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    Story written on November 16, 2008 by uhhuh.
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    Shane’s bachelorette party. Dana’s first present….

    At Shane’s bachelorette party

    Dana arrived at the party with a gift on her hand. She looked around the place searching for her friends. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw Alice. Alice was looking her way and smiled at her. Dana returned the smile. Her heart was pounding fast. Alice looked so stunning in her V neck black colour dress. She swallowed hard and walked towards her. She was thinking how the conversation between Bette and Alice this afternoon turned out. They hadn’t seen each other since the fight. As she was few steps away from Alice, she stopped abruptly when Kit made an announcement through the microphone.

    “Hi welcomes to Shane’s and Carmen’s bachelorette party.Now give a big clap to our brides!”

    Everyone in the party erupted into cheers as the brides emerged from the backstage. They yelled congratulations to them and the place filled with silence as Shane began to speak.

    “Hi guys.” Shane giggled.

    “Hi!” The guests answered.

    “Hmm, well I don’t know what to say.” Shane looked at Carmen passionately. For the first time Shane was lost of words. She was so happy that all her friends were there for her wedding. They smiled at each other before Shane took the microphone again.

    “First of all thanks to all of you for coming to our party. We are honoured by your presents. And now I would like to thank all my best friends for making this happened.” Shane smiled as she diverted her attention at her group of friends.

    “Thanks to you Kit for lending us your place.” Shane bowed at Kit. Kit smiled and nodded.

    “Thanks to Jenny and Helena for the help in organizing this. We know it must be hard for you guys to make it in such a short notice. Thanks guys.” Jenny and Helena yelled the words you are welcome to the brides. Shane smiled and diverted her gaze to Bette and Tina. Both smiled at the brides.

    “Thanks to Bette and Tina for making me belief that true love does exist. I don’t think I have the gut to tell Carmen I love her if you guys didn’t open my eyes and make me realized that I want to be with her more than anything. Thanks.” The group clapped their hands to acknowledge Bette and Tina. Both blushed at the gestures. They waved their hands and mouthed thanks to the guests and the brides.

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    1. uhhuh, most excellent choice of song! I too hope that your wishes will come true. Wouldn’t that be awesome? You did a great job with Shane’s and D’s speeches. I was surprised by D’s singing too, lol. Well done! Now this was the second time they both shed tears. Would you plz plz plz let them talk it out even they might fight again. Thank you very much.

    2. Loved it, uhhuh – from the author’s note through to the end. I did get flashbacks to Dana and Tonya’s engagement party with the speeches – just like Dana did. Dana did a great job with her impromptu speech. And the song? Perfect. Dana certainly made her feelings known, didn’t she? I add my hopes that Dana and Alice will sit down and talk it all through. I think they both know by now that they need to talk to move on – whether it is together or apart. Hopefully together. ;-D Thanks so much!!

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