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    A good investment- 47

    Story written on October 7, 2008 by geek in the pink.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=71229
    Author Notes:

    Hurdles.

    Bette stared at Alice “That’s your plan?”

     

    “What?” Alice defended.

     

    “Clowns Al?”

     

    “Ok, ok lets move to plan B. How do you feel about elephants?”

     

    Bette raised her eyebrow “Do you have a plan that includes us in a car?”

     

    Alice nodded, “Plan J it is.”

     

     

     

     

    They were sitting in the car watching over Magi’s house. “Wow she’s loaded!” Alice said looking at the house. Bette simply nodded.

     

    “What are we looking for?” Alice asked.

     

    “I don’t know… something weird.”

     

    “Like a big cardboard figure that looks like you?”

     

    “What?? Where?”

     

    “Ha ah made you look” Alice laughed.

     

    Bette slumped back and groaned, “You’re an idiot.”

     

    “I’m not the one playing cops with my ex.” Alice pointed out.

     

    “I know I just… I need to make sure she’s not lying.” Bette sighed.

     

    “P.I?”

     

    “The report will be on my desk Monday morning… but she sees Tina on a daily basis. I need to know.”

     

    “Here she comes” Alice said pointing at a figure “Oh wow she’s hot.”

     

    “Al” Bette warned.

     

    “For a crazy psycho bitch.” Alice mumbled.

     

    “Ok here that’s probably her husband” Bette said.

     

    “Or your long lost brother”

     

    “What?”

     

    “Look at him Bette he looks like you in a male version.” Alice pointed at him.

     

    “You’re exaggerating.” Bette dismissed “The important thing is she moved on. See married, happily with kids” Bette said as she saw a little boy run.

     

    “Ok” Alice said “And it doesn’t bother you she’s married to your brother.”

     

    “He’s not my brother…” Bette dryly said.

     

    “Sure? You don’t want a DNA test?”

     

    “I’m sure. Come on lets go.” Bette said starting the car.

     

    “Fine, you wait to the report from the P.I, see how right I was.”

     

    “Right about what?”

     

    “Bette look” Alice said pointing to Magi. “She’s clearly replacing you, she’s not over you.”

     

    Bette sighed, “Lets just wait for the report.” She said driving away.

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    Comments

    1. Wow, that was amazing! I love the way you write them, and I’d love to see some more of cazy in love B&T on the show. And really, really hot!!! Excellent writing, and thanks for posting! PPS

    2. geek im so glad u posted i missed this story!!!!!!!! tina and bette are so soooo funny bette just killes me!!! and her and alice haha OMG i couldnt stop lol at the screan like a weirdo!!! ppvs!!! plsssssss. poor bette must ear at her mother in law

    4. What a GREAT GREAT story!!! I love the banter between Bette and Tina, and Bette is hilarious with her dry wit. I am so glad that they have survived the drama and have become stronger because of it. You have proven that TiBette CAN stay a happy couple, and yet there be drama to keep the story interesting. (Something IC never believed)GITP, I hope that you do post more chapters for Back in Shape and how about Quality Time…they never finished the class (still have 2 classes left). I love all the stories…PPVS!!!!!

    6. That was worth the wait. I love how you write these two. They are like grown-up kids, I always love how they counter act with each other. Bette and Al as P.I’s they are so going to get busted.

    7. its so good to see you back!! love your storys! I very hope you bring “back in shape” back- loved this one a lot!! thanks for a great chapter!PPVVS :)

    10. It’s so nice to see an update of this story! I’m not sure reverse stalking Magi is the best option, but I think she’s still crazy so I’m glad they’re looking into it. Thanks for posting!

    11. It’s GREAT to see an update to this story. I am glad that Alice mentioned the look-a-like husband to Tina. Looking foward to the professional PI repott. I think that B&T will do fine at her mother’s house for the weekend as long as they stick together. Maybe they can show her mother a thing or two about newly weds and being in love. PPS:o).

    15. I loved the up date, and the intimate scenes are the greatest G, you are so talented, can’t wait to read the next one that you will post. I am very excited about getting back in shape. Post soon G. Have a great day

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