaved Bette’s flesh, fragrances, heat, love, life to meet her lover: the mocha’s enemy.
Bette’s heart was inconsolable.
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“Tina, are you ok?”
The question had been repeated for almost everybody who knew Tina intimately. She was aggressive and sad. She was frustrated.
When people asked Meltic what was wrong, the brunette answered that she was too stressed and a little depressed. “She got too many work and we’re moving to a new city, new home…It’s normal…She’s already taking the right pills.”
What Meltic really wanted was diminished some way the impacts from their adventure at the Orgyophant. Far from the results he expected, Tina was more distant than ever before. Two weeks after and the blonde was silent and introspective.
And there was more. One night, when they were having sex, when he was about to come, Tina leaved him alone. She took him out of her folds and disappeared into the bathroom. He felt disrespected and hurt, but the blonde didn’t say anything. Behaving this way, she could only be sick. All he could diagnose was stress that lead to depression. There was nothing more that would explain her reactions.
Voice that Tina was sick, nonetheless was not just a foolish excuse. Meltic wasn’t the kind of men who just thought about the moment. He was already waiting for the consequences. The man knew that the best way to fragile and discredit someone is to tell people she was sick. Not any sickness, but something that involves her judgment, her reactions. Something that would take her from her habitual state. And Tina was out of her habitual state, he was sure of it. That would be his tactic if things got worse.
He would convince Tina about that. She is sick.
Yes, Meltic had thought about the brunette he had seen with Tina at that unpleasant night, but that was irrelevant at that moment. They met at an orgy house. They had sex. Great sex. But what else Tina wanted? A relationship with that woman? Well, this could only prove how sick she would be, than.
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(33 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Braz I must say that your stories are intoxicating. By far I think this is my favorite story that you have written, at least IMO :) wonderful chapter!!
Braz..you continue to amaze me. Thank you for your beautiful words.
Each chapter just captures me more. Braz you write their emotions so eloquently, it is as though I feel them as I read. I only wish you would write more often. The time between chapters seems unbearable! I hope Fate and Destiny see fit to bring the two lovers together in the next chapter. Meltic is going to be trouble…
meltic needs to go he can’t force tina to forget bette! :)PPS
wow, guess I’m first. Really like this story, hope to see your new post soon.
Hiya, Braz! *waving with enthusiasm* You know this is our fav story. We love how you are making Tina to start recalling of other times shared with her soulmate. That is the only way that she will understand how strong her bond with Bette is and why they belong together. Once she realizes the depth of her feelings, she will be able to fight for her. On the other hand, Meltic’s strategy to “force” Tina to forget Bette will only fail, once she is intuned with Bette. This is just fantastic, dear friend. PPS Lucero & Marsha (Latin JC’s Salsa Aunties)
You know you are one of the reasons that makes me want to explore life and everything around me more, it’s a great feeling and not a very easy one to evoke, reading for you always charge me with energy and love for love, for life, makes me crave experiences, so thank you for that, believe me it’s healthy been exposed to the Braz world.
This is awesome, poor Tina!