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Falling At Your Feet – Chapter 15 – Finale
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Chapter 15 – Finale
Bette had just showered after her basketball practice when she heard the doorbell ring. She hurried downstairs, but Kit, who had been watching television, was there first.
Before she had the chance to look over her older sister’s shoulder, she recognised the voice and the drawl. A huge smile spread across her face. She stood next to her sister, seeing Tina was carrying a bag from The Planet.
“Kit, what did we agree on people with food?”*
“Check if it’s good, if it is, let them in,” Kit rolled her eyes but couldn’t stop a small smile coming at the surface.
“I hope I’ll pass the test,” Tina smiled.
“If the food’s not edible, I’ll have a bite of something else,” Bette said with a sly smile, her eyes taking Tina in from head to toe.
Tina blushed and Kit took a step back, holding her hands up.
“I don’t want to hear this!” she exclaimed, throwing her head back in a dramatic gesture. She retreated to the living room and Tina stepped inside the house.
“Do you know I really love how your self-confidence got such a boost?”
“You have, but I don’t mind hearing it again.”
“I really love how your self-confidence got such a boost,” Tina joked.
“Well, it’s all you, baby,” Bette answered softly, taking Tina into her arms. They shared a tender kiss and Bette took Tina by the hand.
“Come on, I have a surprise for you at my room.”
“Surprise, room. Sounds good,” Tina attempted to wink, but failed miserably.
“It’s not what you think, horn dog,” Bette laughed. “Altough I like the ways of your mind.”
They brought the Chinese to the kitchen so they could warm it up later.
Tina followed her girlfriend up the stairs to the room that had become her second bedroom. There were times she almost lived in this house – but not much sleeping was done in this bed. Other periods, Bette stayed over at Tina’s all the time. There wasn’t an agreement to it, it just happened. Like so many things, it just came and they made no big deal of it. They understood each other and words were often not necessary.
“So,” Tina said as she sat down on the bed. “I hear Emily’s finally hooked up with Emmet?”
“Yes,” Bette grinned. “I’m so happy for her. She’s been after him for years now – she had finally given up, actually. She’s just ecstatic about it.”
“What about New York? Is she still going?”
“Yeah. Emmet’s gonna go to NYU. I don’t think Emily would have said ‘yes’ if he wouldn’t. I don’t think she’d be able to deal with a distance and if they would have just had something until next school year began, well, she wasn’t up for that.”
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Please tell me there’s gonna be a sequel to this???! I can’t believe you had her leave! I hate Melvin!
kill fucking Melvin!!!!!!!! gosh im going to cry i had break up’s
4 words for you,,,, “when’s the sequel coming”
Too, too sad, Melvin is a bastard. You were just kidding, right? This is not the final finale? I love this story.
NO way this is the finale. Fucking Melvin.
OK I’m awaiting the sequel because you simply cannot leave it there!
Omg-you did NOT just do that! My heart hurts!
Fucking Melvin Porter, god I hate him knowing him if Tina did write to Bette he would probably intercept them so she would think Tina had forgotten all about her. Please make this situation better for them. PPS
and that’s the end? What a killer!!!!
I can’t take this, and I know that you would say not every ending is a happy one, but please fix this, you can G, this chapter is heart breaking, God how can you leave us like that. I love your work G and you are brilliant but you have to do something about this. Poor Tina and Poor Bette, I really don’t know who to feel sorry for more.
Your going to continue aren’t you?It would be an injustice if you didn’t.
What the f***. I usually don’t comment much. But today – these sad stories get to me. What is the matter? This is the second story today which comes to a heartbreaking end. Has everyone sunk into depressions today? Must be the weather!?!?! Please fix this. It can’t be the End. PLEASE…
God..No, I cant accept this chapter as a final chapter.
you did this on purpose to torment us! of course there has to be a sequel now just don’t take to long to start it! :)PPS
WOW!!! That was hard to read. Melvin is such a Asshole!!! We so need a sequel to this. Thanks PPS
Hey Genner, What an emotional rollercoaster ride this Last chapter has been. IF it does need to end here, could there puh-please be a sequel. Ripping Bette and Tina apart like this is just way too traumatic. These gals just so belong together. Please continue this adventure soon. Your Loyal Fan.
OMG. No. You can’t end it like that. ): It’s too tragic. )):