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Reconciliation Part 25
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Part 25
Helena spent a few days or evenings with Raquel and her siblings. It was a much welcomed reminder of family and made her look forward to the time she was planning with her children. Raquel offered a VIP tour of all the high point of Brazil. Some guided by her, for others she offered to arrange with the best local guide. Raquel shared that she was getting tired of all the travel and was planning to curtail a lot of her overseas modeling events. She was thirty which was just about the end of the career of most runway and cover models. She felt she needed to be closer to home to keep a grip on her family. Although she left them in the care of the best housekeepers, nannies, tutors and in the best schools, she began to realize that as the oldest, she might need to spend a little more time at home to help guide them. Money alone was not going to do the trick.
She was upset that her youngest sister Elisa, just seventeen was involved with a man probably 10 years older and whom she suspected was married. Her other sister, Izabel was pregnant at twenty and planned to marry her boyfriend. He did not seem to have any other goals in life but to be the brother-in-law to Brazil’s most famous model. Her brother, Nando had been babied and pampered by his sister’s and who for all his life was a serious honors student was now flunking all of his courses at university. Now at age 24 he had become withdrawn and moody. He became loud and angry whenever Raquel brought up the subject of his schooling or whatever was bothering him. Paulo was like another sibling for her and the one she was closest in age and to. He continued to worry her with all of his gambling and partying. She hoped he would be on some help in guiding her wayward younger brother and sisters.
To add to all of it, she did not win the coveted cover of Sports Illustrated. She felt with less traveling she was hopeful she could help get her younger siblings back on the right path and begin her acting career. She was offered several movie roles in Brazilian movies but longed for something that would make it big in the US market. She knew of a role in an upcoming movie being produced by Shaolin and hoped Helena would at least get her an audition. Helena introduced her to Tina but stayed out of any further discussion between the two.
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Funnyone I appreciate the sentiment. I look forward to Eastmorn’s opinion of Dylan’s state of mind. It is meant for her to be written as coming apart. She bore her sole, she took the risk, it got thrown back in her face, she took another risk, it is really hitting her hard. She is frustrated as all get up. I think she will reach into her resources and pull herself out but she is someone who we are to believe was ambivalent about her sexuality, let her boyfriend manipulate her, then ran out of town unable to admit she loves the “love of her life”. She is in a better state than she was in their first encounter. Or is she? She never sought Helena out to right the wrong, she is only back by circumstance. Yes she has come through alot and seen alot but is she emotionally equipped to deal with her own interpersonal challenges. That is my issue with Dylan…East I look forward to your thoughts on my Dylan. But honestly funnyone thanks for the comment it is food for thought.
“She is in a better state than she was in their first encounter. Or is she?” of course she isn’t at least not after everything that has transpired in her recent ‘rendezvous’ with Helena… people keep mentioning all of Dylan’s hardships and stuff ok fine that is ok cause she is the only one who has had any gull to actually disclose her freaking soul to the other… and what did Helena do… in her own admission she spat it back in Dylan’s face… yes Dylan isn’t innocent and not once has she ever attempted to claim she was… not even close… she doesn’t want Helena’s forgiveness because she realizes she has never and maybe will never deserve it… who cares if Helena grows up enough to offer it… it has to be Dylan forgiving herself enough to accept it… so yes Dylan is a complicated person…full of human errors and flaws… and Helena is above exposing herself to the one she has claimed to love… that is why I am so for them not getting together cause… well Helena opened up to a perfect stranger in Raquel about the stuff she should have had the balls to share with Dylan… Dylan didn’t want to be safe with Helena that is why she shared her sordid history… she opened up with the hopes that Helena would be honest with her… and tell her exactly how she felt… how her betrayal felt… yes she stormed off…yes she glared and gave her the eyes of death… but never of her own admission… from her own soul from her own mouth has Helena told the woman who destroyed the woman she so claims to love so deeply… yeah that is a bunch of gibberish… but for me… until Helena balls up and just fucking starts exposing herself a little she will be a spoiled selfish person… JC
