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The five-point-tongue-technique
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It had been months since their return from New York after Bette went after Helena. Their lives together has moved smoothly. Bette had several successful therapy sessions. She was anticipating being reinstated to the University in the next few weeks. Helena’s new non-profit was moving well and in good direction with the foundation she built with the grant giving by her mother and the assistance of her enthusiastic Board of Directions. Their relationship has suffered through a few bumps, the biggest being Bette’s brief indiscretion with Tina. They got over this and had moved into a comfortable groove. They were continually growing together and making their own stamp as one of the power couples on the WeHo lesbian scene.
They mostly enjoyed their combined family life and the challenges it presented for them. When their children could be all together this created a sort of controlled chaos. There was a bit of sadness when the house was quiet, especially for Helena who knew it would be months before she would see and touch her children again.
Helena began to consider more about having another child, one that she wanted to carry. Bette excited but was hesitant to proceed since they still lived in separate homes. Helena was still reluctant to move into the house that Bette and Tina shared for all those years. She was torn between feeling settled but still not being settled.
When the topic of living together came up it was a great source of contention. Although there were some changes made since Tina left. She could feel Tina’s influence around the house. She felt she could even feel Tina’s presence at times in the room as they made love. At times, she believed she could smell Tina’s perfume in the room. Call it paranoia or a sixth sense but there remained some uneasiness at times for Helena. Alternatively, they certainly could not move into her place, especially with the kids, her condo was simply too small for them.
Bette being sensible, felt she had too much equity in the house to move. Moving into something larger would be way too expensive for them. The housing market was bad and beingcurrently under suspension from the college was certainly not conducive to securing a loan for a larger place for them. Peggy had offered her deep pockets in assistance, but Helena in her wish to be financially independent, was reluctant to accept this offer.
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Yikes! What have you done to my Bette!! I am sorry to hear that you have been feeling poorly, and hope you are better now. Now what IS this thing, is it the sexual equivalent of Xena’s neck pinch thingy? I hope you post again REALLY soon!
squirl so glad you are back, and sorry to read you had been sick. So happy you are back with my fav couple and story. Loved it!!!
I do hope you are feeling better. Bette will get feeling back and just cry her heart out right? Thanks you PPS Great Update!!!
helena is an xwoman mutant! a marvel comic book hero! or maybe DC! who cares, she’s a mutant superhero! i F*n KNEW it!!!!! awsome squirl, now whats her next superpower gonna be? i think she should be able to ‘shape shift’. hehe. welcome back captain;)
Wow Mrs. Squirl I was just thinking about you today, sorry for your troubles and am glad your on the road to recovery. I probaly shouldn’t read this right now as I have to go see a friend in 20 min. but well ya know what they say behave or be brave. going to read. WELCOME BACK, Md
oh Sheeeeeetttttsss, i gotta go, and I knew I shouldn’t have read that. Thank you and again it’s good to see you back. Md
hope u r getting better…now, as for the 5 point technique…it’s scared the shit out of Bette…better fix that. take care of u.
Nice to see you, sky. I agree that . pain and paralysis are parts of the total experience I would just as soon not do either.
First thing first. Welcome back! I’m glad to hear that you are feeling better and I hope everything is okay with your and your family. Health issues can be hard on everyone involved. And now I must say I really enjoyed this story and I can not wait for more of it. Thanks for taking the time to post it.
Squirl!!!!!! YAY! I was soooo happy to get the message, and so I came to see what you were talking about. MOTHER OF GOD what has happened to Bette? Let’s hope that she has just experienced one hell of an “O” eh? I love that old 5, 6 and 7 point tongue technique myself. ;- ) I hope you are back on your feet really soon. Take care of yourself Squirl. {{ hugs }}
from sexy to pain to no feeling? i think i would settle for the 2.5 technique…lol more please.
OMG… Squirl… your back… OMG… I have been absent much this summer but know you have never left my prayers… I have been praying that your health has gotten better… OMG… I am so happy to see you back woooooo hoooooo… yippee… thank you… thank you … thank you… I have missed you so much hugs… ok… I have also been awaiting this chapter since you first mentioned this wwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy back … and well that was awesome… to completely trust someone is an experience we rarely ever get… I can understand that this experience can be unnerving for someone like Bette… to lose control of not only her feelings but her body… her domain it is such a sacred vessel and deep down she never thought she would be able to ever give such to anyone… he soul… she gave that to Helena and even though she made a mistake in the past her soul is 100% Helena’s but her body is the one thing she kept for herself… maybe its because its a womans vessel and you only feel you can truly give it to your child… I think that Bette has longed for a child… a child born of herself… I think in the end that is the one failure Bette will never get over… never giving herself completely the one thing she truly desired… and the unnerving thing is that this beautiful sexual purest form of another persons love was able to lay claim to her completely… Love… Soul and Body… she is going to question whether or not she has anything left to offer Helena… I love Bette completely her flaws make her such an amazing character and you completely show her… as human being with many flaws… the most powerful of which is her love… I cannot wait for you to continue… you have been missed so much… mucho love and hugs my friend… JC
You’re back! I hope you feel better. Anyhow, it was an awesome post!
It’s great to see this story here. I missed it as I’ve missed all your writing. It’s even better than I remembered! I cannot wait to read the rest. Keep ’em coming!