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Who’s Pointing Fingers Chapter 16
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Chapter 16
The flight to LA was uneventful. Dozing seemed to be what everyone was best at. The touchdown was smooth and the driver Bette had hired was there to greet them and deliver them back to Bette’s house.
“I missed LA I think. But then again, I miss Louisiana too.” Bette lamented as she turned the knob opening the door to her home. There was a small smile that creased her lips as she pushed the door wide open, stepped aside and welcomed Tina home. ‘Welcome home T. I have waited for this day. To have you home again is all I can think about. It is what I dreamt about on our flight home.” Smiling at the other,…. “I am happy that our friends are here to see this, to share this moment with us. It has been a long time coming and I am so happy that the day has arrived.” As Tina walked through the door she places a light but affectionate kiss on Bette’s cheek. There wasn’t a dry eye.
“Girls, I gotta get home. I need to make sure the Planet is still in one piece.” With that, Kit hugged all of the women with a special lingering hug with Tina. “I’m glad you are home girl. I know my sister is glad you are home too!”
“Me too Kit. Thanks for everything.” Tina replied with a small kiss to Kit’s cheek.
“Bette and Tina, I think it is time that Alice and I left you two alone. Come on Alice, lets leave these two women to settle in.” Shane knew they need to be alone for a while.
“OK, …. OK Shane. I’ll leave too. You guys come up for air at some point! OK?”
“Alice, please.” Bette interjected.
“Not for at least a week Alice.” Tina joked, or did she?
As the door closed and Bette and Tina found themselves alone, in the home that they had previously shared, the reality of the past few days set in on them. Tina sat on the arm of the couch and looked around at their home. Bette could see that Tina was taking in, being there.
“Tina, what are you thinking right now?” Bette wanted to explore Tina’s deepest thoughts. Her eyes were pleading.
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Wow, I absolutely love this! I hope you choose to continue, because it’s a beautiful story. Thanks for posting! PPS
i love it!!!!!!!! they areso in lovewith each ither so cute so in to each other gosh my eyes are red. thank u!!! ur awsome
Amazing!!!! I hope things go well with your Dad. Thank you
Beautifully written, and you wrapped it up perfectly. Thank you. It’s tough about your Dad. Hang in there.
Truly Awesome!
What an exciting finish. I hope that you will consider continuing this story or start a new altogether.
Thank you for such a beautiful story. Hang in there with your Dad, Quality time
What a GREAT story! I hope to see more of it.
Wow this was so powerful and so full of passion, I love them togther, and they are really close and mature in this story of yours Dj. Thank you so much. I hope this chapter is not the last one. Post soon.
Hello. I just found your story tonight. I am not a Tibetter, just a Better, but I love well written fic, and I found that here, going back and reading from the beginning. I couldn’t wait to see what happened next. The ghostly lovers dancing and Miranda was just wonderful. It provided wise and realistic counterpoint to what seemed the interminable coddling of Tina…since those women faced lifelong barriers to their love, yet endured… in her eternal self pity, as though she was the only one to ever feel grief, and apparently being fine with letting Bette hang in limbo forever until she felt like getting over it. I liked that Bette told Alice that SHE lost the baby just as much as Tina, but I wish she had said it to Tina. I just was concerned about who was loving and supporting Bette in her pain, instead of it being all about Tina. But all told, it was a fabulous story. I swear, if I was around Alice..she would have been bound and gagged, permanently, long ago. I actually agree with Tina when she told Alice that they are human beings, not idols or icons, and it is not fair to place such burdens upon them. I vote that Alice gets her own life and stop trying to live through theirs! I also hope that they decide not to sell the house..it seems such an incredibly lovely and loving place. It should stay in the family.
It has been an amazing ride… Thank you for sharing this story with us. I know that it is very hard to do, but be strong and know that others have walked the same difficult path that you are on. I wish that I could say it gets better – draw strength from your partner and from the many warm wishes that are being sent your way. My very best to you and all those around you.
Thanks for posting this chapter and I hope you can continue this beautiful story. This one is different, in that you did not include the subject of adultery, just Tina’s anguish over the miscarriage. Her thoughts of how Bette must feel about her, all misplaced judgements on her part, of course. We really only had Tina’s point of view in this story, hopefully you can come back and give us Bette’s point of view as well. Early in this chapter, you almost had Bette revert back to her old ways of just thinking about herself when Tina mentioned having the girls over for dinner and Bette reined in her selfish thoughts and decided to go with Tina on that dinner, which was a very good idea for them. Glad you did that. As you can tell I have greatly enjoyed the story. Come back to us with a continuation or a new one, just come back when you have time. Love your work. Take care of yourself, your father and your partner. As a friend said to me once, “life is not a dress rehearsal, it is the real deal.”
Amazing finish, good hot story with lots of love mixed in, thats what I’m talking about. Thank you so much for takeing the time to write for us. Good luck with you dad and post your new story as you can djrk as I’d say your a pretty proven writer and we’ll be happy with any story you write. Thank you, Md
loved this story and i will miss it… but i am also looking forward to your next one… Thanks…
loved the story hope it continues
That was awesome and love it, so happy for them. Let see more, thanks!