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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty Nine (a HYD-inspired fic)
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CHAPTER FORTY NINE: The Red Comeback
“Obey or Die.”
It’s funny how a lengthy message that started with the words: please, I need your help; ended with those three menacing words. But it did. And it went viral, passed on from one student to another until everyone had the message stored in their inbox.
And with the warning came the scratching of heads. How could something start with a plea and then end with a threat?
It doesn’t make sense does it?
But don’t worry, its not meant to make any sense at all. Not unless you’re a student of the most prestigious all-girls school in the country. And then you’d understand. Cause when F4 says please, they actually mean follow. Or else.
Obey or die.
It’s as simple as that.
And no, no one really ended up dead. Physically, that is. If you’re up for social suicide or maybe even emotional and mental anguish, then by all means, go against F4 and face their wrath. And in a place where money talks and status is as important as air, who would be brave or stupid enough to do that?
Oh, yeah.. that Kennard girl. But that was a long time ago. And her days of proud resistance were short-lived. Cause now look at her, she’s eating out of the hands of Bette Porter, her once mortal enemy. And she’s.. oh wait a minute, someone’s objecting. Excuse me?
Ahem.
Hmm.. whatever the real deal is between them, let’s just agree on the probable fact that there is eating involved in their relationship. Each other perhaps? Ah, very likely. Former enemies turned friends turned lovers. The stuff of legends, they say.
Wait a minute, we seemed to have veered off-course. Sorry. So where were we?
Right, obey or die.
Powerful words from F4. And believe me, no one’s signing up to die anytime soon. Let’s just say that F4′s pseudo request was a done deal, and as usual, 100% compliance was to be expected from the student body.
That said, welcome to the famous Redwind Academy for Girls. Where sheep worship wolves, excess is a norm and luxury is a right enjoyed by all.
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Loved it, as always… especially the reappearance of the red tag. Great twist! Fingers crossed for your exam and thanks for taking time to write.
Yay-glad you’re back! I’m sure you’ll get your awesome test scores soon. So while you’re waiting…how about another chapter? Great as usual! PPS!
I was so happy to see your latest post! As always this story makes me giggle.. I loved the in unison, “NO” :D Fingers still crossed for you…and bye all means,PPS
hoooooooo you have me worried at first hey pmsl. red tag on Tina? of course it was a jke. brillant can’t stop laughing.They have been together for only 4 weeks? I thought few months but great, the story will last longer lol. Welcome back Alch. Hope they won’t be far from each other. Just loved it.PPS
Hey, Alchemy! :> Have I told you lately that I love this story, your loved-up, sex-crazed, teenage version of Porter and Kennard to bits? Bette’s “pornographic” memory, Chester’s impression of the infamous Kennard eyeroll, the couple’s fun and sexy way of reviewing for a quiz, the rock-hard waffle and the three amigos’ “NO!” chorus when Jenny asked them if they’d like to peek at the couple’s private “religious” service at the rooftop => LOL! Thanks a lot for making me smile and laugh again. My dead tired body and stress-addled brain needed that. You’re a frickin’ good writer, Alchemy. May the Force be always with you. Thank you!!! Mwah :>
Love this story!!! Now will Bette go to Yale and Tina to USC? I can tell we are in for some major Drama. Thank you PPS
Yeah! First, thanks for the post, hope the results for the test are in your favor. I remember my first piss test, I studied really hard for it too. LOL! Sorry couldn’t resist. Does this mean drama? Will Bette go to Yale without Tina? Has Shane finally rid herself of the crabs? Is this the end of ASS? Stay tuned for next weeks episode.
ROFL this update takes the cake!!! love the mention of the chester!! what will they decide now??? :)PPS
thanks for the update! Bette is so cute. I missed this story. It’s good that Bette and Melvin are getting along.
Ahhh, F4’s terrorizing lives on! That was quite the scare Bette gave Tina, and all it cost her was a chipped tooth! Maybe a bit of indigestion from the charcoal waffles too.. I hope Tina and Dana get to be friends again. She forgave Bette, so there’s maybe hope yet? The scene on the rooftop was very sweet, and I’m glad they’ve all learned their lesson about peeking in. I don’t think Jenny would look good with a shaved head, so she should take a cue. As for the university thing… can’t Bette just break tradition and go to like, Stanford or something? Great chapter Alchemy, I’m so glad to see you back. (And I hope you get great exam results!) Thanks!
i can’t believe i didn’t read the last chapter.. well now i’m all caught up… i had a feeling bette was playing her with the red tag… and loved it… so glad melvin is being a dad again… and please no bad drama… they can both pick a school together… PPS
That was so funny and romantic too lol. Please more, thanks!