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The Island – Chapter 40
Dana’s birthday plans for Alice were going well so far. They spent most of the day making love in various places around the suite. Although they slept naked in each other’s arms at night, they rarely had the energy for more since they had been in New York with the hectic pace and stress of the trip. There were making up for it today. They took breaks to eat, but, spent the bulk of the time reconnecting. Dana also made sure they got in a nap so they would both be refreshed for the evening ahead.
It was late afternoon when Dana said they needed to get ready to go out. This was the first Alice had heard of it. While Alice loved surprises, she wasn’t very patient in waiting. She spent the entire time as they were getting ready to try and pry out of Dana what the plans were for the evening. Dana was laughing at her increasingly ridiculous ideas. Was there even such a thing as elephant racing?
Dana had selected Alice’s outfit for the evening which confused the other woman even more. The clothes were very casual. Alice had assumed they would be going out to a fancy dinner or something, but, this seemed to open up another range of possibilities.
They were riding in a limo. Dana requested it since their destination was a little ways outside the city and she wanted Alice to be comfortable. There was a guard up front with the Stranton driver and cars in front and behind the limo. Dana had worked closely with Sam to make sure all the arrangements for the evening would be completely secure.
Dana and Alice were sipping champagne as they cuddled in the back of the limo. Alice was currently quiet as the last of her guesses had been shot down by Dana. She was stumped that they seemed to be moving further away from the city.
“I got it!!” Alice said gleefully. “We’re going to a strip club, aren’t we? Maybe getting your girl a lap dance for her birthday?” Dana had to laugh once again at the look on Alice’s face. It was part hopeful and part completely disbelieving that Dana would bring her to a strip club.
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(31 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
Way to leave us at a cliffhanger! I love this chapter (and no, not just for the smut, although that’s always good. lol, I swear I’m not a total perv). I love how gentle Dana is with Alice. Being blindfolded would freak me out too. lol. And my best guess as to what you meant…conspiracy? lol.
Hot, what more do I need to say! Fantastic … xx
MaGosse, I am officially protesting your decision to separate this chapter into parts. So will there be part 2, 3 and so on? It is not right. So how many more hours and minutes do we have to wait to find out where D brought A? Please be nice and give us an update asap. (you know how much I love this story, right?) Seriously, I lmao the whole time D would not cave in and A would not give up. How cute was the line, “I’m trained. Babe, you can’t get the information from me.” If this PART is any indication to the rest of the chapter, it will be super awesome. btw, I hope the limo was soundproofed well and that they did not accidentally hit any button and allowed the driver to hear them. You really have great imagination. Thank you very much for this wonderful PART. Thank you very much. You rock! As for, “tins=conetky” I have to put on my thinking cap, will get back to you later on it.
Wow, my head was imaginating things as soon as Alice unbuttoned her shirt, uhmmm…I echoed hail_danalice to protest on your decision to separate this chapter into parts. PLEASE update soon, can’t wait to see what happened next….Thanks!
Hello MG… ummmm yeah like ‘SURPRISE’ that was so freaking awesome… and like… full of passion and sparks and well just so you… you have so mastered the hang of cliffhangers cause I was like Gah… holding onto my heart and catching my breath… ahhhhh where are you… get back here and give me something cold… cause it sure feels like its going to be getting HOT… in her and well its already an inferno… ahhhhh… keep it up my most amazingly beautiful and passionate friend… you rock my world, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angel)