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Dana was waiting eagerly for Alice to arrive. She was twenty minutes early. She looked around the restaurant and there was no sign of the blonde. She thought to herself that tonight was her only chance to show the blonde her feelings. She would go straight to the point to tell the blonde what she wanted. No holding back anymore. Dana thought she had already wasted six years with her stupidity. Now she was fucking thirty eight already and therefore she couldn’t afford to waste anytime. What needed to be said should be said, although the ball was in Alice’s court. It always had. It depended on her of how their relationship should be, but Dana hoped that somehow they could work things out and be together again. All she needed was a second chance. And she was willing to make it up to Alice her entire life.
“Dane?” Dana was snapped from her thought. She looked up and saw the most beautiful person that held her heart since the day they met.
“Al.” Dana stood up and moved to other side of the table to hold the chair out for Alice. She went over to her own chair after Alice sat down.
“You are early.” Alice smiled.
“Yeah, because I am still me.” Dana said and looked intently into Alice’s eyes before she continued.
“Never changed.”
Alice looked away from Dana, pretending to be looking at the menu. Dana sighed and reached for the menu in front of her. There was an awkward silence before a waiter went to their table to take their orders.
“What’s in your mind Al?”
“I’ll go for pepperoni pizza and a coke. How about you?” Alice closed the menu and put the menu on the table.
“I’ll have minced chicken spaghetti and ice lemon tea. Thanks.”
The waiter collected the menus and walked away. Dana put her hands together and rubbed them.
“So..” Dana said.
“So..” Alice said.
“I am glad that you asked me out for dinner. Thanks Al.”
“Thanks for accepting my offer.” Alice smiled.
“You know I would never say no to you.” Dana said with serious tone.
There was an awkward silence.
“Well as long as I could remember you did say no to me once.” Alice smirked.
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Well done! You handled the conversation between the two very realistically. Dana did a great job speaking from her heart. They made such progress. I only wish Alice would have stayed to continue the conversation and get everything out in the open. I don’t think Dana is going to give up at this point. Hopefully Alice will open up when she realizes that Dana is sincere. Excellent update! Thanks, uhhuh!!
A very sad and touching scene, both crying with all the pain bottled up inside. Why couldn’t A give D a second chance? They were approaching their 40s and I would think A would have worked through her insecurities. Plus she had longed to have D watching Chris grew up. Oh, heartaches and more heartaches. Like MaGoose said, D would not give up and hope they would talk again soon. Thank you very much, uhhuh!
I so love this story, the characters are so cute and Dana finally started to open up, yay! Hopefully Alice will forgive her and let her back into her life soon … pps
great update, love the communication, but I have this feelings that Alice is hiding something. PPS
is this the part where dana have to let go of alice?…reality bites but when someone pour her heart out and be rejected it hurts like hell…maybe, just maybe if dana agree on alice on being just friends, then maybe alice will realize that dana is everything to her..god, i feel dana’s pain…thank you uhhuh! excellent update…by the way, i like how you use Chris Daughtry’s song “Over You”…nice choice…
I am loving this story. I like drama between the two because it makes the reunion that much sweeter. I agree ith resultsonly that Alice is hiding something and I think it has something or everything to do with her son Chris. pps