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The Island – Chapter 31
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It was difficult to tell who was most frustrated by the lack of progress in the crash investigation: Dana, Sam, Shane or Harrison.
Both Shane and Harrison were quickly looped in on what had happened and all four were kept informed as the investigation continued.
The Stranton fortune could open a lot of doors but in this case there did not seem to be any doors to be opened. The driver was a loner and was basically just known by sight around town. Very few people even knew his name. Sam was able to find out that he had come into a lump sum of $5000 shortly after Alice and Dana had arrived in town. Unfortunately, it appeared to have been in cash and there was no way to trace it back to the point of origin.
They were able to confirm that the man had been extremely drunk. They were also able to get a team to carefully inspect the van. Besides several bottles of cheap whiskey, there was nothing out of the ordinary.
Sam had compiled a short list of people that might want to hurt Alice or Stranton Enterprises. Both Sam and Dana immediately thought of Gabby and Nadia. But a check on their status showed that neither had left the location in the Mohave. On top of that, they both seemed to be taking their jobs very seriously and were given high marks from their supervisors.
It was Shane who saw another way to look at the issue. She was teleconned into a security meeting with Sam and Dana. She suggested trying to work it from who knew Alice would be going to Dana’s home town.
All three were stunned as they began listing names. There were so many people within all levels of Stranton Enterprises. Dana pointed out that even the plane itself could have been tracked fairly easily.
Harrison brought up the possibility that Dana might have actually been the target. It was her hometown and someone could be pretty sure that she would come home for her father’s funeral.
That idea brought Dana up short. She really didn’t think she had any enemies — certainly none that would want her dead. Even Gabby and Nadia had their chance to have killed her. While the beating was excruciating, she did recover and was fine now.
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Hello MG… first I wanted to say I hope things get better for you… if ever you need to talk to someone never hesitate my friend… I am here for you… as for this story… you are freaking amazing… brilliant… your mastery of suspense and intrigue is astounding… I think I might come to you for some lessons… the Idea of someone trying to hurt Alice is so devastating… yeah she can be neurotic at times but she is awesome… but more intriguing is the idea that Alice wants to have a baby… that would be so cool… I think you can kick ass at that… woooooo hoooooo… you rock and roll my friend… mucho love and hugs, JC
Wahoo for a happy Danish family with tons of kids running around… so cute. Sorry i forgot to comment on the last chapter… it was very good I liked it a ton! This chapter was great as well… a great mix of serious and silliness with love connecting it all. I cannot wait to see what happens in NY. In all their discussion of possible “bad guys” I am not totally surprised that they overlooked Lara… but I wouldn’t but it passed her… everyone knows Cooks are a little crazy… and she is soooo into Dana… and she has redhair… and i bet she’s been keeping tabs on Dana. Anywho, that is my theory anyway. Can’t wait for your next update (but I really can so don’t feel rushed). Take care o’billiant one. -A
Great to have an update. Sorry I don’t think I did comment last time. Fantastic as always, sooo cute …
HDD HDD all the way baby,WoooooHooooo MG u out did urself on this one!! Sorry I have been MIA lately,changing jobs and shifts is alittle draining ughh! I totally love this story and I can’t wait to see where you go with is pregnant ideas!! If ya need a friend,u have me MG!! PPS
Well done Goose! As you know I have a particular affinity for a pregnant Dana and Alice at this moment myself! LOL Really looking forward tp seeing your take on that someday! Love that Alice was already on the same page and that Dana was stressing trying to figure out how to tell her…very Danish! On the personal front: whatever you need, my friend, whenever you need it…no questions asked.
HOWDY QOG, missed you around yesterday…umm A got a lil excited LoL Everyone gave an excellent review, i love the whole seriousness with the caring part mixed in…i suck with words so im just going to say OUTStaNdiNg job my buddy. You obviously know we are all here if you need us. “Tougher than woodpecker lips in an iron forest” :D
MaGoose, Gabby and Nadia taking their jobs very seriously?! LMAO. teleconned? Is that a real word? I learn something new every day. *more laughs* All the security detail was giving me a headache. I am glad that I am not in involved with the planning. haha. I so agree with D that under no circumstances that A should be the bait. Very cute with the CEO-mode and CEO-voice. You keep on surprising me with your creativity. Excellent job bringing in the future kids discussion. And the ending was perfect. Thank you very much MaGoose for continuing this story even though you have other things going on. I wish you well. btw, AJ: never heard of your saying before. Glad to know that you all are looking out for MaGoose.
extreme hours at work so alas I am reduced to “me likey”
Hey MG,Hope everything is ok now, as many people have said – if you ever need to vent, or just talk to someone feel free to pm. Once again a great chapter… I needed a fix. It was really cute.
WoooooooHoooooooo…..it would be great to see them having lots lots of Dana juniors and Alice juniors,heeeee…..can’t wait for the next post! Thanks!
YAY :D Another post lol. Im looking forward to findinf out more on this mysterious van driver and wat his reasoning was to want either Alice or Dana hurt. I LOVED how you ended this chapter lol it was so sweet and cute but also Sexy lol :P I take it from there reactions they both like the thought of the other pregnant haha :) Loving this story more and more as i read on and i can not wait for more of your talent to gracr our computer screens in the form of ur story lol THNK U :) PPS. xxx