Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 3
Login to add story to favorites
(6 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 3
Chapter 3: Like I never felt before…or after (Elizabeth’s day turned ugly and Tina learned what happened to her treasure)
Place: Orange County, CA
Year: 1885
(Previously) Loud knocking on the door interrupted Elizabeth’s trip down memory lane. She slowly opened her eyes and only then did she notice that she was anxiously clenching her right fist and felt the pain in her palm where her nails prodded the sensitive skin.
“How could I be so blind, so stupid, so utterly naïve?” she asked herself time and time again since last night.
She was about to close her eyes again to keep the tears flowing down when she heard another knock on a door, softer this time and the voice of her maid, Alicia, inquiring nervously, “Ms. Porter, if you please…your mother needs to talk to you.”
~~~~~~~~
“Tell her I’ll be ready soon,” Elizabeth answered, not wanting to get out of bed yet. In fact, she didn’t think she was ready to face anyone after the horrible ordeal she had been through last night. She knew it wasn’t entirely her fault, that nothing had changed about her and that her family loved her no matter what.
But Elizabeth was afraid to show everybody her fears, and she couldn’t bear the idea that people she loved so much would see her in the state of total disarray, confusion, guilt and complete heartbreaking agony.
She heard Alicia walking away and settled her weary body back in the comfort of her bed. Closing her eyes again for what seemed like a hundredth time this morning, feeling her pain and ashamed of her weakness, Elizabeth returned back to her memories.
“I can’t help myself Ms. Porter…Elizabeth…I have to tell you how passionately and fervently I love you.”
Never in her life had anyone used such liberties with her, being so close to her, saying these words to her, and Elizabeth liked it. She had had many admirers before that, she even had some suitors asking her father for her hand in marriage, but she never felt anything for any of them.
Until now…
Elizabeth turned around and their lips met. Eric devoured her passionately and somewhat forcefully, demanding an entry for his tongue. Elizabeth was overwhelmed by this vigorous attack on her mouth but she enjoyed it nevertheless.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I can’t wait to read to the point where you had stopped ages ago, this is the longest cliff hanger ever been! You have to continue this story to the end.. so please post soon. thanks :)
Always hate eric in this story!
You are not wasting our time. I love your story and I think that this “slow burning” is wonderful! Thanks for your time. Love from Argentina.
I loved your story before and I love it now.I’m a fan of your story.From France.
What are you talking about? of course we want you to continue writing this story, are you kidding, it’s one of the most amazing stories that I have ever read. We are extremly interested in it. But I know why you had to ask this question, it’s not that we are not interested in it, it’s more like I read all of these chapters not along ago, so I know what’s in each one of them, but I can’t wait until you continue where you have left us. But dear it’s my pleasure to start reading them again. Now about this chapter, I hate that asshole, I can’t wait for Alice to kick his ass, my God Bette is so fragile and tender and I like the way you wrote her character in this story. And Dana needs to be more thoughtful, I mean she was close to giving Tina a heart attack. Please post soon dear, and sorry again for putting you under the misapprehension that we are not interested.
OMG !! Yes, please, you have to continue this story !!! This is so enthralling !! I looooove this story. I reeeeally can’t wait to read more of this, B&TF ! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. PPS !
I love this story. I have to be honest…I am just skimming these chapters, as I have read this story about 3 times…when it was here before. I am sooooo looking forward to the point where you get to the new chapters as I am anxious to read the end. Please don’t stop posting it. Even if it takes some readers several chapters to get into it…they will realize it will be well worth it. So…I may not comment very often on your story, but know I am still here anxiously waiting for the continuation of this awesome story. You are a wonderful writer! This story is so unique for this site…and I like that. Anyway, I hope you will continue. PPS!
“If not, I’d rather save the space for more popular authors…” – Hello?!!! You ARE one of the more popular authors! You never give yourself enough credit for your writing talent. And, even if you weren’t, this is a unique story that is worth telling, and definitely worth reading, so please keep going!!
Please continue with this story!!! I love it, and everything else you put out here. And I’m with CaseyB….that you ARE one of the popular authors out on the site! So with that said….when are you putting the next chapter up??
Please don’t stop now! I need to find out how this story ends. Eric’s a pig. Did he try to rape Carmen too? PPS!!
Please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE… Continue with this story, B&TF! I know how it feels not to be sure about the interest from the readers, but I found that you have to give the story some time… Especially given all you other wonderful stories. People know you as a great writer, it might just take them some time to get to this story. And in any case, it’s an amazing story and I’m excited about the following. I already hate that Eric guy, whatever his dimension, LOL! … Not to mention that you’re probably excited about finishing it. Do whatever you feel like, mate, but know that you have an extremely interested reader in me, who can’t wait for you to continue! Is Bette gonna meet a Past Tina who’s gonna mend her heart?… Thanks and PPS! K ;)
i’m sorry i don’t leave comments but i do read the stories. so please continue with them.