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The Island – Chapter 34
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Finally, finally, finally. Dana was holding her diploma in her hand. She knew several days ago that she passed her last course and completed all the requirements for her degree. But on some level, she didn’t believe it until she saw the actual confirmation.
The first thing she wanted to do when she got it was run and tell Alice. Unfortunately, she got dragged into a security meeting with Sam and some other of the senior guards. They once again reviewed the latest plans for the New York trip. On one hand, Dana felt it was overkill. They had gone over the plans so many times at this point that everyone probably had them memorized. Dana certainly did. They really only needed to do one more review before leaving for any last-minute changes. On the other hand, with the scare they had not long ago, Dana thought it was better safe than sorry.
So Dana sat through the two hour meeting. The whole time she was watching the clock. Sam finally called her on the lack of attention and that got Dana to focus back on the current task. She missed the small smile that Sam quickly hid.
When the meeting ended, she sprinted off to find Alice knowing she should be in her office. Dana only had about ten minutes before Alice and Harrison had to be on an international conference call. At least she would be able to share her news before then.
Dana was extremely disappointed to find no trace of Alice in her suite. She decided to see if Alice left any sort of note before she went and tracked down Harrison. She thought she would bust if she couldn’t just tell Alice. Celebrating could wait – she just wanted to share her happiness with the person that meant so much in her life.
The present was easy to spot when Dana entered her suite. It was on the side table where Dana normally kept her Blackberry and other items.
The box wasn’t large – maybe the right size for a tie. It was wrapped in a sparkly blue paper with a bow on it. There was no card that Dana could see. She stopped trying to guess and just moved over to open it.
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GOOOOOOSEEEEE! It reads just fine, actually more like excellent. I can understand what Dana is going through with the whole school thing. Work and school..I did make THE DEANS LIST! “Methinks” i like the whole map idea…hmmm outstanding job, and so sorry about missing the last post, i just caught a break. Thank you, You’re amazing =]
MaGoose this is probably one of the best fanfic chapters I’ve read so far. It really is like watching a movie. The scene where Dana watches Alice in the water is trully amazing. Alice lending her bathing suit to Dana was imaginative, original, funny, cute. I loved the whole thing. The main idea was really good but what;s more important is that you
I don’t know what made me push the “Leave comment” before I even finish my sentence!! Weird :) Anyway as I was saying what’s most important is that you wrote it really well. This is a good example of how to take a great idea for a chapter and making it excellent with your writing. You are turning into a Danish cuteness virtuoso!Job really well done Magoose!
Danish Day? What? Can’t believe I didn’t know, I feel bad I should have posted something!! This chapter was so cute, I wish I’d had a graduation present like that… though I guess I haven’t officially graduated yet so who knows, fingers crossed!! As Observer said, Alice offering Dana her bikini was priceless, she’s a tease!! Thanks x
now that is how you graduate :D
I don’t seem to be able to keep up with you writers. I saw you have already posted another story. That will make 3. Both uhhuh and you rule the day. Back to this story. How can one beat that graduation gift. A most brilliant mini treasure hunt! You are a genius. I am thrilled that you brought them back to the beach. I regard it as the most perfect setting on the island for some romance. Once again, excellent writing, endless great details. This story keeps me wanting more. NY, here we go. Do we have to fasten our seatbelts? lol.
This is meant for New-to-this. I read that SammysGirl suggested an extension to Danish Day. That means you have till tomorrow. So go for it.
WOW! What a great continuation of the story! My mind started to think naughtily now, hee, with the biniki and present and stuffs :-pAnother post? Wow can’t really beat you my friend. Thanks and keep up the good job! PPS….
This was a great chapter… I loved it. I can’t wait to get them all to NY though…. I wanna see Dana rush in and save the day… totally lay the smack down on who ever is trying to hurt alice :)
Yeh lol the eyes are doing good, though having a fantastic story to read helps ;D Keept it up, I’m really looking forward to NY
:D:D:D Everytime i think u cant get any better with ur writing and u go and produce something like this :D I LOVED this chapter and as Observer mentioned was a bit like watching a movie and so cute and funny and original :D. Im soo sooo gutted i cudnt update in time for Danish Day this is where i resent college and work! lol Anyways loved this chapter and cant wait for more and cant wait for New York :D Thank for a great story tht somehow just keeps gettn better and better :) xxx
Hello My Amazing Friend… HOLY FREAKING WOW… you have outdone yourself… completely… you have completely amazed me with your output… your creativity… your passion… you are a complete inspiration… I know you don’t see it but I would love to have half the talent you possess… your output… your creativity… your amazing storytelling is just OUT of this world… as for this story… holy crap… that was something… I agree with all those ahead of me… it was perfect to take this back to the beach… and wow… your passion is perfectly set… ummmmm… come on where is my Bette… you said you would give me Bette… LOL… I cannot wait for what you have up your sleeves next… Danish all the way… mucho love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
MaGoose, Danish Day would have been incomplete without you. Thanks for participating. That was a really hot surprise from Alice. i wish I had a private beach with a naked Alice on it. Ha ha!
excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hear drama, woohoo! :)