Strong emotion JC. When I said first encounter, I meant first LWord encounter 2 years ago. Not first Squirly-whirly encounter. So is she a better person in Squirly world than she was in L-word. we certainly know more about her in squirly world than in L-world….Also as far as sharing herself. Certainly Dylan went out on the limb to expose herself. But In Squirly world Helena has spent more time with Raquel than Dylan so there is more oppurtunity to let the armor down….She is actually on her third or fourth encounter with Raquel, whereas with Dylan she had one powder room visit and one night or passion….Interesting discussing these characters. Makes me try to “reconcile” then to the story
Ok Squirl, I started reading Rau’s comment and slamed on the breaks. Here is the deal, I read then I comment then I check out your othe comments otherwise I might be influnced by others. First of all I was having a nice mellow read and then that dumb bitXXX Dylan went over Chelsea’s. Now Dylan is not at all hard to look at and we’ve seen her bust a move or two and I’m thinking all she wanted was a little relief so why the hell Chelsea? The chick has no self esteam but she dose have feelings, can we cut her loose? yuch,Yuck, YUCK get it, I don’t like that girl. Now if I am not mistaken, Dylan was “home” where ever that is, I am guessing somewhat close to WeHo? So So what, she had to finish her business but now it’s really a choice what she dose and she still decides to chase around the world and not around her own brain. Meanwhile our very confused very emotionaly shakey very I like fun, funs good, Helena is going to trott her babies off to the land of wonderlust and beauty to be enchanted by wonderful folklore, acient ruins, history galore and gorgous people to tell all with tales that young and old alike would droole over BUT in the end, looks like tastes like candy Raquel will not only be not much more than acting tour guide because of the children but will also be so very busy with her own family that the flameing f fest is going to burn out. Boohoo, but alas, I did see that coming. Really want to know whar I think, Dylan needs to get a hair on her ass, a bucket of courage & a streek of steadfast cause she is going to need it, Helena needs to chill out w/kids and sweet Raqus till the pop rocks fizzel, then go run her club, flirt with her friends (thats fun and good for all as long as everyone knows what is going on) and if Dylan has any indurance maybe that story will work out. Huummmm subject to change w/each chapter, thats your fault Squirl. You have a wonderfull evening with yours, Thank you, Md
Oui! These girls are something else….and that dag on Bette!! As much as I love Belena, please tell me that you are not about to turn up the heat on that pair! Thank you so much for telling us Raquel’s age…don’t hit me…but it does make me take her a bit more seriously…between that and the love, concern and support for her family, I’m thinking she may not be as flighty as I initially assumed. While I understand the comments about Helena and Dylan behaving immaturely, the truth is that matters of the heart are delicate…and love and pain can make you fragile and irrational. I’m glad that both Helena and Dylan are reaching out to each other and eventhough I feel Dylan’s pain…how I wish she would not continue to complicate her life…ameliorating her hurt by using Chelsea and wondering why Chelsea is behaving like a stalker…she is leading the girl on! I would love to see both of them (Helena and Dylan) take a pause, get some resolution and heal before they attempt to move into anything with anyone. I’m sure Dylan’s plan is to distract herself with work…but I think Helena should put on the breaks with Raquel. I’m beginning to feel that Raquel is sincere and while I think Helena is as well, she is emotionally distracted and may end up hurting Raquel. Eventhough she has had less encounters with Dylan…clearly they are connected beyond understanding and need to find a way to either embrace or release each other.
ooohhhhhoooooaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh, looks like little bro’s a little bent up there. Breath buddy, just breath, it’ll be ok I promiss, maybe that chick from the jail will come back:))))). Look what you started Squirl, hope your proud of your self young lady. Love it, Thank you, Md
I feel like I got beat up on this one…First thing. NO BELENA, all just playful flirting. I can’t help myself but NO BELENA this story.Second…Everybody is right…Ha Ha Ha..I actually think Dylan is doing Chelsea a disservice but Dylan needed “comfort food”, she needed to be taken care of. Poor Chelsea believes Dylan loves her. Perhaps Dylan does. She’s kept her around. Chelsea does need to put Dylan out but she loves her. Sad one there, but we ALL know a Chelsea who puts up with the using lover. Third…Dylan is living in the outskirts of Atlanta, GA…She is no where near Weho.I will certainly need security before this story is through and we haven’t gotten to the hard stuff yet. JUST KIDDING!!!East where are you sweetie?
