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Reconciliation Part 14
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Part 14
After a few minutes, Dylan settled down and held Helena close. She never expected to ever have the opportunity to be back in Helena’s arms or even more, to admit to Helena what she felt. She wiped her face with her hands and apologized, “I’m sorry. I’m such a mess.”
Helena squatted in front of Dylan to look at her face to face. “You are not a mess.” Then looking at Dylan’s mascara smeared face she teased, “Well, maybe just a little.”
Helena reached for a napkin off one of the tables and wiped Dylan’s face clear. “Dylan I have wanted to hear you say you loved me for such a long time. So much has happened to me since you were last in my life. I don’t know how different things would be if you didn’t make that suit or if you stopped it when it started or if you told me you loved me the day of the mediation. God, I know I have changed so much because of the aftermath. I suppose it made me grow up but it also made me more cautious of people’s intent. Your confession, although sweet, leaves me unsure of what I should be feeling right now. But I’m happy to hear that it was not all in my head, that I was right about what I thought you were feeling too.”
Dylan sniffled and shook her head, “I don’t expect you to forgive me. I don’t expect that you would love me anymore. I know you’ve moved on in your life. I guess I hope to do the same with mine. I have a lot of issues and personal baggage and this only adds to it. It has been a thorn in my side. If I stand to have any success in my personal life then I need to at least make right some of the things I have done wrong. I have so much anger over those who failed me as a child, yet I turned around and hurt you and all you did was love me.”
Helena stared into the sadness she could see in Dylan’s swollen and reddened eyes. She gently caressed Dylan’s cheeks. She studied Dylan’s face and tidied the hairs that were moved out of place by with wind and by being held against her body. She then ran a finger over Dylan’s lips which caused Dylan to look down. Helena lifted Dylan’s chin up to face her again. She leaned slowly in and kissed Dylan’s lightly on the lips. They looked into each other’s eyes. Tears began to run from Dylan’s eyes once more. Helena wiped the tears away off Dylan’s cheeks and put their foreheads together.
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I wil say again Dylan I just loved. Rachel has the most beautiful eyes. Together they made a beautiful couple. You can bring them together again in your story.
Yes! Yes! Yes! Frickin’ fantastic way to end a chapter, Squirl! I am so happy that you wrote their reconnection without additional drama. They were ready to open up and move past the pain of their prior break-up. Dare I ask for more incredible writing (heavy on the kisses) soon???
Yay…you updated!! Wow…I could feel the blood rushing to my head….the sense of being overwhelmed and empathetic and swept up by Dylan’s confession and professions. Not that it excused the behavior but bought a tenderness to the moment. The sense of relief Helena must have felt…and knowing with full confirmation that her life didn’t go into a tailspin based upon a mirage but something that truly was real…That actually made me feel good for her…The kiss they shared reminds me of the tentative kiss in Helena’s office after Dylan had initially rejected Helena on the series…they drew closer and the headiness of the closeness…of the moment took over…love it! Now Helena is open…yeah…its gonna take some time but she is open, I think its on Dylan…if she betrays again…the door could be closed forever! Clearly we are loving it! PPS
I SAID u’d convince me. pps
Ok…Loving it so far
Hello My Amazing Friend… the hardest thing in life is to expose yourself to the world… to open up completely and just allow it all out. The hurt… the betrayals… the loss… the love… to show that you really are ‘human’ and just stand there with everyone else not afraid to be judged because you have found your way back to the place you are destined to stand… with each passing word… look… caress that these two woman share it only makes there over whelming past more stronger… they both need to purge these demons… we are seeing just how much ‘Dylan’ has changed… she has started to expose her ‘true’ soul to ‘Helena’ and this is the first time for both of them… they are both ‘Virgins’ to this all consuming concept of ‘Love’ for they have been deceived and tricked at many turns into believing they actually knew what ‘love’ is/or was but in hindsight they realize that they have never had it… the concept of saying “I Love You” to someone is not a complete concept saying it without meaning it can be just as deceiving to the giver as it is the taker… there has to be a moment of truth that allows the strength of this commitment exist and become a part of a person… ‘Helena’ has been such a strong soul throughout ‘Dylan’s’ purging but the real test is can ‘Dylan’ listen and accept her culpability in making ‘Helena’ the jaded woman she has become… she will not heal over night… the torments that her soul has suffered since her time with ‘Dylan’ has only proven certain things to her… she has never experienced ‘Love’ she knows her friends are there for her… she realizes that they have a certain kind of ‘love’ for her… but not the love a person truly needs… the ‘love’ that not only has her mother and to that extent her ‘family’ have not given her… but also the woman she knows she ‘loves’… you completely and absolutely blow me away my friend… your delicate hands and the words you weave are an elixir to my literary soul… you my friend can and should be writing a novel… cause yes I would be in line waiting with baited breath cause you capture humanity and the quest for absolutely ‘love’ perfectly, much love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
oh boy Squirl, I may not have been convince that I need bifocials before now but after your last paragraph????maybe, or were you as unsure of that kiss as I am sure both Helena and Dylan were? Thank you, Md
Wow squirl that was a very powerful chapter. I am so glad they talked and more off that Helena listened to what Dylan had to say. I’m so glad she admitted to Dyylan she still cares about her and still loves her. I know they still have a long way to go but I’m sure they will work it out as long as they keep communicating. Thx for this beautiful chapter, can’t wait for the next one
Momadukes-I noticed the change in font size before I posted it. I thought I corrected it but the subtle difference that was originally posted escaped me. Now I have the begining paragraph in a different font size. I give up. BTW.. Did you like the kiss?
Quite the breakthrough for them both.
I just read JC’s comment. Amen, my friend. I couldn’t have said it better.
That kiss. That beautiful, tender kiss. That was better than any NC-17 chapter. How are able to do that is astounding. I love that Dylan finally opened up to Helena. It was like she said a couple of times, they really didn’t know each other, but now they can begin. But as Helena always knew, they didn’t have to know much about each other to know love. That’s what soulmates are. It’s so nice that Dylan finally tells Helena those three little words that she’s longed to hear from ANYONE, but especially the woman that she loves too.
Are you refreshing this page to check on your comments? Grin. Very addictive isn’t it. Laughs. Thank you for recommending my story. I got a comment on mine saying that you mentioned it in a comment you left. I’m so flattered and honored that you did. Brought a big smile to my face. Oh my gosh, Squirl. You made my heart melt. I loved this chapter and it was beautifully written. Wow. (: PPS! xoxo