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Don’t Say a Thing – Sequel to Falling At Your Feet – Ch 1
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Chapter 1
Tina Kennard pulled up into the driveway of her house. She lived there with her husband, Henry Stevens and their daughter, Elisabeth. Tina had wanted their child to have her last name. She found that only logical, since she was the one giving birth. But Henry was a traditional man and he wanted his name to be carried forth. His ego would be bruised if their daughter was to go through life as Elisabeth Kennard instead of Elisabeth Stevens. Tina had tried to change his mind; especially since it was a girl and she wouldn’t carry the Stevens-name on. Henry had then admitted that he wanted another child, a son. He had always dreamt of a boy and when Tina told him she was pregnant, he had been ecstatic. He had already began making plans to play football with his son and take him to games, go fishing with him, or golfin. He had barely been able to hide his disappointment when the echo told them they were expecting a girl. He didn’t love his daughter any less, tough.
Henry was in the living room, rewatching the football game that had been on last night. He worked as a watchman in a museum and night shifts earned better, so he preferred doing them. Tina didn’t really understand the system they used at the CAC, but she had given up on it a long time ago. She dropped her bag in the kitchen and as she wanted to leave for the living room, her ten-year-old daughter jumped her, giving her a bear hug.
“Mommy!” Elisabeth shouted happily. “You’re home!”
Henry had been so engrossed in the football game that he hadn’t noticed his wife coming home. He looked at the picture of his beautiful wife and their even more beautiful daughter and sighed happily. He made it in his life; he had proved he was a man. He would do anything to protect this family from anyone who wanted to harm them.
“Hey, baby,” she winked at Tina, knowing it was a winner. Tina smiled and cuddled her daughter once again before joining her husband on the couch. She always felt the urge to gag when he did that ‘hey baby’ + wink-thing, but he didn’t seem to understand that. He was convinced it made her feel good.
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im sorry but tina is marrid? with a man? u went to far and i fell that tina return to her old self and all the love and thing she had with bette didnr metter at all, esp if like u said “life went on” i will pass…its just wrong..
Pshhhhh, you def didn’t go too far. Love it (and all your other stories), can’t wait for the next post.
Tina married and to Henry. WOW!!! I would like to see where you to this. Thanks PPS
Very good stuff. Can’t wait to see where this may lead. Their first meeting will be interesting!
I’m so glad to see the return of this story. Don’t worry about any negative comments. I can’t wait to see what happens when the two see each other again as its clear Tina’s not happy in her marriage and still harbors strong feelings for Bette
Wow a very intriguing start, I love it already, poor Tina. G but you can’t really post a chapter like this one and leave us like that, can you please get back and write the next chapter and post it as soon as you can. Thanks
i have already fallin in love with this story… tina married to henry yuck! she has a daughter named after bette… she isn’t too happy in her marriage time for henry to get hit by mack truck or pack his bags!!!:)PPS
I dislike that Henry use words like Dykes and other words in front of jis children. T ina is unhappy in her marrage. she could have done something a long time ago. She is the type that she would stay to the bitter end. she made a promise to Henry and will keep that promise. Her love for Bette want enter into her life.Except that he works for the CAC. thanks
Woah what will Tina do now! Hope she gets with Bette and dumps Henry:) PPS
” I’m afraid he’ll forget my dinner _again_.” -Again-? Poor little E.!
Intriguing indeed….love and timing doesn’t necessarily go hand in hand, which is why there will always be challenges in life. It’s how you manage and overcome them that makes life’s experiences meaningful. I love reading all your B&T stories. Thanks. pps.
wow a lot of time has passed. Was Bette locked away or something? I don’t understand why they haven’t been in touch with each other after all these years.
That’s interesting and I’m gonna wait for your next post! I’m dying to know how will the first meeting go. Thanks
Just caught on to this story – I´m in for some more and I´m definitely going to read “the before” part. Interesting story, please continue.
i like this… can’t wait to see what they say to each other… and i have a feeling henry is going to be looking for a new place to love… not that he cares… as long as hr gets the TV in the divorce… PPS
Great to see you back with a sequel. I find it to bad that so much time has passed. And I primarily find it strange that both haven’t tried to remain in contact. Even if perhaps Tina didn’t know where Bette now lived. Bette knew how she could reach Tina. So why passed so much time and Tina & Hellry. It’s so not right. But one sees that Tina thought of Bette. Tina named her daughter Elisabeth. In Love and Memory of Bette!?!?!? PPS
wow. bette’s back in town. please let her be single, please! and let the two of them meet ASAP! and have Tina divorce Henry, that ******* jerk. also, can we get an explanation as to why Bette and Tina weren’t able to communicate? i’m chalking it up to real life, which really happens to couples who got together in high school. i guess Bette’s really busy in NY being this hot-shot gallery owner, and it’s her first time to visit. dinner for two, please!
Hey Genner, Great beginning. Time has passed and been relatively kind to Tina. She has a daugther and a husband who is amiable. I do hope that Bette has realized her mistakes and is now back to sort things out. The attraction between Bette and Tina is everlasting I hope. Please continue this fabulous fan fiction soon. Your Loyal Fan.