ahhhh I’m so so sorry Squirly… I’m sorry for my strong reaction… Bad JC Bad… I realize that Helena has only had that one brief encounter with Dylan within your ‘world’ but for me Dylan in that one brief encounter bared her soul where as Helena gave her nothing… so Dylan has nothing to hope for… if Helena finally feels she can express herself and be happy then please stay with Raquel… she will take care of her… she has been fair to her… and in the end I think that Raquel is falling in ‘love’ with her… but Helena has to be honest with herself cause much like Chelsea fell for Dylan and then Dylan hurt Chelsea… Helena will probably end up hurting Raquel… I guess turnabout is fair play in the end… Dylan needs to move on and find a way to ‘forgive’ herself before she even remotely considers trying to regain Helena’s forgiveness… that is all I was trying to say… once again I am sorry… hugs, JC
oh plz let Helena fall for & stay with Raquel; the whole Dylan thing is fraught with angst and I am so anxious for Helena to have fun and laughter in her life whereas with Dylan she’s always down except when they fuck…but how long does that last? Plzzzzzz Raquel not Dylan…& what’s with the the Bette flirting? That’s a bit dangerous considering Bette’s track record.
Hello My Passionate Friend… hmmmmm… I’m thinking that Helena needs to get off the Yo-Yo trip she is on and just settle… either take the bull by the horn and find Dylan… I find it funny that she knows or seems to know exactly where Dylan is or where she might be… keeping tabs… I think she is pretty much setting up house with Raquel and if she doesn’t curb her selfishness she will end up hurting Raquel in much the same way that Dylan has hurt her… allowed her to fall for her completely only to realize that there is no future… as for Bette flirting that is nothing serious in my mind… Bette is a flirt… but in the end she will always end up with the one she deserves… so for Bette its controlled she knows she does it… Tina knows she does it and well it seemed that both Tina and Bette where ready to remedy the situation… I love how Raquel’s family has fallen into the patterns of the rich life style… where money seems to buy complacency… I loved Dylan’s line; “Sorry, it was a job I didn’t get.” That was a classic line… because at the end of the day can you blame her… Raquel is everywhere and at this moment; “She’s with Raquel.” So Helena go to Brazil… bond… make family… and Dylan find another project to sink your passion into… find yourself something to tame the wild beast in your pants and just try to move on and move forward… find love somewhere… and with someone who will give you the time of day… and will stay or at least ask you to stay so you can resolve your shit… even if at the end of the day you leave each other… Dylan deserves someone who is willing to talk to her when she needs it and not when they need it… you are so freaking awesome my passionate friend… every single word is charged with your incredible talents… much love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and the ever talented and inspiring Eunichick)
I agree with Rau. Please let it be Helena & Raquel.
so what will Dylan do when she recieves Helena’s message?Im really curious.
I’m fine with letting you decide how the story goes, but I find both Helena and Dylan too old to behaving like school girls regarding each other, especially Dylan. She just somehow, thoughtlessly, magically ends up at Chelsea’s? That’s too weak for words. This is a woman who dealt with tough circumstances growing up and continues to deal with them in her career. If she keeps blubbering on the plane, the stewardess is going to cut her off and it’s a long way to Somalia.
This chapter was posted so soon after the last that I didn’t get to comment. Like most of my old cronies over at RSU, I’m all about Dylena. Yes, I know that Raquel is a hot hottie, but there is something about Dylan that is so alluring. She has soul. She has so much depth. She is so complicated and difficult to pin down. Perhaps that is what draws Helena to her. I don’t care about the problems the had/have. You can’t have a good relationship without enduring hardships and obstacles. If they truly love eachother, they will find a way to get past it, forgive and heal. No, it won’t be easy, but anything worth doing is never easy.
I agree with funnyone but it goes for the both of them, they need to grow up instead of going to find a substitute for each other in Chelsea/Raquel. They are constantly whining about how one hurts the other but have they already about how they are hurting or going to hurt the person they’re with now? That’s just to crazy for words, just call each other, talk and get it over with either you wnat to be together or you don’t , that’s my point of view.