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    I WANT YOU BACK PART 30

    Story written on November 27, 2008 by iminlovewithtiona.
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    Stranger Revealed and some Tough Talking

     

     

    Chapter 30 Christmas Part 2 of 3

     

    “I’m Melvin Porter and I’d like to see my daughter, is that a problem young lady?” Bette’s father said arrogantly

    “Oh I’m. I’m sorry Mr Porter I didn’t know…” Kayleigh stammered

    Melvin ignored the redhead’s obvious discomfort and barged past her into the house.

    “Oh! Hi Mr Porter – Merry Christmas” Tina said as she walked nearer to her lovers father…unsure whether to embrace him or shake his hand? What was proper etiquette as far as Melvin was concerned? The blonde tried to decide

    “Oh so your back again Miss Kennard? I assumed the girl who opened the door to me was now flavour of the week with Elizabeth..?”

    “No…Mr Porter this is Kayleigh…my childhood friend, and you know everyone else”Tina said softly trying to shrug off the hurtful remark

    “So Mr P What do you think of your granddaughter? – She’s a little cracker isn’t she? Alice said cluelessly…she was just trying to break the obvious tension in the air

    “Huh? I don’t have a granddaughter!; I only have a grandson David?” Mr Porter replied quickly

    Bette walked into the room just as Mr Porter said that sentence, her face first registered shock…then hurt.. but quickly her temperature rose…

    “Daddy! – If you ever say anything like that again you’ll only have Kit and David because I’ll no longer be your daughter”

    “Uh Oh..Maybe we should get going guys? Meet you two at Tabboo later eh Bette?” Shane said diplomatically

    “Okay Guys, we’ll see you in a while..and sorry and thanks” Bette said softly appreciating her friend’s tact

    The gang left leaving only Bette, Tina and Melvin

    “What about you Miss Kennard? Are you going to have some manners and follow your cronies out the door, and let me speak to my daughter in private?

    “Dad I’m warning you…” Bette’s voice was rising, but the blonde cut in

    “Actually I will go…I’ll let you and your father talk” Tina said in a hurt tone

    “Tee…Baby.. Don’t go?” Bette almost whispered

    “Babe as much as I love you…I’m not staying around here to be insulted…I took enough of your (looking directly at Melvin) put downs the first time around. I will no longer tolerate your rudeness…after all civility costs nothing”

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    2. Love this Bette this should have been done yrs earlier. Lets see how fast Melvin changes his mind. Tina has taken and not she knows that Bette loves her. thanks

    3. Way to go Bette. To bad it took Tina’s mother’s death and her and Mr. Kennard accepting Tibette and family before Bette finally stood up to her father.

    9. Ihave so PROUD of Bette and happy that she finally stood up to Melvin. Maybe this and his jealousy of Tina’s father’s relationship with her will bring him around. I would love for him to earn his way back into their lives (which would include a lot of growling). Now on to Taboo. PPS :o).

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