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Cure-all, Chapter 20
Tina suddenly realized where they were… She’d been so engrossed in the conversation, and even more in her beautiful companion, that she hadn’t noticed where the path was taking them.
How couldn’t she have thought about it earlier?
CHAPTER 20
She turned to Bette, and the brunette saw a light in the hazel eyes that she had never seen before.
"Come with me…" The blonde said in a whisper.
Bette nodded, thinking that there was no question that she would follow Tina anywhere she wanted to take her, when she gasped…
…The blonde had just slipped her hand into hers and was now dragging her along with her on a small path that the brunette hadn’t noticed before. Bette’s heart was racing and tickling butterflies spread all over her body. The sensation of Tina’s hand in hers was overwhelming and she realized that if she didn’t get a grip on herself, she would most probably stumble and fall flat on her face.
So she tried to focus on the path, but even that was hard with Tina holding her hand and tightening her grip whenever they met obstructing branches. Bette couldn’t help but admire her from behind – innocently that is. Her perfect form, her gracious moves, her beautiful flowing blond hair… And her intent look everytime she turned back to her. Bette had no idea where Tina was taking her, but she didn’t care. She followed her trustfully, and wished their journey would last forever.
Suddenly, Tina stopped and Bette was so taken by her leading companion that she didn’t anticipate her halt and bumped into her. She was about to apologize when she realized that Tina hadn’t even aknowledged the collision. She was looking straight ahead, at a very small gate, surrounded by a beautiful climbing rose. The blonde was still holding Bette’s hand, in fact even tighter that before, and her eyes were glistening with unshed tears.
"Tina…?" Bette said softly, instantly concerned about the blonde.
Tina turned and stared at her. Bette held her breath. Tina had never looked at her this way before. But it wasn’t only about them. There was something else. Bette suddenly felt like she could see Tina’s soul in her eyes. It was there, offered to her with complete trust but also tremendous vulnerability. Bette understood the gravity of this moment and squeezed the blonde’s hand with warmth and reassurance.
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WOW…that was…well, it was just beautiful. I really love this story – your writing is so moving. I really can’t wait for the next post – please don’t make us wait that long :)
Thing look pretty sad for them. Maybe Helena being so atune to Tina and the ways of the world will sense that Tina is very unhappy. Hope that Shane will be alright. thanks
What a beautiful chapter, complete with the heart wrenching airport moment where two souls say good-bye. IMO, Tina needs to dump Helena and catch the first flight to Vancouver to be with your true love! PPVS
Well done, I was there watching
Perfectly crafted. Have no doubts as to your writing ability!
WOW!!!! I just caught up. That was so sad and so full of love. Thank you PPS
OMG I have butterflies in my stomach, i not sure if its the almost kiss, shane incident or the fact that the dog brought the book in meaning fate keeps tossing them a bone!!
OMG I have butterflies in my stomach, i not sure if its the almost kiss, shane incident or the fact that the dog brought the book in meaning fate keeps tossing them a bone!!
Wow!! Beautiful chapter, i could feel the emotions between them, i’m waiting for the next chapter!!
This is such a beautiful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I was not surprised by that almost kiss. This tibette doesn’t strike me as the type to do something behind Helena’s back. Now Tina knows what she has to do when she gets back. Thanks for this substantial update!!!!!!
I can fully imagine JB and Lu playing these roles. There is an intensity to both of these characters and a vulnerability that you have portrayed so precisely. Waiting anxiously for the outcome of Shane’s accident and Tina’s return of the book to Bette soon, I hope. Thank you for posting.
wowwwwwwwwwww, i love how everything is slow and charming. i love this bette and tina
love this… and love the dog… thats tina’s reason to go and find bette… and whats helena doing… i have a feeling she has someone on the side… she must, how could she stay away from tina if she didn’t… PPS
A wonderful chapter. I love your ability to keep the suspense of whether (when?) Tina and Bette will be able to be together. Looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks.
i have to agree with you… this is my favorite chapter so far! beautifully written! thanks!
How absolutely gorgeous!! I love it! and i cant wait for more. Tina and Helena need to sort this crap out. And Tee needs to organise to fly off with Bette to Peru and write up all the goings on witgh her reporer skills and happily forever after.
This chapter made me cry for very different reasons . First it was Tina taking Bette to her families’ grave site, then the pain of Shane’s injury. The love is beginning to shine through from both of them.
So beautiful
It sad they not together but hope soon, hope Shane will be ok!
This was absolutely brilliant. The details in this story just make me feel like in the same room with B & T. Please Post Soon.
this is romantically beautiful… i love this story so much, please post soon…
You write with such emotion that it is impossible not to feel everything they are feeling. Loved the end of the chapter! pps
How could we possibly not love the chapter as it is so beautifully written. I had tears in my eyes until the appearance of the pink booklet which brought back the smile. Perfect, Kword.
that was a fabulous chapter – so full of emotions! you are doing an amazing job with this story!! PLEASE, please post soon again! thanks:)